Rules— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are there any rules for students at your school?
受験者
Yes, they are have any rules for students In my school we don't do this and we must to do what the teachers see for me they are have a morals for they.
試験官
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
受験者
Yes, I think the students would been the most better than the rulers. We we are have a discipline and we are standing to better and better than it because it do. They are discipline and they're good.
試験官
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
受験者
Yes, I have ever had a really decided the teacher, uh her name is Maria and she is a very head really did this dog she saw they are more rueless to do it and the more stronger she.
試験官
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
受験者
Now I didn't prefer to have more or of rulers, I didn't like them and I think that we should to have any many rules please.
試験官
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
受験者
Does have I have ever had a real strict, uh, strict teacher? Umm, her name is Maria and she's very, very, very strict teacher. She have a more rules for them and she ever, uh, agree, uh, angry and so the morals.
試験官
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
受験者
Now I think that I would I work in the the works as a teacher to so I stand the school is not disably and they are very funny not.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
スコア: 30.0提案: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и грамматически правильным. Используйте простые предложения, чтобы ясно выразить мысль, например, начните с утверждения о наличии правил, затем приведите примеры.
例: Yes, there are rules at my school. For example, students must be respectful to teachers and complete their homework on time.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
スコア: 25.0提案: Ответ должен быть более ясным и логичным. Используйте связующие слова, чтобы объяснить, почему дисциплина важна, и избегайте повторений.
例: Yes, I believe students benefit from more rules because they help maintain discipline, which improves learning and behavior.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
スコア: 20.0提案: Ответ должен быть понятным и содержать конкретные детали о преподавателе. Избегайте ошибок и используйте простые предложения для описания учителя.
例: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher named Maria. She always helped students and worked hard to make lessons interesting.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
スコア: 20.0提案: Ответ должен быть грамматически правильным и четко выражать мнение. Используйте простые фразы для объяснения своих предпочтений.
例: I prefer fewer rules at school because too many rules can be stressful and limit freedom.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
スコア: 25.0提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Опишите учителя и его строгость с конкретными примерами.
例: Yes, I had a very strict teacher named Maria. She enforced many rules and expected students to follow them carefully.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
スコア: 15.0提案: Ответ должен быть понятным и логичным. Объясните свое мнение о работе в школе без правил, используя простые предложения.
例: I would not like to work in a school without rules because rules help maintain order and support learning.
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