Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Reduce redundancy and split into a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details. Avoid long run-on sentences and filler. Add a linking word for clarity.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they are supportive and trustworthy. For example, when I feel down I can confide in them, and they often help me find practical solutions or simply cheer me up.

提案: Good structure and examples. To improve, vary vocabulary slightly and use a linking phrase to connect topics smoothly.

例: I usually talk about amusing incidents or personal matters. For instance, I might share a funny work story, and if I’m worried I’ll ask them for advice.

提案: Correct the hesitations and typos, keep sentences concise, and use linking words to contrast preferences. Clarify meaning (fix 'A1 on one').

例: I prefer talking to one friend when the topic is important because I feel more comfortable confiding in someone I trust. In contrast, group conversations can be distracting and make it hard to explain my thoughts clearly.

提案: Remove filler words and correct minor grammar (plural/singular). Add a linking word to contrast the two modes briefly.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to convey emotions and body language naturally. However, I use social media for quick messages or in emergencies when I need to contact someone immediately.

提案: Good concise answer. To improve, add a linking adverb to show consequence and use a slightly wider vocabulary (e.g., 'minor disagreements', 'resolve').

例: Yes, occasionally my friends and I have minor disagreements about trivial matters, such as where to eat. However, we usually talk things through quickly and resolve them without staying upset.

× A1 on one conversation lets me explain my thoughts more clearly and towards the person who understands me better than a group would.

✓ A one-on-one conversation lets me explain my thoughts more clearly to the person who understands me better than a group would.

The original sentence contains a typo 'A1 on one' and incorrect preposition 'towards' after 'explain'. 'A one-on-one conversation' is the correct quantifier/phrase for a conversation between two people. Use the preposition 'to' with 'explain' to indicate the recipient of the explanation. Also remove the stray 'A1' and hyphenate 'one-on-one'. Suggestion: Use 'a one-on-one conversation' and 'explain ... to someone' for clarity and correct idiomatic usage.

× I usually only use, uh, social media for a quick messages or in emergencies when I need to contact someone immediately.

✓ I usually only use, uh, social media for quick messages or in emergencies when I need to contact someone immediately.

The phrase 'a quick messages' mixes singular article with plural noun; use either 'a quick message' or 'quick messages'. Removing the article and making 'messages' plural matches 'social media' and the general meaning. Also 'for quick messages' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: Choose singular or plural consistently: 'a quick message' or 'quick messages'.