Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more grammatical, concise and relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear words (e.g., 'Gopi's gossip').

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. It helps me relax after studying, and I often feel refreshed because we share funny stories and support each other.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence about common topics, then provide specific examples and use linking words for coherence. Correct verb forms and avoid filler words.

例: We usually talk about our studies and upcoming exams. For example, we discuss revision plans, share tips for assignments, and sometimes ask classmates how they solved particular problems.

提案: Answer directly which you prefer, then give reasons with specific details and linking words. Keep it concise and finish your thought. Avoid vague phrases like 'nonsense' without examples.

例: I prefer talking one-on-one rather than in a group because group conversations can be noisy and off-topic. In a one-on-one chat I can have deeper, more meaningful conversations and feel more heard.

提案: State your preference clearly, then explain two specific reasons using linking words. Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'judge a person’s reaction' or 'I prefer face-to-face because I can read body language').

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and body language. Also, I find it more sincere, whereas social media often feels superficial and staged.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and then explain specific reasons for arguments, using linking words and concise examples. Avoid repetition and hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'they gossip about classmates').

例: Yes, occasionally I argue with my friends, usually when they gossip about others or give unhelpful advice about exams. For instance, I once argued with a friend who spread rumours about a classmate.

× Yeah, I like chatting with my friend because I free time I talking with my friend and I feel very fresh and relaxed to feel other Gopi's gossip with my friends.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because when I have free time I talk with them and I feel refreshed and relaxed when I hear my friends' gossip.

The sentence has multiple structure and agreement issues: 'my friend' should be plural to match general statement (plural noun) — this is a singular/plural and subject consistency problem. 'I free time I talking' is incorrect word order and verb form; it should be 'when I have free time I talk' (correct conjunction and present tense). 'Feel very fresh' is unidiomatic; use 'feel refreshed'. 'Other Gopi's gossip' is unclear and likely incorrect possessive; use 'my friends' gossip' with correct possessive and plural. Suggestion: break into shorter clauses with correct word order: subject + verb + object, use 'have' for possession of time, and use simple present tense for habitual actions.

× So I usually chatting with my friend like later to study and practically examination and sometime I feel a very chatting with my friend.

✓ So I usually chat with my friends about studying, practical exams, and sometimes I enjoy chatting with them.

'Usually chatting' is wrong because after adverb 'usually' the base verb 'chat' is required for habitual actions (use simple present). 'With my friend' should be plural for general habits. 'Like later to study and practically examination' has incorrect prepositions and noun forms; use 'about studying' and 'practical exams'. 'I feel a very chatting' is ungrammatical; use 'I enjoy chatting'. Recommendation: use simple present for routines, correct gerund forms ('studying'), plural nouns ('exams'), and appropriate verbs ('enjoy').

× So in personal like talking to classmate, uh, students and how to do this work? How to do this?

✓ Personally, I talk to classmates and other students about how to do the work.

'In personal like' is incorrect; use adverb 'Personally'. 'Talking to classmate' needs plural 'classmates' and consistent noun phrase. 'How to do this work? How to do this?' is fragmented; combine into a single clause 'about how to do the work'. Suggestion: use correct adverb, plural nouns for generality, and form full declarative sentences instead of fragments.

× So I do not prefer to group because sometime group are very talking about nonsense chatting with the on on with to someone.

✓ I do not prefer groups because sometimes groups talk a lot about nonsense.

'Prefer to group' is incorrect; use 'prefer groups' (noun) or 'to be in a group'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'Group are' should be 'groups are' or better 'groups talk' for natural phrasing; subject-verb agreement and plurality must match. 'Talking about nonsense chatting with the on on with to someone' is ungrammatical and redundant; simplify to 'talk a lot about nonsense'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, correct adverbs, and simplify clauses.

× So I feel lonely to someone chatting with my friend because in personal I.

✓ I sometimes feel lonely when chatting with friends because I am a private person.

Original is incomplete and unclear. 'Feel lonely to someone' is incorrect preposition and structure; use 'feel lonely when' to indicate condition. 'Because in personal I' is fragmentary; likely means 'because I am a private person'. Suggestion: complete the clause, use correct conjunctions ('when') and adjective phrases ('a private person').

× So I mostly talk to about my face to face because I judge I first time first.

✓ I mostly prefer face-to-face conversations because I can judge people at first meeting.

'Talk to about my face to face' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer face-to-face conversations'. 'I judge I first time first' is incorrect word order and tense; correct to 'I can judge people at first meeting' or 'when I first meet them'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for preference, 'face-to-face' as adjective, and correct phrase for initial impressions.

× I judge the people how to do this work and this behavior.

✓ I judge how people do their work and behave.

'I judge the people how to do this work and this behavior' has incorrect word order and pronoun use. Use 'how people do their work and behave' to express evaluation of both actions and behavior. Suggestion: place 'how' before the clause and use possessive pronoun 'their' for 'work'.

× And I do not like social media because it is very I don't like the show.

✓ I do not like social media because it feels too showy.

'It is very I don't like the show' is ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is social media seems like a show; use adjective 'showy'. 'Feel' or 'seems' better than 'is' for opinion. Suggestion: use appropriate adjective and concise structure: 'I don't like social media because it seems too showy.'

× Yes, sometime I argue with my friend because uh, uh, they are nonsense gossip with me on, uh, their classmate, friends and schools.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because they gossip about me with their classmates and other friends at school.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb). 'Argue with my friend' should be plural 'friends' for generality. 'They are nonsense gossip with me on' is incorrect structure; use 'they gossip about me'. 'Their classmate, friends and schools' should be 'their classmates and other friends at school' with correct plural forms and prepositions. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, plural nouns for general statements, and correct prepositions ('about', 'with', 'at').

× So sometimes I argue with me because sometime, uh, they did not uh, suggest me on examination, uh, assignment.

✓ Sometimes I argue with them because they did not give me suggestions on exams or assignments.

'Argue with me' is wrong reflexive/pronoun usage; should be 'argue with them' (incorrect pronoun). 'They did not suggest me on' is incorrect verb and object order; use 'did not give me suggestions on' or 'did not help me with'. 'Examination, assignment' should be plural or consistent: 'exams or assignments'. Suggestion: use correct object pronouns, appropriate verbs ('give suggestions', 'help with'), and plural forms for general references.