Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more natural and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details using linking words. Correct tense and pronoun errors, and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected when I am busy. For example, I often send short messages during work breaks, and although replies can be delayed, messaging is a convenient way to keep in touch.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and then provide specific examples of topics. Use linking words to organize ideas and avoid vague phrases like "something" or repeated words.

例: We usually talk about our daily lives and places we visit. For instance, when I go to an interesting café or a park I send photos or short videos to my friends, and we comment on whether the place is worth visiting.

提案: Start with a clear direct answer, then explain with a reason and an example. Avoid incomplete sentences and finish your thought. Use linking words like "however" or "because" to connect ideas.

例: It depends on the situation, but I usually prefer chatting one-on-one. If we need to organize an event I message the whole group; however, for private or sensitive matters I prefer personal chats because they are more confidential.

提案: Give a concise preference and explain briefly with a specific reason. Correct grammar (e.g., "dependable" -> "it depends"). Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

例: At the moment I prefer social media because I live abroad and cannot meet my friends in person. I usually use WhatsApp or video calls to keep in touch and share daily updates.

提案: Answer directly and give a clear example of why you argue, using correct grammar and fewer hesitations. Explain how you resolve conflicts and use linking words like "because" and "when".

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, usually when we disagree about important choices. For example, I once argued with a friend who wanted to make a risky financial decision; we calmly discussed the pros and cons and finally reached a compromise.

× Yes I like chatting with my friends because sometimes I was busy but I text my friends sometimes he also busy.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because sometimes I am busy and I text my friends; sometimes they are busy too.

The student mixed past and present tenses and used incorrect pronouns. 'Was busy' should be 'am busy' to match habitual action; 'he also busy' is incorrect pronoun and missing verb — use 'they are busy too' for plural friends. Use conjunctions and punctuation to join clauses clearly.

× I replay sometimes delay but it's a good way to communicate with each other.

✓ I sometimes reply late, but it's a good way to communicate with each other.

Use the correct verb 'reply' and the adverbial phrase 'reply late' rather than 'replay'. 'Sometimes' should be placed before the main verb for natural word order. 'Delay' as a noun does not fit; use the adverb 'late'.

× I usually chat with my friends every day in a lifestyle when I went to some special location or something.

✓ I usually chat with my friends every day about my life when I go to a special place or something.

The student mixed past ('went') with habitual present. Use present tense 'go' for repeated actions. 'In a lifestyle' is awkward; 'about my life' or 'about my lifestyle' fits better. 'Special location' is better as 'special place'.

× I take a video and text with text with my friends.

✓ I take a video and text my friends.

Redundant phrase 'text with text with' should be simplified to 'text my friends'. No -ing form is needed; base verbs 'take' and 'text' are correct for habitual actions.

× My friends sometimes feedback a good or bad, that's it.

✓ My friends sometimes give feedback, positive or negative; that's it.

'Feedback' is usually a noun, and the verb phrase should be 'give feedback'. Specify 'positive or negative' rather than 'a good or bad' and use a clear sentence connector.

× Actually it depends on the situation.

✓ Actually, it depends on the situation.

Add a comma after introductory element 'Actually' for natural written punctuation. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× If we arrange something we talk with a group but if a secret discussion for us with my friends I text personally, but I prefer personally because sometimes I have some secret things so I.

✓ If we arrange something, we talk in a group, but if it is a private discussion I text my friend personally. I prefer personal messages because sometimes I have private matters.

The original has run-on structure, missing verbs, wrong prepositions and unclear pronouns. Add 'it is' to introduce 'a private discussion', use 'in a group' not 'with a group', and complete the final sentence. Use 'private matters' instead of 'secret things' for natural phrasing.

× It also dependable because right now I live in abroad but I need to talk with my best friends but face to face it's not possible so I need to talk via messenger or WhatsApp.

✓ It also depends because right now I live abroad, so I need to talk with my best friends online; face-to-face is not possible, so I use Messenger or WhatsApp.

Use 'depends' not 'dependable'. Say 'live abroad' without 'in'. 'Face-to-face' is hyphenated as an adjective or phrase; 'online' or 'via' works for communication. Simplify and correct verb forms.

× But right now I prefer social media because I live in abroad.

✓ But right now I prefer social media because I live abroad.

Remove 'in' before 'abroad' and keep present tense 'prefer' to match current preference. The rest is fine.

× Yes, uh, sometimes I argue with my friends.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends.

Remove filler 'uh' in formal responses. Present tense 'argue' correctly describes habitual action.

× My friends are, hmm, take a bad decision.

✓ Sometimes my friends make bad decisions.

'Take a bad decision' is non-native; use 'make a bad decision' or 'make bad decisions'. Remove hesitation filler and adjust plurality.

× I argue with uh, him.

✓ I argue with him.

Remove filler 'uh' and keep 'him' as object pronoun. No other changes needed.

× It's not a good you need to take a proper decision.

✓ It's not good; you need to make a proper decision.

The phrase 'It's not a good' is ungrammatical. Use 'It's not good' and 'make a proper decision' rather than 'take'. Add punctuation to separate clauses.

× But sometimes my friend argue with me if I take a bad rouse decision, he advise me it's not a good way.

✓ But sometimes my friend argues with me; if I make a poor decision, he advises me that it's not a good choice.

Subject-verb agreement: 'friend argues' and 'he advises'. 'Rouse' is incorrect; use 'poor' or 'bad'. 'Take a decision' is less natural than 'make a decision' in this context. Clarify and separate clauses.

× That's it.

✓ That's it.

'That's it' is acceptable as a short closing remark; no grammatical change needed.