Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и не совсем естественен. Следует избегать ошибок с отрицаниями (например, "must don't"), а также использовать более точные выражения и связки для плавности речи.

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, we have to wear a school uniform because it helps students focus on their studies. Also, running in the corridors is not allowed to ensure safety.

提案: Ответ слишком общий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется использовать более разнообразную лексику и конкретизировать причины, а также избегать тавтологии.

例: I believe that having more rules can benefit students because it encourages discipline, which helps them concentrate better and achieve higher grades.

提案: Ответ понятен, но содержит ошибки в использовании артиклей и наречий. Следует использовать правильные формы слов и добавить связующие слова для улучшения связности.

例: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in ninth grade. She explained the material very well, so I was able to understand the subjects clearly.

提案: Ответ слишком короткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует расширить ответ, объяснить причины и использовать правильные формы глаголов.

例: I prefer to have more rules at school because they help me stay disciplined and improve my academic performance.

提案: Ответ содержит множество грамматических ошибок и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена, избегать повторений и структурировать ответ более логично.

例: Yes, in seventh grade I had a very strict teacher. He gave us a lot of material but didn't explain it well. We also had many homework assignments, and I often didn't understand what to do, which made it a difficult time for me.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки в словах и грамматике, а также нечеткую формулировку. Следует использовать правильные слова, грамматические конструкции и более четко выражать мысли.

例: No, I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a school without rules because it would be very challenging to manage students without any discipline.

× Yes, students in our school have some rules. For example, we need to wear only school uniform because it helps them to concentrate on where study.

✓ Yes, students in our school have some rules. For example, we need to wear only the school uniform because it helps us to concentrate on our studies.

The pronouns 'them' and 'where' are incorrectly used. 'Them' should be 'us' to refer to the students speaking, and 'where study' is incorrect; it should be 'our studies' to indicate what we concentrate on.

× Also we must don't run in the corridors of our school.

✓ Also, we must not run in the corridors of our school.

The phrase 'must don't' is incorrect. The correct negative form with 'must' is 'must not' or 'mustn't'.

× In my opinion, there are a lot of benefits from more rules for students because it can help them to concentrate on their study and have only good marks.

✓ In my opinion, there are many benefits from more rules for students because they can help them concentrate on their studies and get only good marks.

'A lot of' is acceptable but 'many' is more appropriate with countable 'benefits'. Also, 'it can help them' should be 'they can help them' to agree with plural 'benefits'. 'Have only good marks' is awkward; 'get only good marks' is better.

× Yes, in the ninth grade I had very dedicated teacher.

✓ Yes, in the ninth grade I had a very dedicated teacher.

The indefinite article 'a' is missing before 'very dedicated teacher'.

× She explained the material very good, so I understood her subjects really well.

✓ She explained the material very well, so I understood her subjects really well.

'Good' is an adjective but here an adverb is needed to modify 'explained', so 'well' is correct.

× I think I want to have more rules at school because it will discipline me and have good marks.

✓ I think I want to have more rules at school because they will discipline me and help me get good marks.

'It will discipline me and have good marks' is incorrect. 'Rules' is plural, so 'they will' is correct. Also, 'have good marks' is incorrect; 'help me get good marks' is better.

× Yes, in the 7th grade I have really strict teacher because he gave us a lot of material and don't and didn't explain it at all.

✓ Yes, in the 7th grade I had a really strict teacher because he gave us a lot of material and didn't explain it at all.

'I have' should be past tense 'I had' to match the past context. 'Don't and didn't explain' is incorrect; only 'didn't explain' is needed.

× Also we always had a lot of home tasks and I didn't understand what I need to do and it was very bad time.

✓ Also, we always had a lot of homework and I didn't understand what I needed to do and it was a very bad time.

'Home tasks' is incorrect; 'homework' is the correct term. 'What I need to do' should be past tense 'what I needed to do' to match past context. 'Very bad time' needs an article 'a' before it.

× No, I won't like to work as a teacher in rural free school because in my opinion it's really big responsibility because pupils don't have any rules what can discipline them, so it is very difficult for teachers.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because, in my opinion, it's a really big responsibility since pupils don't have any rules that can discipline them, so it is very difficult for teachers.

'Won't like' is incorrect; 'wouldn't like' is the correct conditional form. 'Rural free school' is a typo; it should be 'rule-free school'. 'It's really big responsibility' needs the article 'a'. 'What can discipline them' should be 'that can discipline them'.