Hobby— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct, grammatical topic sentence and add one or two brief supporting details using correct grammar and natural phrasing. Avoid redundant words like “spending my time at” and keep the answer within 1–3 sentences. Use a linking word if you add reasons or examples.

例: Yes, I enjoy drawing. I usually sketch for an hour each evening because it helps me relax, and recently I have been practicing portrait techniques to improve my shading.

提案: Start with a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence and include a specific detail or example. Correct basic grammar errors (e.g. “when I was a child”). Use a linking word if you add another point.

例: Yes, when I was a child I loved drawing. For example, I often drew animals and cartoons, and I kept many of my early sketches in a folder.

提案: Give a clear, direct answer rather than an ambiguous phrase. State which hobby you have kept since childhood and provide a specific supporting detail or reason. Keep it concise and use linking words for clarity.

例: Yes, drawing is a hobby I have had since childhood. I have continued it because I enjoy experimenting with different styles and it has become a way to relieve stress.

提案: Answer directly and correct grammar: use full sentences and clarify the meaning. Add a brief explanation or example to support your statement, using linking words like “because” or “so”.

例: No, I don’t share hobbies with my family. I’m the only one who enjoys drawing, while my parents prefer gardening and my sister likes playing the guitar.

× Of course, I like spending my time at drawing.

✓ Of course, I like spending my time drawing.

The preposition 'at' is unnecessary before a gerund in this context. Use the verb + -ing form after 'like' or 'spending time' without 'at'. Suggestion: say 'I like spending my time drawing' or 'I like drawing.'

× Of course, when I was child, I liked drawing.

✓ Of course, when I was a child, I liked drawing.

The phrase requires the indefinite article 'a' before the singular count noun 'child.' Without it, the noun phrase is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'a child' for a singular noun or 'children' for plural with appropriate structure.

× Maybe all.

✓ Maybe all of them.

The response 'Maybe all' is incomplete and lacks the object it refers to. Adding 'of them' clarifies that the speaker means 'all of my hobbies' or 'all of the above.' Suggestion: use complete noun phrases like 'Maybe all of them' or 'Maybe all of my hobbies.'

× No I don't. I am the only one in the whole family like.

✓ No, I don't. I am the only one in the whole family who likes it.

The clause is missing a relative pronoun and the verb needs third person singular agreement ('likes'). Also include the object 'it' (referring to the hobby) for clarity. Suggestion: use 'the only one... who likes it' or 'the only person in my family who likes it.'