Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and confident. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words ('uh', 'um'), and give one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and express my feelings. For example, when I had a stressful week at university, talking to my friends over coffee helped me feel supported and calm.

提案: Be specific and use correct vocabulary. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a concrete example and a linking phrase. Replace unclear words like 'cash' with the correct word (e.g., 'understand' or 'catch up').

例: We usually talk about our class lessons, especially topics I didn't understand. For instance, last week my friend explained a difficult math concept step by step until I understood it.

提案: Give a clear preference and justify it with concise reasons. Avoid irrelevant or confusing remarks. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and keep sentences short (max 5).

例: I prefer chatting in a group because it's more fun and we share different opinions. However, sometimes I prefer one-on-one conversations when I want to discuss something private or serious.

提案: State your preference clearly, use correct tense, and give specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid repeated words and fillers. Mention one example of convenience or privacy to support your point.

例: I prefer communicating via social media because I'm introverted and find it easier to express myself online. For example, I can think about my replies and share private thoughts in messages without feeling nervous.

提案: Answer directly and give a clear reason with a brief example. Avoid repetition and incorrect words ('option' should be 'opinion'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your explanation coherent.

例: I rarely argue with my friends because we usually respect each other's opinions. For example, when we disagree about plans, we calmly discuss alternatives until everyone agrees.

× Uh, yes, of course I, I like chatting with my friends because, uh, because I feel well, as when I chat with my friends, I can talk, uh, anything to them and I sometime I can show my feeling, uh.

✓ Yes, of course I like chatting with my friends because I feel good. When I chat with them, I can say anything to them and sometimes I can show my feelings.

Pronoun and determiner use is inconsistent: 'I, I' is redundant and should be a single subject. 'Anything to them' is acceptable but 'say anything to them' is more natural. 'I sometime I' repeats subject and misplaces adverb; use 'sometimes' and place it before the verb or after the subject. 'My feeling' should be plural 'my feelings' to match general sense. Also 'feel well' is better as 'feel good' in this context. Suggestion: remove repeated words, place adverbs correctly (sometimes), use plural for general feelings, and use natural collocations like 'feel good' and 'say anything'.

× Uh, usually about the lesson for, uh, my, my class lesson, uh, that I, uh, didn't, didn't cash at that time. Uh, so my friends, uh, explain me, uh, explain me to, uh, to get that lesson and until I understand it.

✓ Usually about the lessons from my class that I didn't understand at the time. So my friends explain them to me until I understand.

Pronoun and object word order errors: English uses 'explain something to someone' or 'explain something to me'; 'explain me' is incorrect. 'Class lesson' is redundant; use 'lessons' or 'class lessons'. 'Didn't cash' is wrong word choice; correct verb is 'didn't understand'. Use plural 'lessons' if speaking generally. Also 'until I understand it' is better as 'until I understand' or 'until I understand it' with 'them' matching 'lessons'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'understand', correct object order 'explain X to me', and consistent number (lessons/them).

× Uh, is Japan on uh, the situation, uh, you know, uh, chatting with uh, group, it's more fun, uh, more fun, uh, but uh, sometime, uh, we need to chat with one people, uh, uh, for the time we.

✓ In Japan, chatting in a group is more fun, but sometimes we need to chat with one person for certain situations.

Pronoun and noun number errors: 'one people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural; use 'one person'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb. The original has unclear phrasing 'is Japan on the situation' — use 'In Japan' to indicate context. 'For the time we' is unclear; 'for certain situations' or 'at certain times' is natural. Suggestion: use 'one person' for a singular individual, use 'sometimes' for frequency, and simplify the context phrase to 'In Japan' or 'in this situation'.

× Uh, I preferred, uh, to communicate with via, uh, social media because I am very, uh, introverted. Uh, so, uh, so chatting with, uh, via social media is more, uh, convenient for me and to talk, uh, to talk my private.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I am very introverted. So chatting via social media is more convenient for me and allows me to talk about private matters.

Tense and verb form errors: 'I preferred' is past tense but the general preference requires present simple 'I prefer'. Redundant prepositions 'communicate with via' should be 'communicate via' or 'communicate through'. 'To talk my private' is ungrammatical; use 'talk about private matters' or 'talk about my private life'. 'Chatting via social media' is a gerund phrase used correctly, but improve word order. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual preferences, remove redundant prepositions, and use 'talk about' plus a noun phrase (private matters).

× Uh, it's, it's rare, it's rare, uh, one, uh, it's rare because, uh, one, I, uh, one me and my friend, uh, don't have the same option or, uh, they have, they have bad habit, uh, that I didn't like, uh.

✓ It is rare. It is rare because my friend and I do not have the same opinions, or they may have bad habits that I do not like.

Sentence structure and pronoun order errors: repeated fillers 'it's rare' should be a single clear sentence. 'One me and my friend' is incorrect order and pronoun usage; correct form is 'my friend and I'. 'Don't have the same option' should be 'don't have the same opinion' or 'opinions'. 'They have bad habit' needs plural 'habits' and correct verb agreement, and 'I didn't like' should be present 'I do not like' for general truth. Also subject-verb agreement matters with plural subjects. Suggestion: reduce repetition, use correct subject order 'my friend and I', use 'opinion(s)', make habits plural, and maintain present tense for general statements.