Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise, correct grammar, and stay relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases (e.g. "I really hate Chinese" is unclear) and correct verb forms and word order.

例: No, I don't really enjoy chatting with friends. Because I have ADHD, I often get bored and easily distracted during long conversations, so I prefer shorter interactions or messaging instead.

提案: Answer directly with a topic sentence about the topics you discuss (or say you rarely chat), then give a specific example and use linking words. Fix grammar (use 'I don't often chat', 'I get bored quickly'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I don't often chat with my friends, so there aren't many regular topics. However, when we do talk, it's usually about practical matters like plans or schoolwork, because short, focused topics keep me engaged.

提案: Give a clear preference and support it with one specific reason and a linking word. Correct grammar (use 'I am' not 'I are', 'get bored quickly' not 'fastly'). Avoid repetition and vague phrases like 'people guess'.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because conversations with fewer people are more focused and easier for me to follow when I get distracted.

提案: This answer is clear and relevant. Improve by adding one more specific reason and using smoother linking words. Correct minor phrasing ('send text by typing words' -> 'type messages') and avoid casual phrasing like 'which is funny'—use 'which I enjoy' or 'which can express tone'.

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it's convenient and allows me to reply at my own pace. For example, I can type messages, send emojis to convey tone, and share photos or links quickly.

提案: Good structure and clarity. To improve, add one brief example or outcome to make your point more specific and use a linking word to show contrast. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: It depends on the situation. I sometimes argue with friends when we disagree, but I view arguments as constructive debates — for example, we once disagreed about a group project and after discussing our points, we reached a better plan together.

× No I don't like chatting as an ADHD I really hate Chinese because I can fast get bored and easily distracted when people start chatting so I'm not just interested in these things.

✓ No, I don't like chatting because I have ADHD; I get bored quickly and become easily distracted when people start chatting, so I'm not interested in these things.

The student used 'as an ADHD' incorrectly; 'ADHD' is a condition and requires 'have' not 'be'. Pronoun/reference and word order issues ('can fast get bored' is incorrect word order and adverb form). 'Really hate Chinese' is unclear and likely wrong word choice; corrected to logical phrasing. Suggestion: use 'I have ADHD', place adverbs correctly ('get bored quickly'), and separate ideas with punctuation for clarity.

× Well actually I'm not often chat with my friends because I have an ADHD.

✓ Well, actually I don't often chat with my friends because I have ADHD.

The verb form 'chat' should be in base form with do-support: 'do not chat' or contracted 'don't chat'. Also use 'often' before the verb phrase. 'a ADHD' is incorrect article usage with initialism starting with a vowel sound; use no article or 'have ADHD'. Suggestion: use 'I don't often chat' and 'I have ADHD'.

× I not interested in chatting because I can get fast, bored and easily distracted when people start chatting things.

✓ I'm not interested in chatting because I get bored quickly and become easily distracted when people start chatting.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for 'I'm not interested'. 'Can get fast, bored' mixes modal and wrong adverb form; replace with simple present 'I get bored quickly' to match habitual context. Remove extra 'things'. Suggestion: use contractions correctly and adverb 'quickly'.

× Actually I'm not really into chatting with people, I are just not interested in that.

✓ Actually I'm not really into chatting with people; I am just not interested in it.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'I are' is incorrect; should be 'I am'. 'That' is acceptable but 'it' is more natural referring to 'chatting'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject and use appropriate pronoun referent.

× I think it's a waste of time and I haven't.

✓ I think it's a waste of time, and I haven't (engaged in it).

The clause 'I haven't' is incomplete because it lacks an object or past participle to complete the meaning. Adding '(engaged in it)' clarifies the omission. Suggestion: complete the auxiliary with the verb or rephrase to a full sentence.

× I have ADHD, I can get fastly bored and distracted easily when people guess when people start chatting.

✓ I have ADHD; I can get bored quickly and distracted easily when people start chatting.

Adverb 'fastly' is not correct; use 'quickly'. The sentence redundantly repeats 'when people'. Remove 'guess' which is incorrect here. Suggestion: use 'get bored quickly' and avoid repetition.

× I often communicate on social media because I think it's a convenient way to exchange messages effectively.

✓ I often communicate via social media because I think it's a convenient way to exchange messages effectively.

Preposition 'on' is acceptable but 'via' or 'on social media' both okay; this correction uses 'via' as more natural for the channel. No major grammatical error but adjusted for style. Suggestion: use 'via social media' or 'on social media' consistently.

× For example, not only you can send text by typing word, but also send emojis, which is funny.

✓ For example, not only can you send text by typing words, but you can also send emojis, which is fun.

The word order for 'not only' requires inversion: 'not only can you'. 'Text' countability: 'text' or 'texts' or 'text messages'; changed to 'words' for typing. 'Which is funny' should be 'which is fun' for natural expression. Suggestion: use correct inversion after 'not only' and use appropriate nouns and adjectives.

× It really depends on situations.

✓ It really depends on the situation.

Use singular phrase 'the situation' or 'on the situation' or plural 'on the situation(s)'; 'depends on situations' is less natural. Suggestion: use 'depends on the situation' to express conditional variability.

× I sometimes argue with friends when we disagree, but I see arguing as a way to debate ideas constructively and eventually reach an agreement.

✓ I sometimes argue with friends when we disagree, but I see arguing as a way to debate ideas constructively and eventually reach an agreement.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.