Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答题应更简洁自然，避免语法错误与冗长表达。开头用一到两句直接回答（主题句），然后用1–2句具体理由或例子。注意代词与主谓一致（例如 'who don't' 应为 'who doesn't' 或更自然的 'I do'），以及用词准确（mental statement 应为 mental health / well-being）。控制在最多5句。

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me share feelings and stay updated on each other’s lives. For example, when I feel stressed I often talk to a close friend and feel much better afterward.

提案: 回答要更清晰、有条理。先给出主题句说明主要话题，然后用连词（such as, for example）列举具体内容，避免无关或混乱的短语（如 'a spa we usually chat about' 不清楚）。使用准确词汇（Esports，不是 E sports； idols / trends），句子控制在5句内。

例: Mostly we talk about gaming and pop culture. For example, we discuss League of Legends matches and famous players like Faker, and we also talk about Korean music and fashion trends such as Girls' Generation.

提案: 注意词汇和表达准确性（introversive 应为 introverted；'one with one state' 不自然）。建议先给出明确选择，然后用一两句具体理由并用连接词（because, so）衔接。避免比较结构错误（'much more better' 应为 'much better' 或 'far better'）。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I'm introverted and feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations. For example, I can share personal thoughts and emotions more easily than in a group.

提案: 回答要去填充口头语并更简洁。先直接陈述偏好，然后用1–2句解释理由，避免重复（'I'm gonna say I'm gonna choose'）。把非正式口语改为更规范的短句（you have time to think / you don't always have time to think）。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it gives me time to think before I reply. In contrast, face-to-face conversations often require immediate responses, which can be stressful.

提案: 答案需更有条理并避免矛盾与多余填充词（'sometimes occasionally' 重复）。先回答是否发生争吵，然后给出原因或结果并用连接词（however, but, although）。最后一句不明所以（'So I have a bad'），应删除或改为明确结论。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, which is normal in close relationships. However, most disagreements are resolved through talking, and we usually become closer after we work things out.

× Of course, who don't love to chat with friends because you guys can express your feelings and emotions to others and you can share recent topics and recent events to each other.

✓ Of course, who doesn't love to chat with friends, because you can express your feelings and emotions to others and share recent topics and events with each other.

错误类型为单复数与主谓一致（这里也涉及第三人称单数）。句子中主语为泛指的“who”，在口语里想表达“谁不喜欢……”，应使用第三人称单数助动词 does not（缩写 doesn't）。另外，'you guys' 与前文主语不一致，改为统一的 'you'；'share recent topics and recent events to each other' 中不需要重复 recent，且动词短语应为 'share ... with each other'（使用介词 with）。建议注意主语与动词的一致性，并使用正确的介词搭配。

× That's really helpful to our mental statement and emotions.

✓ That's really helpful for our mental state and emotions.

原句使用了错误的名词 'statement'（陈述）而非 'state'（状态），且介词搭配应为 'helpful for'。建议记住固定搭配 'helpful for/ to someone'，并检查单词拼写和词义以确保用词准确。

× I think we both play a game called League of Legends so we talk about the E sports stars and icons of this game which is Faker.

✓ I think we both play a game called League of Legends, so we talk about the esports stars and icons of this game, such as Faker.

错误类型为动词或词形及词组使用。原句 'E sports' 写法不规范，应为单词 'esports'；从属关系用法更自然用 'such as' 来举例。并在句中加入逗号以改善句子结构。建议注意复合词写法及用于举例的固定表达。

× He is a Korean idol and also we talk about Korean trends and idols like Girls' Generation and a spa we usually chat about.

✓ He is a Korean idol, and we also talk about Korean trends and idols like Girls' Generation — that's a topic we usually chat about.

原句结构混乱，'a spa' 与语境不符（可能想说 'a topic'）。这里需要重组句子并使用连词 'and' 或破折号来连接补充说明。建议理清要表达的名词，避免拼写或词汇错误，并保持句子结构连贯。

× So I'm kind of introversive person, so I'm gonna choose one with one state.

✓ So I'm kind of an introverted person, so I'd choose to talk one-on-one.

错误在于形容词和词形：'introversive' 不是常用词，应为 'introverted'；缺少不定冠词 'an'；'choose one with one state' 语义不明，推测为 'choose one-on-one'（与一个人一对一）。建议学习常用形容词形式并使用合适的短语表达“一对一”。

× And for one friend you can share secrets, add emotions which is much more better than a group of people and you are more relaxed and comfortable with that.

✓ With one friend, you can share secrets and emotions, which is much better than with a group of people; you are more relaxed and comfortable that way.

错误为比较结构不正确：'much more better' 是冗余且错误的比较级表达，正确为 'much better' 或 'far better'。此外，'add emotions' 用法不自然，改为 'share emotions'。建议避免双重比较级，掌握常见比较级和固定搭配。

× I'm gonna say I'm gonna choose via social media because you can, uh, you can really have time to think about what you're gonna type before just send it out.

✓ I'd say I'd choose social media because you can really have time to think about what you're going to type before sending it out.

错误涉及情态动词和非正式缩写的重复使用。将非正式 'gonna' 换为更书面或标准的 'going to' 或 'I'd say I'd'。此外，'before just send it out' 缺少动名词，应为 'before sending it out'。建议在正式语境中使用标准助动词形式，并注意动词不定式/动名词的正确用法。

× And for face to face, you have to, sometimes you don't like, you don't have to have the time to think about what you're gonna say.

✓ And for face-to-face conversation, sometimes you don't have time to think about what you're going to say.

句子存在时态与结构冗余。去掉多余的 'you have to' 和重复的否定 'you don't like'（语义不明）。保留现在时 'don't have' 表达一般事实，'gonna' 改为 'going to'。建议简化句子，保持时态一致并去除多余短语。

× Of course, I sometimes occasionally do argue with friends.

✓ Of course, I sometimes argue with friends.

句中 'sometimes occasionally' 是冗余重复（都是表示频率），保留其一即可。建议避免重复近义词来表达同一概念。

× Uh, I'm saying who won't argue with their friends.

✓ I mean, who wouldn't argue with their friends?

原句结构不正确并且时态与语气错误。应使用虚拟/反问结构 'who wouldn't' 来表达 '谁不会……'，并将 'their' 保留作为性别中性代词。建议学习反问句和条件/虚拟语气的常见表达。

× But I think the point is, no matter how this fight is bad, but you can always get back together with your friends after the problem is solved.

✓ But I think the point is that no matter how bad the fight is, you can always get back together with your friends after the problem is resolved.

句子存在重复连词 'but' 和语序问题。应使用 'no matter how bad the fight is' 的固定结构；'problem is solved' 更自然为 'problem is resolved'（两者皆可），并去掉多余的连接词。建议注意句子连接词的使用，避免重复并保持语序正确。

× So I have a bad.

✓ So I've had a bad experience.

原句不完整，缺少宾语和明确含义 'I have a bad' 无意义。根据上下文应补全为 'I've had a bad experience' 或 'I've been hurt' 等。建议确保句子完整，包含主语、谓语和必要的宾语或补语。