Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Говорите более связно и естественно: начните с простой темы предложения, затем перечислите хобби кратко и добавьте одно-две конкретные детали. Избегайте повторов и лишних слов. Также используйте связки (for example, and, so) для логики ответа и следите за временем глаголов.

例: I have several hobbies, such as football, swimming and basketball. I usually play football two or three times a week because it keeps me fit and helps me relax after studying.

提案: Говорите ясно о прошлом: используйте прошедшее время (I used to, When I was a child) и стройте одно прямое предложение, затем добавьте причину или пример. Избегайте заиканий и неоконченных фраз.

例: Yes, I used to play football a lot with my friends when I was a child. We often met in the park every weekend and played until sunset, which helped me make close friends.

提案: Сформулируйте прямой ответ, затем уточните: скажите, как долго вы занимаетесь этим и как это изменилось. Используйте связки (since, now, when I was younger) и избегайте путаницы между настоящим и прошлым.

例: Yes, football has been my hobby since childhood. I still play now with my friends at a large stadium, although we play more competitively than we did when we were kids.

提案: Давайте чёткий и простой ответ с пояснением: используйте сравнение и правильные формы существительных и глаголов (brother's hobby is, my brothers play). Не говорите лишнего и исправляйте согласование числа.

例: No, I don't. My brother prefers basketball and another brother plays volleyball, so our interests are different. We sometimes try each other's hobbies, but mostly we stick to our own.

× For example, my hobbies, playing football, swimming and playing basketball.

✓ For example, my hobbies are playing football, swimming, and playing basketball.

The original sentence lacks a main verb and correct structure to list hobbies. Use 'my hobbies are' to introduce the list, include commas and 'and' before the final item. Improve by ensuring a subject and verb are present and list items clearly. Suggested practice: Write similar sentences using 'my hobbies are' and list three activities, e.g., 'My hobbies are reading, cycling, and painting.'

× It's really it is my hobbies.

✓ They really are my hobbies.

The original contains redundancy and incorrect pronoun/verb agreement ('it is' with plural 'hobbies'). Replace with 'They really are my hobbies' to match plural noun. Practice matching pronouns to plurality.

× I play football two or three times a week because it's healthy for my body.

✓ I play football two or three times a week because it is healthy for my body.

Contraction 'it's' is acceptable but in formal speech use 'it is'. No major grammar error besides register. Keep present simple for habitual action. Suggestion: use 'I usually play' to emphasize frequency.

× Yes, I did my hobbies playing football with my friends and I.

✓ Yes, I did. My hobby was playing football with my friends and me.

Original mixes forms and has incorrect object pronoun 'I' after a preposition. Use past tense 'was' and object pronoun 'me'. Also separate into two sentences for clarity. Practice using 'me' after prepositions.

× I would like to to stay football E it's my hobby in my childhood and I don't stay.

✓ I used to play football; it was my hobby in childhood, but I do not play it now.

Original is unclear and contains repetition, wrong verb forms and spacing. Use 'used to' for past habitual actions and 'do not play' for present negative. 'Stay football' is incorrect — use 'play football'. Practice forming contrasts: 'I used to X, but now I do not.'

× Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

✓ (Question is fine as written.)

This question is grammatically correct; no correction needed. Use present perfect to ask about a hobby continuing from childhood to present.

× Yes, for example, play football.

✓ Yes, for example, I played football.

The sentence lacks a subject and correct tense. Given context asking about since childhood, use 'I played football' or 'I have played football since childhood'. Include subject 'I' and appropriate tense.

× At the moment I play football with my friends at the big stadium.

✓ At the moment, I play football with my friends at the big stadium.

Add comma after introductory phrase for clarity. Sentence otherwise correct in present continuous/habitual sense. Practice using commas after introductory adverbial phrases.

× It's very interesting with my friends and funny and healthy for my body in my childhood.

✓ It was very enjoyable with my friends, fun, and healthy for my body during my childhood.

Tense mismatch and awkward word choices: 'interesting' and 'funny' are not ideal; use 'enjoyable' and 'fun'. Use past tense 'was' and 'during my childhood' for time reference. Also maintain parallel adjective structure.

× You too, I play with my friends.

✓ I also played with my friends.

Order and tense are wrong. Use 'I also played' or 'I also play' depending on timeframe. 'You too' is misplaced. Practice forming statements with adverbs like 'also' in correct position.

× No, I don't because my brother's hobbies is playing basketball and one brothers uh playing volleyball.

✓ No, I don't, because my brother's hobby is playing basketball and one of my brothers plays volleyball.

Mismatch between singular 'brother's hobby' and verb 'is' corrected; also 'one brothers' should be 'one of my brothers' and requires verb 'plays'. Ensure singular/plural consistency and possessive forms.

× Don't say him with my family and it's my hobbies.

✓ He is not part of my family's hobbies, and those are my hobbies.

Original is unintelligible and uses incorrect imperative 'Don't say him'. Clarify meaning: indicate that his hobby is not shared with family. Use 'he is not' or 'he does not share' and correct plural 'hobbies'. Practice expressing contrasts between family members' hobbies.

× In my opinion, my hobbies, our hobbies was more.

✓ In my opinion, my hobbies — or our hobbies — were more varied.

Verb 'was' should be plural 'were' to match plural 'hobbies'. The sentence is awkward; clarify meaning (e.g., 'were more varied' or 'were greater in number'). Ensure subject-verb agreement and clearer phrasing.