Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Reduce hesitations and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details (when/how often and why), and keep answers under five sentences. Use linking words (for example, "usually" and "because") to make the response coherent.

例: I enjoy playing football and it has been a favorite hobby since my childhood. I usually play in the afternoons with friends three times a week, which helps me stay fit and relax. Because I love the teamwork involved, I always look forward to our weekend matches.

提案: Be direct and avoid filler words. Begin with a clear statement about past hobbies, then give a specific reason and an example of an activity you did as a child. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past.

例: Yes, as a child I loved playing football. I used to play after school with my neighbors, which helped me clear my mind and feel calm. Because it was a social activity, I also made many friends through football.

提案: Provide a concise topic sentence, clearly name the hobby, and explain why it inspired you with one specific detail. Avoid naming people incorrectly; if you mention an inspiring player, give a clear, correct name and one reason for the inspiration.

例: Yes, I have loved cricket since childhood. I admire Shakib Al Hasan because he is a great all-rounder, and watching him play inspired me to practice batting and bowling. As a result, I still play cricket regularly with friends on weekends.

提案: Answer directly and clearly. State whether your family shares the hobby, then explain briefly why they do not support it with one or two specific reasons. Avoid confusing words (like "movie") and unnecessary repetition.

例: No, my family does not share my passion for cricket. My father is concerned about the risks and wants me to focus on studies, so he does not encourage me to train seriously. Because of that, I play cricket mostly with friends rather than with family.

× I usually love playing football.

✓ I usually play football.

The speaker used 'love' with 'usually' which is acceptable but 'usually love' is awkward for habitual actions; use simple present 'play' to describe a regular hobby. Replace 'love playing' with 'play' to match habitual present tense usage. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I usually play football.'

× It's one of my favorite hobbies from my childhood.

✓ It's one of my favorite hobbies from childhood.

The phrase 'from my childhood' is awkward with 'favorite hobbies'; omit 'my' to make the phrase idiomatic. Use 'from childhood' or rephrase to 'since my childhood' if you mean continuity. Suggestion: 'It's one of my favorite hobbies since my childhood.'

× Uh, I always, uh, playing football, uh, in the afternoon.

✓ I always play football in the afternoon.

The original lacks the correct verb form: 'always playing' needs an auxiliary for present continuous or should be simple present 'play' for habitual action. Remove filler words and use simple present for routines. Suggestion: 'I always play football in the afternoon.'

× It's uh, this time, uh, I reset, uh, playing football, uh, football is one of my favorite hobbies.

✓ At the moment, I have started playing football again; football is one of my favorite hobbies.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'This time I reset playing football' is incorrect. Use 'At the moment' or 'Recently I have started playing football again' to convey restarting, and maintain subject-verb structure. Suggestion: 'Recently I have started playing football again; football is one of my favorite hobbies.'

× Yeah, definitely says enjoy and I was a child.

✓ Yes, I definitely enjoyed it when I was a child.

Tense and verb choice are incorrect: use past tense 'enjoyed' to refer to childhood, and add 'it' as object. 'Says' is incorrect here. Suggestion: 'Yes, I definitely enjoyed it when I was a child.'

× This time I have a hobbies is, uh, playing football.

✓ Now my hobby is playing football.

Grammatical number and article usage are wrong: 'a hobbies' mixes singular and plural. Use singular 'hobby' with 'my' and simple present 'is' to state current hobby. Suggestion: 'Now my hobby is playing football.'

× It's one of the most, uh, favorite hobbies, uh, because of, uh, how I playing football, my mind keep fresh, uh, keep fresh and calm.

✓ It's one of my favorite hobbies because when I play football my mind stays fresh and calm.

Several errors: 'one of the most favorite' is redundant—use 'one of my favorite'. 'How I playing' is wrong form; use 'when I play'. 'My mind keep' requires subject-verb agreement: 'mind stays'. Reorder for clarity. Suggestion: 'It's one of my favorite hobbies because when I play football my mind stays fresh and calm.'

× So that is why uh, football is my favorite.

✓ So that is why football is my favorite.

Remove filler 'uh' and keep simple present 'is' to state a general truth. Sentence is otherwise correct. Suggestion: 'So that is why football is my favorite.'

× Yeah, definitely when I was a child. This time, uh, my favorite hobby is cricket.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I liked it; currently my favorite hobby is cricket.

Sentence needs clearer tense contrast: use past 'liked' for childhood and 'is' for present. 'This time' is awkward; use 'currently'. Suggestion: 'Yes, when I was a child I liked it; currently my favorite hobby is cricket.'

× Specialize for our, uh, one of the most, uh, one of #1 all round Sakib Alison.

✓ I especially admire our all-rounder Shakib Al Hasan; he is one of the best all-rounders.

Unclear and ungrammatical original. 'Specialize for our' is incorrect. Name corrected to 'Shakib Al Hasan' and sentence restructured to express admiration and ranking. Suggestion: 'I especially admire our all-rounder Shakib Al Hasan; he is one of the best all-rounders.'

× I inspire him.

✓ I am inspired by him.

Original 'I inspire him' means the speaker causes inspiration, but context indicates the speaker is inspired. Use passive 'am inspired' or 'I am inspired by him'. Suggestion: 'I am inspired by him.'

× That is why I love, uh, playing cricket And uh, it's uh, my favorite hobbies.

✓ That is why I love playing cricket, and it's my favorite hobby.

'my favorite hobbies' uses plural incorrectly when referring to a single favorite; use singular 'hobby'. Fix punctuation and remove fillers. Suggestion: 'That is why I love playing cricket, and it's my favorite hobby.'

× No my family can't support me because my favorite movie is cricket then I wish I wonder I will be a cricketer but my family members especially my father don't support me so that is why I cannot I cannot running the this hobbies.

✓ No. My family didn't support me because my favorite sport is cricket and I wanted to be a cricketer, but my family, especially my father, didn't support me, so I couldn't pursue this hobby.

Many issues: 'movie' should be 'sport'. Tense inconsistency: use past 'didn't support' and 'wanted'. 'I cannot I cannot running' is ungrammatical; use 'couldn't pursue'. Articles and plurality: 'this hobbies' should be 'this hobby'. Conjunctions organized for clarity. Suggestion: 'No. My family didn't support me because my favorite sport is cricket and I wanted to be a cricketer, but my family, especially my father, didn't support me, so I couldn't pursue this hobby.'