Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and add one specific example with logical connectors. Use past/present appropriately and reduce fragments.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every day during breaks. It makes me feel relaxed and often I learn something new from them. For example, when there is local news about our campus, a friend usually texts me updates and asks how things are going, so we can discuss it together.

提案: Give a concise topic sentence and add two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar (articles, plurals) and avoid repeating words like 'usually'.

例: I usually talk with my friends about our daily lives and university matters. For instance, we often share what happened during the day, and we also discuss study-related issues such as class schedules and upcoming assignments.

提案: Begin with a clear preference statement and support it with specific reasons linked logically. Correct awkward phrases and eliminate redundancy. Keep within 2–3 supporting sentences.

例: I prefer chatting in a group because it exposes me to different viewpoints and new ideas. For example, when I face a problem, several friends suggest various solutions, which helps me choose the best option.

提案: State your preference clearly and give two linked specific benefits. Avoid repeating 'face to face' and fix grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make it coherent.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it strengthens relationships and creates pleasant memories. For example, meeting in person allows us to read body language, laugh together, and build closer bonds than online chats usually do.

提案: Clarify the intended meaning first (you probably mean you don't like arguing). Use a clear topic sentence, explain when disagreements happen, give one specific example, and fix many grammar and coherence errors. Keep sentences short and logical.

例: I don't like arguing with friends, but sometimes we disagree over opinions. For example, once we argued about a group project deadline because some members wanted to finish early while others preferred more time; we eventually resolved it by compromising on a new schedule.

× Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every day during my break time.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every day during my break.

Reduce redundancy: 'break time' is acceptable but 'break' is more natural. This is a style improvement rather than a strict grammar error; maintain present simple for habitual action.

× I believe that chatting would make me feel enjoy and I can actually get something new from my friend.

✓ I believe that chatting makes me feel happy and I can actually learn something new from my friends.

'Would make me feel enjoy' is incorrect: 'enjoy' is a verb, not an adjective. Use 'happy' or 'enjoyed'. Also habitual general truth uses present simple 'makes'. 'Something new' from plural 'friends' requires plural. 'Learn' fits context better than 'get'.

× For example when there is a new that related to my society, my friend always text me like how is how's it going there so.

✓ For example, when there is news related to my community, my friends always text me saying 'How is it going there?'.

Several issues: 'a new' should be 'news' or 'a news item'; 'related to my society' is unnatural — use 'related to my community'; subject-verb agreement: 'my friends always text me'; direct speech should be quoted or paraphrased: 'text me saying "How is it going there?"' Use present simple for habitual actions.

× Well, I usually chat about variety of topic to my friends but usually we always talk about our day or sometime maybe study because right now we are studying in university so we actually chat to each other about some schedule or.

✓ Well, I usually chat about a variety of topics with my friends; usually we talk about our day or sometimes about studies because right now we are studying at university, so we actually chat with each other about schedules.

Prepositions and articles: 'about a variety of topics' requires article and plural 'topics'; use 'with my friends' not 'to'; 'sometimes' instead of 'sometime'; 'studies' better than 'study' here; 'studying at university' is correct preposition; 'about schedules' plural and 'chat with' is consistent.

× Where I prefer to chat with a group of people because I believe that chatting with many people would allow me to get new idea.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I believe that chatting with many people allows me to get new ideas.

Remove 'Where' which is incorrect; tense/modal: use present simple 'allows' for general truth instead of 'would allow'; 'new idea' should be plural 'new ideas'.

× It's such a new perspective to my life.

✓ It gives me a new perspective on life.

'Such a new perspective to my life' is awkward; use 'gives me a new perspective on life' which is natural English and keeps present simple.

× Additionally, they can actually help me to solve some problem that I cannot think about it.

✓ Additionally, they can help me solve problems that I cannot solve on my own.

Avoid redundant 'to' after 'help' in this structure ('help me solve'); 'some problem' should be plural 'problems' or 'a problem'; remove redundant 'it' at the end; clarify 'cannot think about it' to 'cannot solve on my own'.

× Well, I prefer to communicate face to face rather than using social media because I'm a face to face.

✓ Well, I prefer to communicate face to face rather than through social media because I'm a face-to-face person.

'Rather than using social media' should be parallel 'rather than through social media'; 'I'm a face to face' is incomplete — 'face-to-face person' is correct noun phrase.

× Communication would strengthen our relationship.

✓ Face-to-face communication strengthens our relationships.

Use present simple 'strengthens' for general truth instead of conditional 'would strengthen'; 'relationship' plural 'relationships' or 'our relationship' depending on intended meaning — 'relationships' fits when speaking about multiple friends.

× I would say it will make our atmosphere more enjoyable, create a positive memory and even help you to know your friends.

✓ I would say it makes the atmosphere more enjoyable, creates positive memories and even helps you get to know your friends.

Maintain consistent present tense for general statements: 'makes', 'creates', 'helps'. Use plural 'memories' and natural phrasing 'get to know' instead of 'help you to know'.

× Well I don't prefer to have a human with my friends but when we sometime have different opinion about something we used to I would say when there was something wrong that and then my friend have one side opinion and then I have one other opinion.

✓ Well, I don't prefer to argue with my friends, but sometimes we have different opinions about something. If something goes wrong, my friends may have one opinion and I may have another.

Many issues: 'have a human with my friends' is incorrect — likely 'argue'; use 'sometimes' not 'sometime'; plural 'opinions'; tense consistency and clarity: use present simple for habitual situations. Use 'may' for possibility. Also correct subject-verb agreement 'my friends have' not 'my friend have'.

× So it made me feel like you.

✓ So that makes me feel hurt or uncomfortable.

Unclear phrase 'feel like you' is not grammatical. Use clear emotion words and present tense 'makes' for general reaction. Provide concrete suggestion: 'hurt' or 'uncomfortable' depending on intended meaning.