Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子语法错误较多，表达不够简洁自然。回答应直接用主题句开头，随后用1–2个具体理由支持，注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复。练习时把复杂句拆成短句并使用连词 like 'because' 或 'so' 来连接原因。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and build strong friendships. For example, talking with classmates after school makes teamwork easier and improves my mood.

提案: 内容零散且词汇不准确，缺少连贯性。应先给出主题句，然后用具体例子或具体话题支持，使用连词（for example, also, sometimes）。避免模糊表达如 'ultimate'。

例: We usually talk about hobbies and school. For example, we discuss video games, basketball and soccer, and sometimes we share opinions about teachers or upcoming exams.

提案: 回答冗长且有语法错误，逻辑重复。应先给出明确偏好（group or one-to-one），然后提供1–2个清晰原因，用连接词（because, so, however）。注意主语和动词一致。

例: I prefer chatting in a group because it's more lively and there are always several people to talk to. For example, if one friend is absent, I can still share news or talk about teachers with others.

提案: 表达不清且重复。应明确表明偏好并解释原因，使用准确词汇描述非语言交流（facial expressions, tone）。避免口语重复，保持句子简短。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read facial expressions and tone of voice, which makes feelings clearer. Social media can be useful, but it often leads to misunderstandings.

提案: 回答基本清楚但语法和用词需改进。建议先肯定或否定，再说明原因并给具体例子，最后可补充结果。注意时态和代词使用，避免重复词。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when they upset me, for example if they borrow things without asking. However, we usually make up quickly and the friendship is fine afterwards.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because if I didn't chatting with my friend I won't have the good friend and teammates in the school and I can't be happy everyday.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because if I didn't chat with my friends I wouldn't have good friends and teammates at school and I couldn't be happy every day.

句中“didn't chatting”混用了助动词did（表示过去时）和动名词chatting，应使用动词原形chat；此外“friend”应为复数“friends”以匹配含义；“won't”在与过去时的if条件句中不正确，应改为过去式的条件形式“wouldn't”；“can't”也要配合虚拟语气改为“couldn't”；“everyday”常用作形容词，应改为副词短语“every day”。建议：学习虚拟语气的过去形式（if + past -> would/could + base verb），注意助动词后动词形式以及可数名词单复数。

× I usually chat like the game and some basketball or baseball or soccer and I will talk about like some teacher are very bad or good they are and maybe like the ultimate are good or not.

✓ I usually chat about games like basketball, baseball, or soccer, and I will talk about whether some teachers are good or bad and maybe whether the results are good or not.

句中“chat like the game”用法不当，应使用固定搭配“chat about”+名词；列举项目时用逗号分隔并使用复数或类别名词；“some teacher are”主谓不一致，teacher应为复数teachers；“they are”重复且位置错误，应用从句“whether ... are ...”；“ultimate”用词不当，可能想说“results”或“outcomes”。建议：用固定介词短语‘chat about’，注意主谓一致和whether引导的宾语从句。

× I usually want to chat with the group because if that's one friend didn't come to school today so I have no one to tell to say something to like teacher or my friend.

✓ I usually want to chat with a group because if one friend doesn't come to school today I have no one to tell something to, like a teacher or my friend.

句中“the group”可改为更自然的“a group”；“that's one friend didn't come”语序和时态错误，应为条件从句“if one friend doesn't come”；“no one to tell to say something to”冗长且语序混乱，应简化为“no one to tell something to”。建议：注意冠词用法（a/the）和从句时态一致，简化表达并把动词和介词放在正确位置。

× So if I talk to group and I can say I if just one people didn't come to school so I can talk to them.

✓ So if I talk to a group I can say things; if just one person doesn't come to school I can still talk to the others.

原句“talk to group”缺冠词，应为“a group”；“one people”错误，people是复数，应用单数person；“didn't come”与现在时条件不一致，应为现在时“doesn't come”；句子逻辑和标点需调整以清晰表达。建议：区分person和people，注意时态一致以及适当使用标点分段。

× I usually want to prefer to communicate face to face because if you use the social media you cannot to talk like what you are thinking for or your you are you are happy or not.

✓ I usually prefer to communicate face to face because if you use social media you cannot express what you are thinking or whether you are happy or not.

“want to prefer”重复冗余，应直接用“prefer”；“the social media”冠词使用多余，应为“social media”；“cannot to talk like what you are thinking for”结构错误，应该用“cannot express what you are thinking”或“cannot show whether you are happy”；重复的“your you are you are”是口误需删除。建议：避免重复动词短语，学会用express或show来表达想法与情感，注意冠词用法。

× But when you are face to face you can really really like.

✓ But when you are face to face you can really show your feelings.

原句“you can really really like”不完整且含义不清，缺少宾语或谓语结构，应补全为“show your feelings”或“express yourself”。建议：说完整的谓语结构，避免残缺句。

× Yes sometimes I will argue with friend because they will do something bad that I I just tell them don't do that to me again but they they won't listen like I will do that to my friend too.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because they do something bad and I tell them not to do it to me again, but they don't listen; I also sometimes do that to my friends.

句中“will argue”不需要将来时，应使用一般现在时表示习惯“argue”；“with friend”应为复数“friends”；“will do something bad”也用一般现在“do”；“I I just tell them don't do that”混用时态与省略，命令句应为“tell them not to do it again”；“they they won't listen”应为一般现在时“they don't listen”；最后“like I will do that to my friend too”建议改为“I also sometimes do that to my friends”以保持时态和数一致。建议：用一般现在时描述习惯性动作，注意双写和否定结构。

× But we will be friendly after this argue.

✓ But we are friendly after this argument.

“after this argue”中argue为动词，名词形式应为“argument”；“will be friendly”可用一般现在“are”或“become friendly”都可，根据语境更自然用“are friendly”或“We become friendly afterwards”。建议：区分动词和名词形式，使用合适的时态描述常态或结果。