Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且相关，但语法和流利性有问题，重复语气词较多，句子结构不够紧凑。建议：1) 注意主谓一致（例如 say "I like talking to my friends"），2) 减少语气词（uh, umm），3) 用一到两句概括主题，再用一两个具体例子支持，保持在3-4句之内。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often discuss international or social news, and sometimes share daily events from our lives. For example, we post short clips on TikTok and then talk about reactions.

提案: 内容具体但表达重复且有语法错误，句子较冗长。建议：1) 开头用主题句总结（"We usually talk about..."），2) 用连接词（such as, for example）来列举，3) 避免重复同一意思，保持句子简洁。

例: We usually talk about a wide range of topics. For example, we discuss international and social news, share personal experiences, and give each other opinions on current issues.

提案: 回答不够完整，最后一句未表达清楚且有语法错误。建议：1) 直接给出偏好（one-on-one or group），2) 解释原因时完整表达（use "because" + reason），3) 注意数的一致性和句子完整性。

例: I prefer talking to one friend rather than a group. I feel more comfortable sharing my opinions one-on-one because I worry about being judged in front of strangers.

提案: 回答清晰但用词和语法略显生硬（"the things"、"social application"）。建议：1) 用更自然的表达（"I prefer communicating via social media"），2) 给出简短原因或例子，3) 注意不可数名词和搭配（"share experiences"）。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it's convenient. For instance, we often share opinions and experiences on apps like TikTok or WeChat.

提案: 回答内容完整且立场明确，但口语中的重复和词序问题影响流利度。建议：1) 删去多余重复（"we we we"），2) 用更准确的表达（"have different opinions"），3) 最后一部分可以用连接词承上（"However, I usually try to understand others' views"）。

例: Yes, arguments happen quite often because we sometimes have different opinions. However, I try to understand other people's views and I don't expect everyone to agree with me.

× Yes, I like talk to my friends about something, uh, for example, the international news or the social news.

✓ Yes, I like talking to my friends about things, for example international or social news.

句中動詞 like 後應接動名詞 (verb + -ing)，表示習慣或喜好。因此原句的 'like talk' 應改為 'like talking'。同時將 'something' 改為更自然的 'things'，並簡化 'the international news or the social news' 為 'international or social news'。建議：記住動詞 like、enjoy、avoid 等後面跟動名詞。

× we often talk about uh, the daily things that happened in our life on Tiktok.

✓ we often talk about the daily things that have happened in our lives on TikTok.

此處描述與現在有關的過去發生的事情，應使用現在完成式 (have + 過去分詞) 表示經驗或已發生並對現在有影響。'happened' 作為簡單過去可用，但更自然的是現在完成 'have happened'。另外 'our life' 應為複數 'our lives'。建議：當強調經驗或到目前為止的事件，用現在完成時。

× Actually, we chat about everything we see or we experienced uh, like the international news, social news and our daily life, umm, we also exchange our thoughts and umm, to give, oh to give our opinions about something.

✓ Actually, we chat about everything we see or have experienced, like international news, social news and our daily lives. We also exchange our thoughts and give our opinions about things.

在列舉現在仍相關的經驗時，'experienced' 應用現在完成式 'have experienced'（助動詞 + 過去分詞）。另外句子過長且有語序問題，將其分成兩句較清晰；'to give, oh to give' 多餘，改為簡潔的 'give our opinions'；'our daily life' 改為複數 'our daily lives'。建議：使用現在完成式描述經驗，並保持句子簡潔。

× I like to talk with my friends. Maybe it's only one friends and it also could be a group of friends.

✓ I like to talk with my friends. Maybe it's only one friend, or it could be a group of friends.

'one friends' 中 'one' 與複數 'friends' 不一致，應改為單數 'one friend'。連接詞使用上 'and it also could be' 改為更自然的 'or it could be'。建議：數字（one, two...）後接單數名詞；注意並列連詞選擇使語意清楚。

× Uh, I'm kinda afraid of giving my own opinion in front of a group of strangers because I'm afraid they will.

✓ Uh, I'm kind of afraid of giving my opinion in front of a group of strangers because I'm afraid they will judge me.

原句以 'they will' 結尾造成不完整，缺少主要動詞或補語，屬於句子結構錯誤。將 'kinda' 改為較正式 'kind of'（口語可保留），並補上可能的動詞 'judge me' 以完成句意。建議：避免留下未完成的從句，確保每個從句有完整的謂語。

× I like to talk through the social media and that's also the things I often do with my friends.

✓ I like to talk through social media, and that's also something I often do with my friends.

'the social media' 中不需要定冠詞，應為 'social media'（作為媒介的一般稱呼）。'the things' 改為 'something' 或 'things' 更自然；整句也可用逗號分開。建議：一般談論媒體時不加 'the'；用 'something' 表示一類活動。

× We always share our opinions and experience on the social application.

✓ We always share our opinions and experiences on social apps.

'on the social application' 用法不自然，應改為複數與通用詞 'social apps' 或 'social media apps'，並將 'experience' 改為複數 'experiences'（與 opinions 對應或表示多次經驗）。建議：使用常見搭配 'on social media' / 'on social apps'。

× Yes, that's very common actually because we also we we often change over thoughts about something then the argue it just happened.

✓ Yes, that's very common actually, because we often change our thoughts about something and then the argument happens.

原句存在重複詞 'we also we we'、片語 'change over thoughts' 不自然，以及 'the argue it just happened' 句法錯誤。將其簡化為 'we often change our thoughts'，並把後半改為被動或一般現在 'the argument happens'。建議：刪除重複詞，使用正確搭配 'change our thoughts' 或 'change our minds'，並用正確名詞 'argument'。

× But for me, I think I can understand everyone's thoughts. I don't need other people to be the same as me.

✓ But for me, I think I can understand other people's thoughts. I don't need everyone to be the same as me.

'everyone's thoughts' 可以，但語境中更自然的是 'other people's thoughts' 以區別自己。第二句 'I don't need other people to be the same as me' 更自然可改為 'I don't need everyone to be the same as me'，保持指稱一致。屬於代詞使用和指稱一致性問題。建議：確認代詞指向清晰，'everyone' 與 'other people' 根據語意選擇。