Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát âm và tính tự nhiên. Tránh lỗi thì ("it's make" → "it makes"), ngắt quãng bất hợp lý và từ không phù hợp ("sex story" nên là "stressful day" hoặc "difficult day" nếu ý định khác). Giữ câu ngắn gọn, bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi nối thêm lý do bằng liên từ (because, so). Giới hạn khoảng 2–4 câu để tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel happier and less stressed. For example, before a difficult day at work I often share my worries with them and they encourage me, which helps me relax.

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp ("This make" → "This makes") và cụ thể hóa nội dung hơn bằng ví dụ hoặc mô tả. Sử dụng liên từ (for example, such as) đúng chỗ và tránh lặp từ ("share many things with others"). Nên thêm một chi tiết cụ thể để câu hấp dẫn hơn.

例: I usually talk with my friends about our favourite things, such as music, food and drinks. For example, we often recommend new songs or restaurants to each other, which makes our conversations more interesting and shows how well we know one another.

提案: Sửa lỗi từ vựng và diễn đạt ("touch" → "talk", "old friends" có thể là "close friends"), rút gọn câu, bỏ lặp và dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu ưu tiên rồi giải thích lý do với chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh các thành ngữ không tự nhiên ("the one girl I believe without any thought").

例: I prefer talking one-on-one with close friends, especially my best friend, because we trust each other and can discuss personal matters honestly without feeling judged.

提案: Chú ý ngữ pháp ("it's" → "it is" or "it's", "This make is" → "This makes"), và cải thiện mạch logic bằng liên từ. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về lợi ích và cân nhắc ngắn về mặt tiêu cực để cân bằng câu trả lời nếu cần. Tránh lỗi từ ("more funny" → "funnier").

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it's very convenient — we can chat anytime and anywhere. For example, we often use emojis and stickers to express emotions quickly, which makes conversations more lively.

提案: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và trật tự từ ("sometime" → "sometimes", remove duplicate words), diễn đạt rõ nguyên nhân và hậu quả bằng liên từ (because, so, after that). Nên nói cụ thể về cách giải quyết xung đột (ví dụ: apologize, explain) để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because of misunderstandings. However, after an argument we usually sit down and talk things through, apologise if needed and clarify our points, which helps to strengthen our relationship.

× Oh I really love chatting with my friends because it's make me feel happier and less stressed.

✓ Oh, I really love chatting with my friends because it makes me feel happier and less stressed.

Subject-verb agreement in present simple: 'it' requires the verb 'make' to be 'makes'. Add a comma after 'Oh' for natural speech flow. Use 'makes' to match third person singular subject 'it'. Suggestions: practice third person singular endings (-s) in present simple and read sentences aloud to hear missing -s.

× Be before a hard working day or when I have a sex story I will share with my friend and they will encourage me.

✓ Before a hard day or when I have a difficult story, I share it with my friends and they encourage me.

Original has incorrect word order and inappropriate word choice ('sex story' seems unintended); 'Be before' is ungrammatical. Use 'Before a hard day' and change tense to present simple to match habitual action. Use plural 'friends' with 'they'. Suggestions: rewrite sentences to follow Subject + Verb + Object order and choose appropriate vocabulary.

× Yeah.

✓ Yeah.

This interjection is fine; no grammatical correction needed. Suggestions: none.

× I usually chat with my friends about our favorite things such as music, food, or drink.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our favorite things such as music, food, or drinks.

Parallel noun forms: use 'drinks' (plural) to match 'music' and 'food' as categories. Maintain present simple 'usually chat' which is correct. Suggestions: ensure list items use consistent forms (singular vs plural).

× This make me feel we know each other well and we can share many things with others.

✓ This makes me feel that we know each other well and can share many things with each other.

'This' requires 'makes' (third person singular). Add 'that' for clarity; replace 'with others' with 'with each other' to indicate mutual sharing. Remove redundant 'we' before 'can'. Suggestions: check subject-verb agreement and use appropriate reciprocal phrase 'each other'.

× I prefer to touch with only old friends, especially my best friend because she's my most important girl and the most and she's the one girl I believe without any thought.

✓ I prefer to meet with only close old friends, especially my best friend, because she's the most important person to me and the one I trust completely.

'Prefer to touch with' is incorrect; use 'meet with' or 'meet'. 'Closest/close old friends' clarifies meaning. 'Most important girl and the most' is redundant and awkward; use 'most important person to me' and 'trust completely' instead of 'believe without any thought'. Suggestions: replace literal translations with natural English phrases like 'meet with', 'close friends', 'trust completely'.

× I prefer to communicate via social media because it's really convenient and we can chat anywhere, anytime we want.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because it's really convenient and we can chat anywhere, anytime we want.

Sentence is grammatically correct in present simple; no change required. Suggestions: none.

× This make is better chatting and we can send emoji or stickers to make our conversation more funny.

✓ This makes chatting better, and we can send emojis or stickers to make our conversation more fun.

'This' needs 'makes' (third person singular). Word order improved: 'makes chatting better'. 'Emoji' plural can be 'emojis', and 'funny' should be 'fun' when describing the quality of a conversation. Suggestions: practice subject-verb agreement and adjective vs noun choice ('fun' vs 'funny').

× Oh, I sometime argue with my friends because we are also have we also have misunderstanding.

✓ Oh, I sometimes argue with my friends because we sometimes have misunderstandings.

'adverb 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. Remove duplicated phrase 'we are also have we also have'. Use plural 'misunderstandings'. Suggestions: learn adverb forms for frequency and avoid redundant repetition.

× But after that we always sit together and talk clearly about that and we also keep our in relationship better.

✓ But after that we always sit together and talk about it clearly, and we work to keep our relationship strong.

'Talk clearly about that' is awkward; 'talk about it clearly' is natural. 'Keep our in relationship better' is ungrammatical; use 'keep our relationship strong'. Use present simple for habitual actions. Suggestions: use natural collocations like 'talk about it' and 'keep our relationship strong'; focus on correct noun phrases.