Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免重复和错误表达，同时使句子更流畅自然。

例: Yes, our school prohibits students from using mobile phones in class because they believe phones can distract students and affect their concentration.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议直接回答问题并提供具体理由，避免重复和模糊表达。

例: I think having a balanced number of rules is important because too many rules can make students feel restricted and stressed.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达观点并提供具体细节，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, in high school, my Chinese teacher was very dedicated. He always prepared lessons carefully and helped students improve their skills.

提案: 回答内容混乱且语法错误严重，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

例: I prefer fewer rules at school because too many rules can make students feel restricted and reduce their motivation.

提案: 回答表达不清且语法错误多，建议用完整句子表达观点，并具体说明严格老师的影响。

例: Yes, I had a strict teacher who wanted every student to perform well academically. Thanks to her strictness, I improved a lot in Chinese and started to enjoy the subject.

提案: 回答较为完整，但表达不够流畅，建议使用更自然的连接词和句式，使表达更连贯。

例: I would like to teach in a school with fewer rules because students would have more freedom to be creative and might enjoy subjects more. However, some basic rules are necessary to maintain order.

× Yes of course our school will prohibit student to use mobile phone in class because live think mobile phone will dis dis travel their own concentration to all class.

✓ Yes, of course, our school will prohibit students from using mobile phones in class because I think mobile phones will distract their concentration in class.

这里'student'应该用复数形式'students'，因为指的是所有学生。'mobile phone'也应使用复数形式'mobile phones'，表示多部手机。动词搭配中，'prohibit'后应接介词'from'加动名词形式，故用'prohibit students from using'。此外，句中'dis dis travel'应为'distract'，意为分散注意力。

× Yes of course our school will prohibit student to use mobile phone in class because live think mobile phone will dis dis travel their own concentration to all class.

✓ Yes, of course, our school will prohibit students from using mobile phones in class because I think mobile phones will distract their concentration in class.

动词'prohibit'后应接介词'from'，表示禁止某人做某事，故应为'prohibit students from using'。另外，'in class'表示在课堂上，正确使用介词。

× I've seen today we are balancing the stated. That's great, that's great because too much rules makes them feel.

✓ I've seen today we are balancing the state. That's great, that's great because too many rules make them feel.

'rules'是可数名词，修饰词应使用'too many'而非'too much'。动词'make'应与复数主语'rules'一致，故用'make'而非'makes'。

× I've seen today we are balancing the stated. That's great, that's great because too much rules makes them feel.

✓ I've seen today we are balancing the state. That's great, that's great because too many rules make them feel.

'rules'为复数形式，需用复数修饰词'too many'，且动词与复数主语一致用'make'。

× Yes, I'm from high school. My Chinese teacher is really very de dedicated teacher very well. He he will.

✓ Yes, I'm from high school. My Chinese teacher is a really dedicated teacher. He is very good.

'de dedicated'应为'dedicated'，且需要冠词'a'来修饰单数可数名词'teacher'。'very well'用法错误，应改为形容词短语'very good'来描述老师。

× Add divert to favorites in school if there are too much rooms, students might feel restricted and those motivation and Roosevelt created so I think favor roses with exactly.

✓ I prefer fewer rules in school. If there are too many rules, students might feel restricted and lose motivation, so I think fewer rules are better.

'rooms'应为'rules'，且'rules'为可数名词，修饰词应为'too many'而非'too much'。句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。

× Add divert to favorites in school if there are too much rooms, students might feel restricted and those motivation and Roosevelt created so I think favor roses with exactly.

✓ I prefer fewer rules in school. If there are too many rules, students might feel restricted and lose motivation, so I think fewer rules are better.

'rules'为可数名词，修饰词应使用'too many'而非'too much'。

× Yes, my children teach her really strong too, because they want to every student have great academic performance. Thank you for restricted and improve a lot in Chinese and enjoying the.

✓ Yes, my Chinese teacher is really strict too, because they want every student to have great academic performance. Thanks to the strictness, I improved a lot in Chinese and enjoyed it.

'children teach her'应为'Chinese teacher'。'every student'后应加不定式'to have'。句子结构需调整以表达完整意思。

× Yes, my children teach her really strong too, because they want to every student have great academic performance. Thank you for restricted and improve a lot in Chinese and enjoying the.

✓ Yes, my Chinese teacher is really strict too, because they want every student to have great academic performance. Thanks to the strictness, I improved a lot in Chinese and enjoyed it.

'Thank you for restricted'用法错误，应为'Thanks to the strictness'，表示感谢严格的教学。

× Yes, my children teach her really strong too, because they want to every student have great academic performance. Thank you for restricted and improve a lot in Chinese and enjoying the.

✓ Yes, my Chinese teacher is really strict too, because they want every student to have great academic performance. Thanks to the strictness, I improved a lot in Chinese and enjoyed it.

句中表达不完整，需补充完整句子以表达感谢严格教学带来的进步。

× I want to ask the teacher in your room for your school because students in there have more freedom, they can be more creative and uh, maybe they will enjoy subject better. However, physical rules are necessary for students.

✓ I want to be a teacher in your school because students there have more freedom, they can be more creative and maybe they will enjoy subjects better. However, physical rules are necessary for students.

'ask the teacher in your room for your school'表达不当，应为'I want to be a teacher in your school'。'students in there'应为'students there'。'enjoy subject better'应为'enjoy subjects better'，主语复数，名词复数。