Rules— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer addresses the question but could be more concise and clearer. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, such as 'one of the most important rule was' should be 'one of the most important rules is'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, there are several rules at my school, such as maintaining discipline and being punctual. One important rule is that students are not allowed to leave the school premises during class time, which helps ensure their safety.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically.

例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because some students tend to ignore existing ones. Therefore, additional rules could help maintain discipline and create a better learning environment.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and minor errors. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be careful with word choice, for example, 'mathematic teacher' should be 'math teacher'.

例: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in high school named Mr. John Don. He was a math teacher, and I really admired his teaching methods because they made learning enjoyable and easy to understand.

提案: Your answer expresses your opinion but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'authors as well'. Try to use clearer sentences and linking words to explain your reasons logically.

例: I prefer to have fewer rules at school, as long as they are strictly enforced by teachers and students. Too many rules can be stressful and confusing, so it's better to focus on a few important ones.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes. Please complete your sentences and avoid confusion in pronouns and subjects. Use linking words to explain how the teacher was strict.

例: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in high school who was also the headmaster. She enforced rules strictly and made sure we followed our routines carefully.

提案: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid filler words. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

例: No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it would be very challenging to manage students who might cross boundaries without clear rules.

× And one of the most important rule was that no student can go outside during their class premises and it's really a significant rule for students.

✓ And one of the most important rules was that no student can go outside during their class premises and it's really a significant rule for students.

The word 'rule' should be plural 'rules' because it refers to one among several rules, so the plural form is appropriate here.

× And I really like uh and enjoy as well his, uh, the technique of learning.

✓ And I really like and enjoy as well his technique of teaching.

The phrase 'technique of learning' is incorrect because the teacher is the one teaching, so it should be 'technique of teaching'. Also, 'uh' fillers should be omitted for clarity.

× It's from our high school and he the teacher is our head masters and she is just really strict and whenever we try to escape from our routine or then she is.

✓ It's from our high school and the teacher is our headmaster and she is just really strict and whenever we try to escape from our routine, she is there.

The sentence has pronoun confusion and incorrect noun forms. 'He the teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'the teacher'. 'Head masters' should be singular 'headmaster'. The pronoun 'she is' at the end is incomplete and needs clarification.

× No, I wouldn't like to work as a teacher, uh, in a rule free school because it is a very challenging work to do and sometimes students are really cross their boundaries and it's really challenging for us to of the them for their rules.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it is very challenging work and sometimes students really cross their boundaries and it's really challenging for us to enforce the rules on them.

The phrase 'cross their boundaries' is correct but 'to of the them for their rules' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'to enforce the rules on them'. Also, 'rule free' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free'.