Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答案直接但有语法和表达问题，需更自然简洁并用衔接词。注意时态一致（例如: we chat vs we were testing），避免冗长重复。建议先给主题句，然后用1-2个支持句补充细节，控制在5句内。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We talk almost every day, both face-to-face at school and online after class. Often we discuss homework or quiz each other to prepare for exams.

提案: 内容合适但语言不够具体且有语法错误（例如 "what do we want" 不应在从句中用疑问语序；"the interesting in our family" 表达不清）。要提供更具体例子并用连接词使逻辑连贯。

例: We usually talk about school life and our future plans. For example, we discuss upcoming exams and how to study, and sometimes we share personal stories, such as funny things that happened in our families.

提案: 答案不够清晰，有多处措辞错误（"I'm the intervals" 不通）。需要先给明确立场，然后用一两句具体理由支持，并用连接词如 "because" 或 "so"。注意语法和句子简洁。

例: I prefer chatting in a group because it helps me feel more relaxed. In groups I can listen to different opinions and sometimes contribute my own ideas, which makes conversations more lively.

提案: 回答很好，结构清晰且给出具体原因和例子。可改进的地方是用词准确性（例如 "lines" 应为 "LINE" 或一般说 "messaging apps"），并可略微精简句子使更自然。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because we rarely have time to meet due to heavy coursework. Messaging apps like LINE or Instagram allow us to share notes and ask questions instantly, which is very convenient.

提案: 回答简洁自然，观点明确并给出具体例子。可以通过加入一两句说明如何解决争端或对争吵的看法来丰富内容，但不要超过五句。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, which I think is natural in close relationships. Usually the disagreements are small, like choosing a movie or a restaurant, and we resolve them by compromising or taking turns deciding.

× Yes, I like to chat with my friends and we almost chat every day and in the school we chat face to face and after the class we were testing to each other.

✓ Yes, I like to chat with my friends, and we almost chat every day. At school we chat face to face, and after class we test each other.

涉及的主要是句子结构（26）和动词形式/时态（6/5）的错误：原句过长且并列连词使用不当，缺少标点；“in the school”应为“At school”；“after the class”常用“after class”；“we were testing to each other”结构错误，应为“we test each other”或“we were testing each other”（根据上下文用一般现在时更合适）。建议将长句拆成短句，使用正确介词和动词短语，注意时态一致。

× We usually talk about our school life and future plans, for example, upcoming exams or what do we want to do in the future. And sometimes we also share the personal experience like uh, the interesting in our family.

✓ We usually talk about our school life and future plans, for example upcoming exams or what we want to do in the future. Sometimes we also share personal experiences, for example interesting things about our family.

主要错误为句子结构（26）、疑问词误用（26）和名词单复数/冠词（1/22）：在陈述句中不应该用“what do we want...”，应为“what we want...”；“the personal experience”应为复数“personal experiences”或不加冠词；“the interesting in our family”应为“interesting things about our family”。建议把从句改为陈述形式，注意可数名词的单复数和冠词用法。

× And I prefer to chat with a group of people over with only one friend because I'm the intervals and chat with a group of people made me feel more relaxed. And in a group I think I can be the better listener and sometimes I share some idea.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than with only one friend because I'm an introvert, and chatting with a group of people makes me feel more relaxed. In a group I think I can be a better listener and sometimes I share some ideas.

本句有词汇错误和句子结构问题（26）、第三人称单数/主谓一致（2/27）、冠词/数量（22/14）："over with" 用法不当，应为"rather than with"；"I'm the intervals" 是拼写/词义错误，应为"I'm an introvert"（内向的人）；"chat ... made me" 时态和主谓不一致，应为"chatting ... makes me"或"chat ... makes"；"the better listener" 应为"a better listener"；"share some idea" 应为复数"ideas"。建议使用正确词汇，注意主谓一致，冠词与可数名词的单复数。

× I prefer to communicate via social media rather than face to face because we often don't have enough time to meet due to heavy homework and exam preparation.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media rather than face to face because we often don't have enough time to meet due to heavy homework and exam preparation.

该句基本正确，仅指出涉及介词使用（11）和固定搭配："via social media" 和 "face to face" 用法正确；"due to" 用法合适。无需更改。说明：若要更地道，可将"face to face"写作"face-to-face"或在口语中保持原样。

× Social media let us stay in touch and discuss tests anywhere and anytime, for example, using lines or Instagram to share notes and ask questions.

✓ Social media let us stay in touch and discuss tests anywhere and anytime; for example, using LINE or Instagram to share notes and ask questions.

主要问题为专有名词和标点（22/26）："lines" 应为即时通讯应用名"LINE"（首字母大写且通常不加复数）；句中可用分号或句号分隔举例短语以便更清晰。建议注意专有名词大小写和标点。

× Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends and I think it's quite natural in any close relationship. And most of the time our disagreements are about small things like which movie to watch or where to eat.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, and I think it's quite natural in any close relationship. Most of the time our disagreements are about small things like which movie to watch or where to eat.

句子总体正确，主要是句子连接和标点（26/22）：不必在第二句前加连词"And"，可用逗号或断句提高流畅度。其余结构和时态正确。