Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, chia số ít/số nhiều và động từ; trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ vàเติม chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy dùng tối đa 3–4 câu, có câu chủ đề và câu giải thích, kèm liên từ phù hợp.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and have fun. We often share lovely experiences and talk about our hobbies, which keeps our friendship strong.

提案: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và chọn từ chính xác; sắp xếp ý rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu 2–3 ví dụ cụ thể với liên từ để mạch lạc.

例: We usually talk about our daily life and plans, such as schoolwork and weekend activities, because those topics are relatable. We also discuss jobs, shared interests, and recent movies or music we like.

提案: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu so sánh, loại bỏ ngập ngừng và lặp từ. Nên dùng linking words (because, so, however) và nêu lý do cụ thể, tối đa 3 câu.

例: I prefer chatting in a group because it feels livelier and more fun. It also gives me a chance to meet new people and make friends, which I enjoy.

提案: Trình bày ưu điểm rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và ngập ngừng, dùng cấu trúc so sánh nếu cần. Nên có câu chủ đề rồi giải thích 1–2 lý do cụ thể (eg. body language, tone).

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it reduces misunderstandings and lets me read body language. Seeing someone's expressions and tone makes conversations feel more connected.

提案: Phát triển ý rõ ràng: trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể. Tránh câu ngắn vụn và ngập ngừng; nêu ví dụ cách bạn giải quyết xung đột. Giữ 2–3 câu mạch lạc.

例: I usually try to avoid arguing with friends because I prefer to keep the relationship peaceful. If we disagree, I discuss the issue calmly and try to find a compromise so the friendship is not damaged.

× I enjoy texting with friend because it's help me relax and fun.

✓ I enjoy texting with friends because it helps me relax and is fun.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match general activity; 'help' must be 'helps' for subject 'it' (third-person singular); 'fun' needs verb 'is' to form a correct clause. Suggestion: use plural for general references and ensure verbs agree with their subjects.

× Uh, we often share lovely experience and a hobby.

✓ We often share lovely experiences and hobbies.

Use plural 'experiences' and 'hobbies' for general activities. No article needed when speaking generally. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general repeated activities.

× We are usually take with my friends about our daily life and plans such as warm studies and weekend activity because these topics are relatable.

✓ We usually talk with my friends about our daily lives and plans such as schoolwork and weekend activities because these topics are relatable.

Use 'usually talk' (correct present tense form) rather than 'are take'. 'Daily life' should be plural 'daily lives' when referring to multiple people. 'warm studies' is incorrect; 'schoolwork' or 'studies' fits. 'Weekend activity' should be plural 'activities'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms for habitual actions and match noun number to context.

× Uh. We also job, share interests and live movie, music and sport.

✓ We also talk about jobs, share interests, and love movies, music, and sports.

Original has missing verbs and wrong words: 'job' needs verb 'talk about jobs'; 'live movie' should be 'love movies'; 'sport' should be plural 'sports'. Use parallel structure with verbs: 'talk about', 'share', 'love'. Suggestion: keep parallel structure and use appropriate verbs for each item.

× I refer tests with a group people because it make me feel make me feel more lively and uh fun.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because it makes me feel more lively and fun.

'Refer tests' is wrong; 'prefer to chat' is correct. Use 'a group of people' for the noun phrase. 'Make' must be 'makes' to agree with 'it'. Remove repeated words. Suggestion: use correct verb 'prefer' and proper noun phrases and subject-verb agreement.

× Uh, also it's make me feel me new people and make friends.

✓ Also, it helps me meet new people and make friends.

'It's make me feel me' is ungrammatical. Use 'helps me meet' to express facilitation, and 'meet new people' is correct. 'Make friends' is the correct phrase. Suggestion: use verbs like 'help'+'infinitive' and correct collocations.

× All are referred to communicate face to face because uh, I because it's make me feel, uh, it's make me avoid misunderstanding and uh, umm, make, make me make me feel connected and body language with friends.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it makes me feel connected, helps me avoid misunderstandings, and allows me to use body language with friends.

Use 'prefer' instead of 'All are referred to'. 'It makes' for subject-verb agreement. 'Avoid misunderstanding' should be plural 'misunderstandings' in general. 'Allows me to use body language' expresses intention. Suggestion: use clear subject 'I', correct verb forms, and concise clauses.

× No I don't agree with friend because I quit. I try keep. I try keep a peaceful and uh. I try keep before and uh and uh.

✓ No, I don't argue with friends because I give up. I try to stay calm. I try to keep the peace and avoid arguments.

'Don't agree with friend' is incorrect for 'argue' context; use 'argue with friends'. 'I quit' is ambiguous; 'I give up' is clearer. 'I try keep' needs infinitive 'to keep' or 'to stay'. 'A peaceful' should be 'the peace' or 'calm'. 'I try to keep before' is unclear; replaced with 'avoid arguments'. Suggestion: use correct verbs for intended meaning, include 'to' before verbs like 'try to', and use clear phrases.