Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Content is relevant and shows enthusiasm, but grammar, fluency and coherence need work. Make a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and repetition, correct grammar (e.g. "when I'm free", "I use small pockets of free time", "on long days"), and organize into 2–3 concise sentences. Use linking words for clarity (e.g. "because", "so").

例: I love reading and consider myself a bookworm. I usually read whenever I have free time, especially during long days, because I find it relaxing. For example, I often sit in a quiet corner at home and read for thirty minutes to unwind.

提案: The answer expresses a clear preference but has pronunciation/word choice errors and repetition. State a direct topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons, and avoid filler words. Correct phrasing: "I prefer reading on paper because I like the smell of books" and add a linking word (e.g. "also", "for example").

例: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the smell and feel of physical books. Also, I like collecting books and keeping them in good condition, so paper copies suit me better than screens.

提案: The idea is present but unclear due to grammar mistakes and confusion. Make a clear contrast: say when you read carefully and when you skim. Use correct verbs and nouns (e.g. "to get new ideas", "to understand a story or lesson") and linking phrases like "however" or "on the other hand". Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid vague words like "cheaply" or "did I just teens".

例: I read carefully when I need to learn something new or fully understand a story or lesson. However, if I'm just searching for quick information online, I usually skim the text to find the key points.

提案: Good structure and relevant content, but reduce hesitations and improve grammar and linking. Use "on the other hand" not "in the other hand", and combine ideas into 2–3 fluent sentences. Give a brief example to support your preference.

例: It depends on my purpose. For novels or lessons I read in detail because I want a deep understanding; on the other hand, I scan articles or web pages when I only need quick facts or an overview.

× To tell you the truth, I'm a bookworm.

✓ To tell you the truth, I am a bookworm.

No grammatical error in meaning but contraction 'I'm' is acceptable; keep expanded form for clarity. Use present simple 'am' with the stative verb to describe a general habit or characteristic.

× In fact, I read every time I I'm free.

✓ In fact, I read whenever I'm free.

Errors: redundant 'time' and misplaced 'I'. Use 'whenever' to indicate any time you are free; keep 'I'm' for 'I am'. This fixes word order and makes the sentence natural.

× Uh, I try small my free time to read book, uh, especially at a long day.

✓ I try to use my free time to read books, especially after a long day.

Errors: incorrect quantifier 'small', wrong word order 'try small my free time', missing infinitive 'to use', and 'book' should be plural 'books' to indicate general habit. 'At a long day' is incorrect preposition and noun; use 'after a long day'.

× I often find, uh, quiet place in my favorite.

✓ I often find a quiet place that I like.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'quiet place', incorrect preposition 'in my favorite'. Use 'that I like' or 'my favorite place' for clarity. Maintain noun phrase order.

× Spirifer reading book on a paper because I love the smell of a paper.

✓ I prefer reading books on paper because I love the smell of paper.

Multiple errors: 'Spirifer' is incorrect; correct verb 'prefer'. Use plural 'books' for general preference, 'on paper' is the natural phrase (not 'on a paper'). Remove article before 'paper' when referring to the material.

× Uh, I, I read every book I have and I keep it, uh, very clean, uh, maybe I think.

✓ I read every book I have and keep them very clean, I suppose.

Errors: pronoun agreement—'every book' followed by plural 'them' is acceptable if referring to the speaker's books collectively; alternatively use 'each book' and 'keep it'. 'Maybe I think' is awkward; use 'I suppose'. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× To be honest, I often read carefully when I read to get new idea or understand cheaply a story or a lesson in addition to did I just teens and scan something in on the Internet?

✓ To be honest, I often read carefully when I want to get a new idea or understand a story or a lesson; otherwise I just skim and scan things on the Internet.

Many errors: verb tense and purpose—use 'want to get' or 'to get', 'a new idea' requires article 'a'. 'Understand cheaply' is incorrect; use 'understand'. 'Did I just teens' is nonsensical; likely intended 'I just skim' or 'I just glance'. Use 'skim and scan' for quick reading on the Internet. Keep sentence structure clear and parallel.

× It depends on my purpose to read.

✓ It depends on my purpose for reading.

Use 'depends on' with noun phrase 'my purpose for reading' or 'what I'm reading for'. Gerund 'reading' is more natural after 'purpose for'.

× When I read a novel or a lesson, I often read carefully because I want to understand deeply.

✓ When I read a novel or a lesson, I often read carefully because I want to understand it deeply.

Add object 'it' to indicate what 'understand' refers to. 'Understand deeply' is acceptable but 'understand it deeply' is clearer. Maintain present simple.

× Uh. In the other hand, I often scan.

✓ On the other hand, I often scan.

Use the correct conjunctional phrase 'on the other hand' instead of 'in the other hand'. Remove fragment 'Uh.' and keep sentence concise.