Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more concise and correct minor grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid redundancy like “people at my age” and repeat words.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because I feel relaxed with people my age. For example, we often discuss our daily routines and local news, which makes conversations easy and engaging.

提案: Remove hesitation fillers, correct grammar and be careful with sensitive topics and factual accuracy. Give one clear example and use linking words for coherence. Avoid repeating words and incorrect prepositions (e.g. “discussed about” → “discussed”).

例: We usually talk about daily activities, memorable experiences and current news. For instance, recently we discussed reports about tensions in the Middle East and how they might affect global oil prices.

提案: Fix grammatical errors and make the explanation more natural and specific. Use a linking phrase to connect reason to preference and avoid awkward phrasing like “a quite introvert person.”

例: I prefer talking to one friend rather than a group, because I’m quite introverted and find one-on-one conversations more comfortable and focused.

提案: Clarify and correct grammar. Use a concise topic sentence and then one clear reason with a linking word. Replace vague language with a specific example of misunderstanding.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it reduces misunderstandings. For example, tone and facial expressions help avoid misinterpretation that often happens in text messages.

提案: Make the answer more fluent and correct tense/number agreement. Give a brief example of how you resolve disagreements and use linking words to show consequence.

例: Yes, I sometimes disagree with friends because we have different perspectives. However, we usually talk it through calmly and find a compromise, so the issue rarely becomes serious.

× Yes, I'm keen on chatting with my friends, especially people at my age, because I feel more comfortable and we could share a familiar topic.

✓ Yes, I'm keen on chatting with my friends, especially people my age, because I feel more comfortable and we can share familiar topics.

Use 'people my age' (no 'at') and 'we can' is more natural than 'we could' in present habit context; 'familiar topics' plural fits general reference. Also 'familiar topic' changed to plural to match 'share'. Suggestions: remove 'at', use 'my age', use 'can' for habitual present, and pluralize 'topics'.

× For example, we can easily talk about our daily activity or news around us.

✓ For example, we can easily talk about our daily activities or the news around us.

'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to refer to regular routines; 'the news' is count/uncount but takes 'the' here. Keep present tense 'can' is fine. Suggestion: use plural for habitual routines and include 'the' with 'news'.

× We usually talk about our daily activity, uh, memorable experience and the news that happened today.

✓ We usually talk about our daily activities, memorable experiences and the news that happened today.

Make nouns parallel and plural when referring to general categories: 'activities' and 'experiences'. 'The news' is correct; maintain present habitual 'usually talk'. Suggestion: pluralize and keep parallel structure.

× For instance, recently we discussed about ongoing, ongoing war in the Middle East between US against Iran.

✓ For instance, recently we discussed the ongoing war in the Middle East between the US and Iran.

Do not use 'discussed about'; 'discuss' is transitive and takes a direct object. Remove duplicate 'ongoing'. Use 'the US' and 'and' instead of 'against' when giving neutral description of parties. Suggestion: use 'discussed the' + correct party phrasing.

× I prefer talking with just one friend rather than a group.

✓ I prefer talking with just one friend rather than with a group.

Add parallel preposition 'with' before 'a group' to keep structure clear. Original not strictly plural error but structure requires consistency. Suggestion: keep parallel 'with' for both options.

× This is mainly because I'm a quite introvert person so that is more natural for me to asking and answering the question with one person at.

✓ This is mainly because I'm quite an introverted person, so it is more natural for me to ask and answer questions with one person.

Use 'quite an introverted person' (adjective form 'introverted' and article 'an'). 'So it is' is clearer than 'so that is'. Use infinitives 'to ask and answer' not 'to asking and answering'. 'Questions' plural fits general meaning and remove stray 'at'. Suggestion: change adjective form, include article, use infinitive verbs, pluralize 'questions'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than online.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than online.

Sentence is acceptable; no change needed. (Kept for completeness.) Suggestion: none.

× If this is mainly because if we talking via online is sometime has a misunderstanding about what we are discussed, then misinterpretation.

✓ This is mainly because when we talk online there can sometimes be misunderstandings about what we are discussing, which leads to misinterpretation.

Remove redundant 'if', use 'when we talk online' (present simple for habitual), 'there can sometimes be' for possibility, 'misunderstandings' plural, and 'discussing' present participle for ongoing reference. Clarify final clause. Suggestion: avoid double 'if', use correct verb forms and clearer connectors.

× Yes, of course, sometime I have a disagreement with my friends.

✓ Yes, of course, sometimes I have disagreements with my friends.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). Use plural 'disagreements' for general occurrences and present simple 'have' suits habitual meaning. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' and pluralize.

× This is mainly because each of us has a different perspective or insight about something, but eventually we overcome it together and not become a great problem.

✓ This is mainly because each of us has a different perspective or insight about something, but eventually we overcome it together and it does not become a big problem.

Use 'overcome it' then 'it does not become a big problem' for correct negation and adjective 'big' is more natural than 'great' in this context. Maintain present simple tense. Suggestion: adjust negation and adjective, keep present tense.