Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid repeating phrases (e.g., “with my friends” twice) and reduce informal words like “rumors” unless relevant.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. For example, we often share highlights from our day and send each other funny memes online, which helps us stay connected.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and replace vague or self-deprecating words like “unnecessary things” with specific everyday topics. Use a linking phrase to add an example and keep it to two or three sentences.

例: We usually talk about everyday things. For instance, we discuss meal ideas or what to wear for events, and sometimes we share plans for the weekend.

提案: Provide a clear preference and a reason, using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repeating “friends” and fix subject-verb agreement (e.g., ‘I prefer’). Keep it short and coherent.

例: It depends on the situation. Generally I prefer one-on-one chats for serious conversations, but I enjoy group chats when planning social activities.

提案: State your preference clearly and give a specific reason with improved phrasing. Correct small errors (e.g., ‘chat on social media rather than face-to-face’) and use a linking word to connect reason and result.

例: I prefer social media to face-to-face communication because it lets me think before I reply, which helps me avoid misunderstandings.

提案: Avoid extreme or negative statements that sound unnatural. Give a truthful but balanced response: state how often conflicts happen, a reason, and how you resolve them. Use polite language and a linking phrase.

例: I don’t argue with friends very often, but sometimes we disagree about small things. When that happens, we usually talk it through calmly to solve the issue.

× Yes I do because I love to share experience during the day with my friends and also I love to catch up with my friends on news, rumors or memes on the Internet.

✓ Yes, I do because I love to share experiences from my day with my friends, and I also like to catch up with them on news, rumors, or memes on the Internet.

Use plural 'experiences' for multiple occurrences; add commas for clarity; replace 'love to catch up with my friends on' with 'like to catch up with them on' to avoid repeating 'friends' and to use correct pronoun reference; 'like' is stylistically more natural here but still modal/tense appropriate. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I usually chat with my friends about unnecessary things like what should I eat today, What should I wear today? Yeah.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about trivial things, like what I should eat today and what I should wear today.

Use 'about' with 'chat' is correct; 'unnecessary things' is better replaced by 'trivial things' for naturalness. Questions should be changed to embedded question form 'what I should…' when used as objects of 'chat about'. Capitalization fixed and punctuation smoothed. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× It will depend because I prefers chatting with my friends so if a group of people are my friends so I can.

✓ It depends because I prefer chatting with my friends, so if a group of people are my friends, I can.

Use present simple 'depends' rather than 'will depend' for habitual preference. 'Prefer' must agree with subject 'I' (not 'prefers'). Remove redundant 'so' and add commas for clarity. The final clause was vague but corrected to 'I can' (meaning I can chat with a group) while keeping structure. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× I prefer chat on social media to face to face because I can be aware of my words before sending their message.

✓ I prefer to chat on social media rather than face to face because I can think about my words before sending my messages.

Use infinitive 'to chat' after 'prefer' when followed by a verb. Use 'rather than' to compare preferences. 'Be aware of my words' is unnatural; use 'think about my words'. 'Their message' is incorrect possessive; should be 'my messages' to match speaker. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Most of the time I always argue with my friends on everything because I love to offend them.

✓ Most of the time I argue with my friends about everything, although I don't mean to offend them.

Remove redundant 'always' with 'most of the time'. Use 'argue about' not 'on'. 'Because I love to offend them' is likely unintended; changed to 'although I don't mean to offend them' to reflect probable meaning and be polite. Correct pronoun use maintained. Grammar problem type ID: 12