Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I do. I often chat with friends when I'm in a bad mood because talking to them helps me relax and feel better.

提案: Be specific and avoid vague or unclear phrases. Use one or two concrete examples and correct grammar. Use linking words like "for example" properly and finish the example clearly.

例: We usually talk about our old classmates; for example, we discuss who recently broke up or who has moved to a new city.

提案: Answer the specific question (chatting preference) with a clear topic sentence and concise reason. Correct awkward phrasing and avoid mixing topics (traveling vs chatting). Use one linking phrase to support your reason.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because conversations feel more personal and it's easier to share private thoughts one-on-one.

提案: Give a direct answer then explain with a clear example. Remove fillers and repetition. Use linking words like "because" and be specific about the problem with social media.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to convey tone and avoid misunderstandings; for example, a written message can be misinterpreted if I'm not clear.

提案: Provide a concise topic sentence and one or two supporting reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "do things too over." Use a linking phrase such as "unless" or "because" correctly.

例: I rarely argue with friends because I prefer to resolve disagreements through calm communication; only if someone is very inconsiderate would I get upset.

× Yes, I really love to chat with my friends when I when I'm in a bad mood because I can make me feel better and feel more relaxed after I encountered a very bad event.

✓ Yes, I really love to chat with my friends when I'm in a bad mood because it makes me feel better and more relaxed after I encounter a very bad event.

Errors: unnecessary repetition 'when I when', incorrect reflexive construction 'I can make me feel' and wrong tense 'encountered' (past) conflicting with general statement. Type references: verb in present participle not directly but issues map to present tense and reflexive use. Correction details: remove duplicated words, use 'it makes me' instead of 'I can make me', and change past tense 'encountered' to present simple 'encounter' to express general situations. Suggestion: avoid repeating words, use 'it makes me' for effects on oneself, and keep tense consistent for habitual actions.

× Actually, when I chat with my friends, I always tell a lot of gossip about our old classmates for example maybe who just broke up lazily or just step out on the.

✓ Actually, when I chat with my friends, I often gossip about our old classmates, for example about people who have just broken up or who have recently started dating someone new.

Errors: awkward phrasing 'tell a lot of gossip', misplaced 'for example maybe', incorrect adverb 'lazily', incorrect verb forms 'just broke up' (needs perfect) and incomplete phrase 'step out on the.' Correction details: use 'gossip about' not 'tell gossip', use 'often' for frequency, 'have just broken up' for recent events, and 'started dating' to replace unclear 'step out on.' Suggestion: use clear verbs for social actions (gossip about, break up, start dating) and complete examples fully.

× I prefer to travel with only one friend because I consider chatting is a very private event that you can only just I'm I can only just talk to one people in a time I cannot share to a group of people.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I consider chatting a very private activity; I can only talk to one person at a time and cannot share it with a group of people.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'travel with only one friend' (context is chatting), unnecessary words 'you can only just I'm I can only just', plural 'one people' should be 'one person', incorrect preposition 'in a time' should be 'at a time', and 'share to' should be 'share with'. Correction details: change 'travel' to 'chat', remove filler words, use singular 'person', and correct prepositions. Suggestion: simplify sentences, ensure singular/plural match (one person), and use correct prepositions ('at a time', 'share with').

× MMM, I prefer to communicate face to face. You can always If I communicate on social media, there may be some some problems such as he or she may distort my real meaning if I don't describe it clearly.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. If I communicate on social media, there may be some problems, such as someone distorting my meaning if I don't express myself clearly.

Errors: redundant 'You can always If', repeated word 'some', awkward 'he or she may distort my real meaning' (use 'someone' or 'others'), and 'describe it clearly' better as 'express myself clearly'. Correction details: remove fillers, use singular 'someone' or plural 'others', and use appropriate verbs for communicating ideas. Suggestion: avoid fillers, eliminate repetition, and choose natural verbs ('express' instead of 'describe') for conveying thoughts.

× Still, I rarely argue with my friends unless they do things too over because I think if I can just communicate to solve the problem, I would choose to just solve it in a very peaceful way because I really don't like the feeling that I argue with my friends.

✓ I rarely argue with my friends unless they go too far, because I think if I can communicate to solve the problem, I would choose to resolve it peacefully; I really don't like arguing with my friends.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'do things too over' should be 'go too far', awkward conditional 'if I can just communicate to solve the problem' and repetitive wording 'choose to just solve it in a very peaceful way'. Tense/voice: use present simple 'I rarely argue' for habitual behavior and 'would choose' is acceptable for preference but 'I would choose to resolve it peacefully' is clearer. Correction details: replace idioms with natural equivalents, remove redundancy, and simplify sentence structure. Suggestion: use clear idioms ('go too far'), keep tense consistent for habits, and avoid repeating ideas.