Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và mạch lạc: tránh lặp từ và tiếng ngập ngừng (ví dụ: "umm"). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng 1–2 câu hỗ trợ cụ thể bằng liên từ (because, so, for example). Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp thay vì lặp lại (ví dụ: "insightful", "perspective").

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with certain friends because they inspire me and offer different perspectives. For example, one friend is very knowledgeable about technology, so our conversations help me learn new ideas. Talking with them broadens my knowledge and motivates me.

提案: Làm rõ câu trả lời và sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp: dùng thì đúng (present simple) và câu chủ đề trực tiếp. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể bằng liên từ (so, therefore, for example) và tránh mơ hồ như "the moment right now."

例: I don't chat with friends very often. Instead, I usually talk to people who are physically with me, and we discuss things happening around us, such as events at university or plans for the weekend.

提案: Chỉnh ngữ pháp và rút ngắn câu: sửa lỗi số nhiều/ít ("person" not "people"), bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng. Mở đầu bằng chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, so) và cho một ví dụ ngắn để minh họa.

例: I prefer talking one-on-one because, as an introvert, I can discuss topics in depth and form stronger emotional connections. For instance, I can have a long conversation about books with a single friend, which I find more satisfying than small talk in a group.

提案: Tăng tính chính xác và tự nhiên: sửa ngữ pháp ("strangers", "face-to-face"), tránh lặp và tiếng ngập. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, rồi nêu lý do rõ ràng, và đưa ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa sự khác nhau giữa hai hình thức.

例: It depends on the situation. I prefer face-to-face communication with close friends and family because we can express emotions more clearly. However, with strangers I usually use social media because I'm shy and it feels easier to start a conversation online.

提案: Cải thiện mạch câu và ngữ pháp: loại bỏ tiếng ngập, dùng thì đúng ("friends argue"), sửa cấu trúc chủ động bị thiếu động từ ("I am always the one who helps them"). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về cách bạn hòa giải để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

例: I rarely argue with friends because I tend to be a peacemaker. For example, when two friends disagreed last month, I listened to both sides and suggested a compromise so they could reconnect.

× I find joy and inspiration chatting with certain people, not with everyone.

✓ I find joy and inspiration in chatting with certain people, not with everyone.

The verb 'find' requires a prepositional complement 'in' before a gerund to indicate what gives joy. Add 'in' to make the gerund phrase a correct object of 'find'. Suggestion: use 'find joy in doing something' pattern.

× Some of my friends are really inspiring because they have the strength that I don't have and they have the knowledge and umm viewpoints that I really want to learn from them and chatting with them I can expand my knowledge and experience.

✓ Some of my friends are really inspiring because they have strengths I don't have and knowledge and viewpoints I want to learn from, and by chatting with them I can expand my knowledge and experience.

Avoid repeating unnecessary pronouns and use plural 'strengths' to match general qualities. 'Learn from them' is redundant when 'from' already indicates source; restructure to 'knowledge and viewpoints I want to learn from' and use 'by chatting' to show means. Suggestion: remove extra pronouns and parallelize list items.

× Actually, I don't chat with my friend that often because I tend to focus only on the moment right now.

✓ Actually, I don't chat with my friends that often because I tend to focus only on the present moment.

Use plural 'friends' for general frequency. 'Right now' is conversational; 'present moment' fits better in this context. Suggestion: use plural for habitual actions and prefer 'present' for clarity.

× So I only chat with people who are in front of me who are staying with me and we usually chat about the things that happening around us.

✓ So I only chat with people who are in front of me, who are with me, and we usually chat about the things that are happening around us.

The phrase 'that happening' lacks the auxiliary 'are' for present continuous. Also 'staying with me' is awkward; 'who are with me' is clearer. Suggestion: include 'are' for present continuous and simplify redundant clauses.

× As an introvert, I always prefer to chat with only one people than with a group of people because umm, with one people I can uh, dive deeper into a topic with them and make a deeper connections, emotional connection with them.

✓ As an introvert, I prefer to chat with only one person rather than with a group because with one person I can dive deeper into a topic and make a deeper emotional connection with them.

Use singular 'person' not 'people' after 'one'. Use 'rather than' instead of 'than' in this comparison. 'Connections' should be singular to match 'a deeper emotional connection'. Suggestion: use correct singular/plural forms and 'rather than' for comparisons.

× I think it depends on certain situations. With my close friend or family members, I prefer to communicate face to face because it's when we can better express our emotion.

✓ I think it depends on the situation. With my close friends or family members, I prefer to communicate face to face because that's when we can better express our emotions.

Use 'the situation' or 'situations' consistently; here 'the situation' is natural. 'Close friends' plural matches 'family members'. Use 'that's' as a contraction for 'that is' and 'emotions' plural is more natural. Suggestion: ensure number agreement and natural collocations.

× But for stranger, I prefer to communicate through social media because, uh, I can be very shy with stranger.

✓ But with strangers, I prefer to communicate through social media because I can be very shy with strangers.

Use plural 'strangers' after 'with' and 'with' instead of 'for'. Maintain consistent plural form. Suggestion: use 'with strangers' and pluralize consistently.

× I hardly umm ever argue with friends because I'm a peacemaker and actually when my friend argue with each other I always the one who helped them umm to reconnect and solve the umm problem.

✓ I hardly ever argue with friends because I'm a peacemaker, and actually when my friends argue with each other I am always the one who helps them to reconnect and solve the problem.

Use plural 'friends' and third-person singular verb 'argue' must agree: 'friends argue' is correct. 'I always the one who helped' lacks 'am' and uses past 'helped' but the general habit requires present 'help' and 'am always'. Use 'solve the problem' not 'solve the umm problem'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use present tense for habitual actions.