Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接清晰，避免重复和语法错误。开头用一句主题句直接回应问题，然后用1–2个简短具体细节支持观点（如何时、如何聊天以及带来的好处）。注意时态和搭配，如 “have a relaxing time” 而不是 “having a relax”。句子不要超过五句。

例: Yes, I do. I prefer having relaxed conversations with my friends after class because it helps us unwind and strengthens our relationships. For example, we usually sit in the campus café and share stories about our day or plans for the weekend.

提案: 回答应更有条理并使用连接词（first, also, for example）。具体说明话题并举一两个具体例子，避免含糊的表达如 “some news in recently”。注意词序和搭配（e.g., “recent news”, “movies we watched”）。句子数量控制在五句以内。

例: We usually talk about recent news and movies. For instance, yesterday we discussed a new film released on streaming platforms. We also share funny anecdotes and talk about our hobbies, such as football or running.

提案: 回答要更流利并避免口头语（uh）。先给出明确偏好或说明两者各自优点，然后用连接词比较（however, while）。注意词汇准确（e.g., “group conversation”, “one-on-one chat”），并使句子连贯完整。

例: I like both, but if I had to choose I prefer one-on-one chats because they allow deeper conversation. However, group chats are fun for a lively atmosphere and meeting different opinions.

提案: 回答立场明确很好，但应精简并改进表达准确性。用一两句说明原因，举例支持（e.g., reading facial expressions, tone of voice）。避免重复短语（e.g., “with your with your”）并注意名词复数和搭配。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read facial expressions and tone of voice, which helps avoid misunderstandings. For example, when discussing a problem in person I can tell if my friend is upset or joking.

提案: 需要更礼貌和自然地表达观点。先直接回答（Yes/No），然后给出原因并用具体例子或建议替代争吵（e.g., talk calmly, find compromise）。注意语法（don’t think → I don’t think; argue is → arguing is）和避免双重否定。

例: No, I try not to argue with friends because arguing often damages relationships. If we have a disagreement, I prefer to talk calmly and find a compromise so we can understand each other better.

× OK As for me, I prefer having a free talk with my friends or classmates because I think it's the best way to spend our spare time and having a relax in our after our class and it can increase our friendship.

✓ OK. As for me, I prefer having a free talk with my friends or classmates because I think it's the best way to spend our spare time and relax after class, and it can increase our friendship.

句子存在结构问题和冗余：1) “having a relax in our after our class” 词序和用法错误，应改为“relax after class”或“have a rest after class”；2) 并列结构中“spend our spare time and having a relax”时态和形式不一致，应统一为两个相同结构（动词不定式或动名词），这里改为“spend... and relax”；3) 使用逗号分隔复合句，使结构更清晰。建议练习并列结构一致性（parallelism）和常见短语（relax after class, spare time）。

× OK, certainly we always talk some news in recently or some movies we watched yesterday or in our free time and sometimes we always talk some funny things or some sports hobbies for us like that.

✓ OK, certainly we always talk about recent news or movies we watched yesterday or in our free time, and sometimes we talk about funny things or our sports hobbies.

主要是介词和词组使用错误：1) “talk some news” 应为 “talk about news”；2) “in recently” 应为 “recently” 或 “recent news”；3) “some movies we watched yesterday or in our free time” 结构混乱，应分为并列项；4) “sports hobbies for us like that” 冗长且不自然，应为 “our sports hobbies”。建议记住动词搭配（talk about）和副词/形容词位置（recent/recently）。

× Well, I believe both of them I preferred because uh, chapter, uh, have a talk with group can have a good atmosphere, but talk with someone can. Concentrate your chat.

✓ Well, I prefer both of them because having a talk with a group can create a good atmosphere, but talking with one person can help you concentrate on the conversation.

句子结构和时态问题：1) “I believe both of them I preferred” 语序混乱且时态错误，应为 “I prefer both” 或 “I like both”；2) “have a talk with group can have a good atmosphere” 主语和动词搭配错误，应为 “having a talk with a group can create a good atmosphere”；3) “but talk with someone can. Concentrate your chat.” 句子被错误分割且动词形式错误，应合并并用动名词“talking”及不定式“help you concentrate on...” 来表达。建议练习主语-动词结构与动名词用法。

× OK I believe face to face is the best way to communicate because you can watch your classmates or friends emotion on their face to judge their feeling with your with your communication but chat online only can watch the words on the screen.

✓ OK, I believe face-to-face communication is the best way because you can see your classmates' or friends' emotions on their faces to judge their feelings during communication, whereas chatting online only shows the words on the screen.

介词和名词形式错误：1) “face to face” 应作为形容词或名词短语写作 “face-to-face” 或 “face-to-face communication”；2) “watch ... emotion on their face” 用词不当，应为 “see ... emotions on their faces” 或 “observe their facial expressions”；3) “judge their feeling with your with your communication” 重复且介词错误，应为 “judge their feelings during communication”；4) 句子连贯性差，建议使用连接词如 “whereas”。建议背诵常见搭配（see emotions, facial expressions, during communication）。

× No, I said don't think we should argue with friend because you know argue is a bad action and your friends you should forgive each other and to know each other well. So I think you didn't can't solve the problem.

✓ No. I don't think we should argue with friends because arguing is a bad thing, and friends should forgive each other and get to know each other better. So I think you can't solve the problem by arguing.

情态动词和句子结构错误：1) 开头双重否定“I said don't think” 不自然，应为 “I don't think”；2) “argue with friend” 缺少复数或冠词，应为 “argue with friends” 或 “a friend”；3) “your friends you should forgive each other and to know each other well” 语序和动词形式错误，应为 “friends should forgive each other and get to know each other better”；4) “So I think you didn't can't solve the problem.” 双重否定和时态错误，改为 “you can't solve the problem by arguing”。建议练习情态动词用法（don't think, can't）和句子中避免重复否定。