Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 内容自然，有例子但句子有些重复和小语法问题，回答可以更简洁并改进衔接词。建议在主句后用一两句具体细节支持并用连接词如“because”或“so”增强逻辑，同时纠正小错误（e.g. “when it is on the exam week”改为“during exam week”）。控制在3-4句内。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me unwind. For example, during exam week I often message my close friends to vent and share study tips, which reduces my stress. So chatting is both relaxing and practical for me.

提案: 回答包含多种话题但部分表达啰嗦且有重复（“current events and recent affairs”意思重复），衔接词可更自然（如“for example”，“also”）。建议删去重复短语并提供更具体例子或一两句说明为何这些话题重要。

例: We talk about many things, for example our favorite idols, popular TV shows and current news. We also share TikTok videos and discuss why certain celebrities are famous, which keeps our conversations lively and helps us bond.

提案: 观点明确但表达有语法和用词问题（如“scare me out”，“not to mention to chat”），重复使用“definitely”。建议用一到两句说明原因并给出简洁例子或对比，避免口语化错用。

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I'm shy in groups. For instance, in a group I feel self-conscious and find it hard to speak, whereas one-on-one conversations are more relaxed and let me get to know someone better.

提案: 回答清晰，使用了具体例子，逻辑连贯。需注意小语法和数一致（“face to face talk make”改为“makes”），可用更自然的连接词并把句子稍微简练。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read facial expressions and body language. For example, someone might smile but avoid eye contact, which would suggest discomfort, so in-person talks are usually clearer and more effective.

提案: 意思表达基本明确但有语法问题（如“who like”应为“who likes”；句子结构不完整“if something really important that I will…”）。建议把条件句和结果句连接清楚，提供更具体的例子并控制句子长度。

例: I don't start arguments and usually avoid conflicts with friends. However, if something important is at stake I will stand up for myself; for example, if a friend repeatedly treats me unfairly, I would calmly explain how I feel and ask them to change their behavior.

× I think it's a very good way to relax yourself, especially when you are under high pressure.

✓ I think it's a very good way to relax, especially when you are under a lot of pressure.

句中“relax yourself”在此语境中冗余且不自然，英美口语通常直接用“relax”表示放松。另“under high pressure”习惯搭配为“under a lot of pressure”或“under high pressure”也可，但更自然的是前者。建议用更地道的表达："relax"和"a lot of pressure"。

× For example, I usually chat with my friends online when it is on the exam week of my semester, which helps me release my anxiety.

✓ For example, I usually chat with my friends online during exam week at the end of the semester, which helps me relieve my anxiety.

原句中“it is on the exam week of my semester”结构不正确，不符合英语中表示时间段的习惯用法；应使用介词短语“during exam week”或“in exam week”。另外“release my anxiety”用法错误，常用动词是“relieve”表示缓解焦虑。说明：用“during”或“in”表示时间段，并将“release”改为“relieve”。

× We especially love sharing Tiktok videos with each other, and sometimes we comment on why a celebrity is so famous, which helps us stay connected with each.

✓ We especially love sharing TikTok videos with each other, and sometimes we comment on why a celebrity is so famous, which helps us stay connected with each other.

句尾缺少“other”，导致短语不完整。问题属于词语缺失/短语搭配错误，需补全固定搭配“each other”。此外注意品牌名大小写为“TikTok”。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend. Definitely. I'm actually a little bit scared to speak in front of the public, not to mention to chat with a group of people, which will definitely scare me out and it is not a good way to relax or to know each other.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend. Definitely. I'm actually a little bit scared to speak in public, not to mention chatting with a group of people, which definitely scares me and is not a good way to relax or get to know others.

多个问题：1) “speak in front of the public”应为“speak in public”更地道；2) “not to mention to chat”中动词形式应保持一致，改为动名词“chatting”符合结构（动词不定式与动名词混用问题，属动词+ -ing/不定式用法）；3) “which will definitely scare me out”中“scare me out”不自然，改为“scares me”；主句主语为“chatting with a group of people”，单数第三人称单数形式“scares”。最后“to know each other”改为“get to know others”或“know each other”视上下文，此处说向一群人了解彼此，用“get to know others”更合适。解释用中文说明动词形式一致和主谓一致。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because you can easily capture the person's facial expressions and body language which help you understand their real feelings.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because you can easily capture a person's facial expressions and body language, which help you understand their real feelings.

原句中“the person”在泛指他人时用不太自然，改为“a person”更合适。另“body language which help”关系从句中先行词为“facial expressions and body language”（复数），谓语“help”保持原形，这里并非错误，但添加逗号使句子更清晰。中文建议：泛指时用不定冠词“a”，并注意标点使关系从句清晰。

× So face to face talk make communication clearer and more effective.

✓ So face-to-face talking makes communication clearer and more effective.

“face to face talk”作为主语应连写或用连字符“face-to-face”，且主语单数时谓语动词要用第三人称单数“makes”。也可改为“face-to-face communication makes...”。中文建议：注意主语单复数并使用第三人称单数动词形式。

× I'm not the kind of person who like to start conflicts.

✓ I'm not the kind of person who likes to start conflicts.

关系从句中先行词“kind”为单数，关系代词引导的从句谓语需用第三人称单数“likes”，原句犯了主谓一致错误。中文建议：关系从句要看先行词而不是who指代的人。

× But if something really important that I will still stand up for myself and defend my rights, for example, if a friend repeatedly trades me unfairly, I will explain how I feel.

✓ But if something is really important, I will still stand up for myself and defend my rights. For example, if a friend repeatedly treats me unfairly, I will explain how I feel.

原句缺少系动词“is”，导致句子结构错误，应为“if something is really important”。另外“trades me unfairly”用法不当，正确用法是“treats me unfairly”。还建议将长句拆为两句以增强清晰度。中文建议：注意条件句需有完整谓语，并使用正确动词“treat”。