Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 语法和发音需改正，句子要更简洁自然；注意主谓一致（do like，而不是 do likes）；避免重复信息，用一到两句清晰表达习惯并举一两个具体例子。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I often spend my free time talking with them, for example when we walk together or after a meal at a restaurant.

提案: 回答含糊且口头语多，需具体化细节并使用连词使表达连贯；给出两三个具体话题并说明原因或举例。

例: We usually talk about everyday things, such as our courses, upcoming assignments, and mutual friends. For example, last week we discussed a difficult lecture and how to prepare for the exam.

提案: 结构基本清晰但可以更直接并扩展理由；先给出明确偏好，再用连接词解释原因或比较两种情况。

例: I don't mind either, but I prefer one-on-one conversations when I want to discuss personal matters, while group chats are better for socialising and sharing jokes.

提案: 回答思路正确但语法和词汇使用不够准确（e.g., 'I can'不明确，'convene'用词不当）；简洁表达原因并给具体例子说明表情和肢体语言的重要性。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and body language. For example, in person I can tell if someone is upset even when they say they're fine.

提案: 回答混乱且自相矛盾，包含太多停顿和重复；需要先明确频率（yes/no），然后解释原因并举例，避免含糊不清。

例: Yes, sometimes we argue, usually when we have different opinions or when someone's attitude is rude. For instance, we once argued about who should pay the bill after a meal.

× Yeah, I do likes chatting with my friends and I spend a lot of my spare time with my friends just chatting.

✓ Yeah, I do like chatting with my friends and I spend a lot of my spare time with my friends just chatting.

句中“do likes”动词形式错误。助动词 do 后面应接动词原形，且主语 I 与动词保持一致。建议记住：I/You/We/They 与动词原形（不加 -s），He/She/It 在一般现在时主动态加 -s。此处应改为 “do like”。

× And sometimes we will just walk on the road and we begin to chat with each other and sometimes we just sit in a restaurant after meal and we chat with each other.

✓ And sometimes we just walk on the road and begin to chat with each other, and sometimes we just sit in a restaurant after a meal and chat with each other.

句子时态和用词不一致：一方面使用 will（表示将来），另一方面使用 begin（一般现在时），且后半句缺少冠词“a”。根据上下文表达习惯，应使用一般现在时描述习惯性动作，同时“after meal”需加不定冠词为“after a meal”。建议统一用一般现在时并注意冠词用法。

× We don't chat about something really specific, but we just, uh, always talk about the things that around us, uh, like the course we take or some friends around us.

✓ We don't chat about anything really specific, but we just always talk about the things that are around us, like the courses we take or some friends around us.

存在代词与限定词使用错误：否定句中应使用 anything 而不是 something；“the things that around us”缺少系动词，应为 “the things that are around us”。此外“course”若指多门课应用复数“courses”。建议注意否定句搭配和系动词的存在。

× Actually I think both is OK for me, but I think for some other people it depends on if they are introverted or extroverted.

✓ Actually I think both are OK for me, but I think for some other people it depends on whether they are introverted or extroverted.

主谓一致问题：主语“both”为复数，谓语应使用复数动词“are”。另外“depends on if”在正式用法中常用“depends on whether”。建议注意复数主语与动词一致，并用 whether 表示是否的条件从句。

× Actually, I can. I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see more clearly and with their expressions or their posture and I can tell the attitude they want to convene with others.

✓ Actually, I can. I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see more clearly their expressions and posture, and I can tell the attitude they want to convey to others.

用词错误与结构不当：“with their expressions or their posture” 前的介词用法多余，应直接并列名词；“convene”用错，正确应为“convey”（表达/传达）；“the attitude they want to convey to others” 更通顺。建议注意动词搭配和介词的必要性。

× Yeah, sometimes, MMM not uh, I argue with my friends, umm, never because they, uh, we, we, we hold different opinions, but uh, I will argue with them because their attitude is bad.

✓ Yeah, sometimes — not never — I argue with my friends because we hold different opinions, but I will argue more if their attitude is bad.

句子结构混乱且自相矛盾：原句“not ... never” 表达不清，反复停顿打断连贯性；“they, we, we, we hold different opinions” 主语混用。根据语意应表达“有时会争论，因为意见不同；如果态度不好就会争吵更激烈”。建议去掉多余停顿词，理顺主语，简化表达并保持逻辑一致。