Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (số nhiều, thứ tự từ), phát âm tên nền tảng và từ vựng, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ cụ thể (ví dụ: nền tảng bạn dùng và lý do).

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Recently we often use Messenger or Instagram to share funny stories and relax together, and we also exchange information about our studies.

提案: Dùng câu trả lời mạch lạc, chia ý thành các mục cụ thể và dùng từ nối. Sửa ngữ pháp (friends, hobbies) và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để câu có nội dung hơn.

例: I usually talk about our studies, computer games and sports. For example, we discuss upcoming exams, share game tips, and sometimes plan to play football together on weekends.

提案: Giảm tiếng ngập ngừng, dùng câu ngắn gọn rõ ràng; nêu lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ. Tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ phù hợp để kết nối ý.

例: I prefer chatting in a group because more people can share different information and ideas. For instance, when we plan an event, everyone contributes suggestions quickly.

提案: Trả lời không rõ ràng hiện tại; cần đưa ra lựa chọn cụ thể (face-to-face hoặc social media) kèm lý do rõ ràng và sắp xếp câu hợp lý. Tránh thông tin không liên quan và sửa ngữ pháp.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural and it's easier to understand emotions. For example, meeting a friend for coffee helps us talk openly and avoid misunderstandings.

提案: Câu trả lời lộn xộn và không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi (argue = tranh cãi). Cần nêu rõ có hay không thường tranh cãi, đưa lý do và ví dụ, dùng cấu trúc đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp.

例: Sometimes we argue, but usually about small things like plans or opinions. For example, we once disagreed about which movie to watch, but we solved it by voting and choosing a compromise.

× Yes, I very like chatting with friend.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends.

Use 'really' as the correct adverb to modify 'like' and use the plural 'friends' for general statements about chatting with more than one friend. Also maintain simple present tense. Suggestion: use 'I really like chatting with friends'.

× We can chat by messing rosalo or Instagram recently with friends, make fun or relax and talk so many information together.

✓ We can chat by messaging on Rosalo or Instagram recently with friends, have fun or relax and talk about a lot of information together.

Use the gerund 'messaging' (verb + -ing) after 'chat by' to describe the method. Use 'on' as the correct preposition for platforms. 'Make fun' should be 'have fun'. 'Talk so many information' should be 'talk about a lot of information' — 'talk about' requires a preposition and 'information' is uncountable so use 'a lot of'.

× I usually chat with friend about study or game or some sport, talk about hobby about two people.

✓ I usually chat with friends about study, games, or some sports, and talk about hobbies we both have.

Use plural 'friends' for general statements. Maintain parallel nouns: 'study, games, or some sports'. 'Talk about hobby about two people' is unclear; use 'talk about hobbies we both have'. Use simple present tense consistently.

× Uh, I prefer to chat with a group because chatting in a group, uh, and have uh, many friends can know about uh, information, I chat.

✓ Uh, I prefer to chat with a group because when I chat in a group, many friends can learn about the information I share.

The original has incorrect clause structure and missing agreement. Use 'when I chat' to introduce a clause and 'many friends can learn' for correct subject-verb agreement. Clarify 'information I share'.

× August 3535 we can talking talking to be better better more than chat and so relax my anything.

✓ Talking face-to-face is often better and more relaxing than chatting online.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. Rephrase to a clear comparative sentence: 'Talking face-to-face is often better and more relaxing than chatting online.' Use present simple and correct comparative structure 'better than'. 'Relaxing' is the correct adjective.

× Yes, I agree with friend.

✓ Yes, I argue with friends.

The question asked 'Do you argue with friends?' so use the simple present 'I argue with friends.' 'Agree' is the opposite meaning. Also use plural 'friends' for general behaviour.

× I would like to play with my friend.

✓ I would like to hang out with my friends.

'Play with my friend' is acceptable but may not fit context; 'hang out' is more natural for socialising. Use plural 'friends' for general behaviour. Maintain modal 'would like' + base verb.

× You make me happy, relax or something.

✓ They make me happy and relaxed.

Use 'make someone happy/relaxed' with past participle 'relaxed' as adjective. 'You' should be 'they' referring to friends generally. Use 'and' to join adjectives.

× Have a motivation when some friend have a good.

✓ I feel motivated when a friend does well.

Use 'feel motivated' rather than 'have a motivation'. Correct subject-verb agreement: 'a friend does well.' 'Some friend have a good' is ungrammatical; clarify to 'when a friend does well'.