Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Start with a direct, natural topic sentence that answers the question, then give a brief reason with correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and correct singular/plural and tense errors. Use linking words like 'because' appropriately and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: Not really. I don't chat much because I don't have many close friends, so I rarely have conversations with friends.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and then specific examples. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g. 'gossip' instead of 'spread tea') and correct grammar. Link ideas with words like 'for example' or 'sometimes'. Keep it concise and natural.

例: We usually talk about everyday things. For example, we sometimes gossip about mutual acquaintances or discuss personal problems and recent events.

提案: Answer directly then explain briefly. Correct unclear phrases ('a child' is incorrect) and use 'one friend' or 'one-on-one'. Provide a reason with a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one rather than in a group because I find it easier to have a meaningful conversation with a single friend.

提案: Respond clearly to the choice and give a concise reason. Avoid unclear phrases ('fatty face', 'interview person'). Use simple language: 'I prefer face-to-face because...' or 'I prefer social media because...'. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and be natural.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I find it more personal and I can read people's expressions more easily.

提案: Start with a direct answer then briefly describe a typical situation. Use correct verbs and expressions ('argue with', 'get annoyed', 'have a small fight'). Use linking words like 'when' or 'because' to explain reasons concisely.

例: Yes, sometimes we argue when we get annoyed with each other. For example, we might have a small fight if someone forgets an important plan or says something hurtful.

× Not really because I don't have my friend that's why I never chat to them.

✓ Not really, because I don't have any friends, so I never chat with them.

Pronoun and noun numbers are incorrect: 'my friend' (singular) conflicts with 'them' (plural). Use 'any friends' for inexistence and 'with' for correct preposition. Also combine clauses with 'so' for clarity.

× I usually chat with my friend like about spread tea or talk about something bad.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about gossip or talk about bad things.

'My friend' should be plural if referring generally; 'spread tea' is informal/slang and unclear—use 'gossip'; 'something bad' should be pluralized to 'bad things' to match general topics. Also remove filler 'like' for clarity.

× I prefer a child only one friend because like I don't have a group with my friend, I only have one.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't have a group of friends; I only have one friend.

Sentence has incorrect word order and singular/plural inconsistencies: 'a child only one friend' is ungrammatical. Use 'only one friend' and 'group of friends' for correct plural form and clearer meaning.

× Actually I don't because I don't like so many of fatty face. I'm just an interview person.

✓ Actually, I prefer not to, because I don't like chatting with many people face-to-face. I'm more comfortable in one-on-one conversations.

Phrase 'so many of fatty face' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace with 'chatting with many people face-to-face' and clarify preference. 'I'm just an interview person' is unclear; replace with a clearer expression about comfort in one-on-one situations.

× Yes, of course, sometime I actually read them because they so annoyed they like we have a small fight.

✓ Yes, of course. Sometimes I actually read them out because they annoy me; we sometimes have small fights.

Several issues: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; 'read them' is likely wrong—if meaning 'ignore', use 'ignore them' or if 'read them out' clarify. Verb forms: 'they so annoyed they like we have' is ungrammatical. Use 'they annoy me' (present simple) and 'we sometimes have small fights.' Adjust tenses and word order for clarity.