Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên, loại bỏ tiếng ừ, lặp từ và rút gọn câu để rõ ràng hơn. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể và kết luận ngắn gọn. Ví dụ tập trung vào tần suất và cảm xúc với từ ngữ đa dạng hơn.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends in my free time because it helps me relax and lifts my mood. For instance, a quick chat after work often makes me feel much happier and more energized.

提案: Giảm lặp ý và sắp xếp thông tin theo thứ tự logic: chủ đề chính, phương tiện rồi hiệu quả. Dùng từ vựng chính xác (e.g., "share funny videos"), và tránh cụm từ lặp như "feel so happy" nhiều lần.

例: We usually share funny videos and short reels from Facebook or YouTube. Sharing these clips helps us unwind after a long day and often cheers everyone up.

提案: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và logic (ví dụ: 'cannot' không phù hợp ở đây). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, giải thích lý do cụ thể và bổ sung ví dụ. Sử dụng linking words như 'because' hoặc 'for example'.

例: I prefer chatting in a group because we get many different perspectives and can share more experiences. For example, during group chats I often learn new ideas or recommendations from others.

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và dùng câu rõ ràng: tránh cụm từ mơ hồ như 'From my birthday too'. Nên đưa ra chủ đề rõ ràng, lý do và một ví dụ. Chú ý cách diễn đạt về cảm xúc (e.g., 'read people's emotions').

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to read people's emotions and express feelings more naturally. For example, during my birthday party I could tell who was genuinely happy by their facial expressions.

提案: Tránh cấu trúc rời rạc; nêu câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích nguyên nhân cụ thể và cách giải quyết nếu có. Sửa ngữ pháp (e.g., 'not know more about' → 'not understanding').

例: Yes, we sometimes argue, usually because of misunderstandings or not fully understanding each other's feelings. When this happens, we try to talk it through calmly to resolve the issue.

× Yes uh, when I have free time, I usually chat with my friends. Uh, they bring a lot of happiness and they make me feel happy and over the moon.

✓ Yes, when I have free time, I usually chat with my friends. They bring me a lot of happiness and make me feel over the moon.

The sentence had redundancy and awkward phrasing. 'They bring a lot of happiness and they make me feel happy and over the moon' is repetitive. Use present simple consistently for habitual actions: 'bring' and 'make'. Remove repeated 'they' and the extra 'happy'. Suggestion: combine actions to be concise and natural. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I often share many funny videos and reels from Facebook and YouTube to my friends to relax and they feel so happy and I also feel over the moon and so relax after hard working days.

✓ I often share funny videos and reels from Facebook and YouTube with my friends to help them relax; they feel happy and I also feel over the moon and relaxed after hard working days.

Incorrect use of infinitive and adjective forms: 'to my friends' should be 'with my friends'; 'to relax' is unclear—use 'to help them relax' or 'to relax together'. 'So relax' is incorrect; use the adjective 'relaxed'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions. Split into clauses for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I love chatting with a group of people because we have so many perspectives and we cannot share many experience and know more about each others.

✓ I love chatting with a group of people because we have many perspectives and can share experiences and learn more about each other.

'Many experience' is incorrect; 'experience' is uncountable in this sense, use 'experiences'. 'Each others' is wrong; use 'each other'. 'Cannot share many experience' contradicts intended meaning—should be positive 'can share'. Also 'so many perspectives' okay but 'many perspectives' is more natural here. Grammar problem type ID:14

× From my birthday too, I enjoy communicating face to face because I can know about emotional of people and we can express more our. Our feeling.

✓ Since my birthday, I have enjoyed communicating face to face because I can understand people's emotions and we can express our feelings more.

'From my birthday too' is unnatural; use 'since my birthday'. 'Communicating face to face' is correct but 'face to face' usually hyphenated when adjectival. 'Know about emotional of people' is incorrect: use 'understand people's emotions'. 'Express more our. Our feeling.' has word order and punctuation errors—use 'express our feelings more'. Use present perfect 'have enjoyed' if starting from a past point and continuing to present. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, and we sometimes argue about misunderstanding and not know more about feelings of each other.

✓ Yes, we sometimes argue because of misunderstandings and not knowing enough about each other's feelings.

Use plural 'misunderstandings' and gerund 'not knowing' to form a noun phrase. 'Feelings of each other' is awkward; use 'each other's feelings'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions. Also remove unnecessary 'and' at start. Grammar problem type ID:6