Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子有重复且有语法或用词不当（例如“up our friendship”）。回答应更简洁并包含主题句和1-2个支持细节，使用连接词衔接。可以改正时态和单复数，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share opinions about books and films. For example, when we discuss a movie, I often discover new perspectives which bring us closer.

提案: 内容重复且表达笼统，缺少具体细节。应在主题句后用一两个具体例子或原因，用连接词（e.g., because, for example）使回答更连贯。

例: I usually talk about movies and books, because these topics spark lively debates. For example, we recently discussed a novel's ending and compared characters, which led to a deeper understanding of each other's tastes.

提案: 回答清晰但有非标准表达（“121 chat”应为“one-to-one chat”），语法和大小写需调整。可补充具体原因或例子，使论述更有说服力。

例: I prefer chatting one-to-one because face-to-face conversations allow deeper, more personal exchanges. For instance, when I talk privately with a close friend, we can discuss personal issues more openly.

提案: 有重复与语法错误（例如“help us discussion”）。应直接开门见山并提供具体比较或短例，避免重复短语。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows deeper discussion and clearer emotions. For example, talking in person helps me notice tone and body language, which doesn't come across in texts.

提案: 回答结构合理但语法和词汇需改进（例如“point view”应为“point of view”）。可用连接词说明频率和结果，并举例说明如何解决分歧。

例: Sometimes we argue, usually about differing points of view on films or books, but these arguments are brief. For example, after discussing our reasons calmly, we often find common ground and move on.

× I like chatting with my friend and I like sharing my feelings about movies or some books with my friend.

✓ I like chatting with my friends and I like sharing my feelings about movies or books with my friends.

“friend”在这里指一般与多个人聊天，应使用复数“friends”。“some books”在此处多余，直接用“books”更自然。建议：遇到泛指多个对象时用复数形式。

× I think it was a good way to relax myself and it can also up our friendship.

✓ I think it is a good way to relax myself and it can also improve our friendship.

语境为一般现在时描述常态，应使用“is”而不是“was”。“relax myself”虽然可用但更常说“relax”或“relax myself”；“up our friendship”是错误搭配，应使用“improve our friendship”。建议：描述习惯或常态用现在时，使用常见动词搭配。

× I usually share my feelings about movies and books with my friend.

✓ I usually share my feelings about movies and books with my friends.

同上，表示与朋友们交流，使用复数friends更合适。

× I think it's very interesting because we can tell our own feelings with each other.

✓ I think it's very interesting because we can tell our feelings to each other.

动词短语应为“tell ... to someone”，不能用“tell ... with”。此外“our own feelings”可简化为“our feelings”。建议：记住动词搭配，使用“tell ... to”。

× I prefer chatting with only one friend because I think 121 chat Face to face can help us understand each other deeply.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because I think one-to-one face-to-face chats can help us understand each other more deeply.

“121 chat Face to face”不符合英语表达，应改为“one-to-one face-to-face chats”。“deeply”前加“more”更符合比较程度。建议：使用规范短语并注意词序（face-to-face修饰chat）。

× It is a very good way to strengthen our friendship.

✓ It is a very good way to strengthen our friendships.

若前文指多位朋友之间的关系，用复数“friendships”或保持单数“our friendship”。两者皆可，但与上下文一致推荐复数。建议：注意与前文人称一致选择单复数。

× About this question, I prefer chat face to face because I think it can help us discussion, help us discuss deeply, and it is also a good way to strengthen our friendship.

✓ On this question, I prefer to chat face-to-face because I think it can help us have a discussion, help us discuss things in depth, and it is also a good way to strengthen our friendships.

“prefer chat”应为“prefer to chat”；“face to face”应连字符“face-to-face”；“help us discussion”是词类错误，应为“help us have a discussion”或“help us discuss”；“discuss deeply”更自然表达为“discuss things in depth”。建议：注意不定式用法、名词和动词形式转换及固定搭配。

× Sometimes I will argue with my friend especially when we have different point view of movies or books.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends, especially when we have different points of view about movies or books.

一般习惯性行为用一般现在时，不用“will”表示未来倾向；“friend”应为“friends”；“different point view”应为“different points of view”；介词搭配为“view about”或“view on”。建议：描述习惯性动作用一般现在时，注意固定搭配“point(s) of view”。

× We will share our own opinion to each other but the argument will not be long because we will agree to each other after communicate.

✓ We share our opinions with each other, but the argument does not last long because we usually agree with each other after communicating.

“share our own opinion to each other”错误，正确为“share our opinions with each other”；“opinion”应为复数“opinions”；“the argument will not be long”更自然为“the argument does not last long”；“agree to each other”应为“agree with each other”；“after communicate”应为动名词“after communicating”或从句“after we communicate”。建议：注意介词搭配（share with, agree with）、名词单复数及动词形式。