Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ неясный и не соответствует вопросу. Говорите прямо и полно: назовите хобби (тема), затем кратко объясните, почему вам это нравится. Избегайте пауз и бессвязных фраз. Используйте простое связующее слово для продолжения мысли (например, "because" или "I like it because").

例: Yes, I do. My main hobby is reading novels because it helps me relax and learn new vocabulary. I usually read in the evening for about an hour, and I especially enjoy mystery stories.

提案: Ответ грамматически неверный и не раскрывает содержания. Для прошлого времени используйте Past Simple. Дайте короткий вводный ответ (Yes/No) и объяснение с деталями, используя связки (for example, when, because).

例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I loved drawing because it was a way to express my ideas. I used to draw every weekend and sometimes entered school art contests.

提案: Ответ повторяет фразу и не объясняет, какое хобби и как долго вы его практикуете. Используйте Present Perfect для хобби, которое продолжается до настоящего момента, и добавьте детали (how long, how often, why).

例: Yes, I have. I have been playing the piano since I was seven years old, so it's been over ten years now. I practise for about half an hour every day because it keeps me focused and happy.

提案: Ответ короткий и некорректный по форме. Дайте явный "No" или "Yes" с объяснением и приведите пример, используя связки (however, but, because).

例: No, not really. My family members prefer outdoor activities like hiking, while I enjoy indoor hobbies such as painting. However, sometimes we go hiking together on holidays.

× Oh, my favorite hobby. Uh, seat of lessons.

✓ My favorite hobby is taking lessons.

The original contains fragments and incorrect wording. It lacks a main verb (be) and uses 'seat of lessons' which is ungrammatical. Use a complete clause with subject + verb: 'My favorite hobby is taking lessons.' This fits present tense and responders context. Suggestion: include the verb 'is' and use gerund 'taking' for hobbies.

× No, I don't have hobby and child.

✓ No, I didn't have a hobby as a child.

The original mixes tenses and lacks articles: 'don't have hobby and child' is ungrammatical. The question asked about the past, so use past tense 'didn't have' and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'hobby' and the preposition 'as' before 'a child': 'as a child'. Suggestion: match tense to the question and include necessary articles and prepositions.

× Yes, my favorite hobby. Seeds of lesson at school.

✓ Yes, my favorite hobby is taking lessons at school.

This reply is fragmented and contains the unclear phrase 'Seeds of lesson'. Use a full sentence with 'is' and the gerund 'taking' to describe an ongoing hobby: 'is taking lessons at school.' Ensure clarity by using correct vocabulary ('lessons') and proper verb form.

× No, don't need it.

✓ No, I don't. I don't have the same hobbies as my family.

'Don't need it' is not an appropriate or grammatical response to the question. The examiner asks whether the student shares hobbies with family members; respond with a complete sentence: 'No, I don't.' or expand to clarify. Use subject 'I' and auxiliary 'do' with negation 'don't'. Suggestion: answer directly and use full sentence structure.