Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn; dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: sửa các lỗi như “spend to reading” -> “spend my time reading”, “the more I do this activities” -> “the more I read”, và hạn chế số câu trong một câu trả lời (tối đa 4-5 câu). Hãy bổ sung một ví dụ cụ thể về loại sách bạn thích để tăng tính thuyết phục.

例: Yes, I'm a big fan of reading. In my free time I usually spend my evenings reading novels or short stories, which helps me relax and improves my mood. For example, I recently finished a historical novel that gave me new insights into everyday life in the past.

提案: Sửa cấu trúc câu, ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh; tránh các phép ẩn dụ không rõ nghĩa như “see the world through tinted glasses.” Nên nêu rõ lý do thuận tiện và một nhược điểm của việc đọc trên màn hình để cân bằng quan điểm, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý rõ ràng hơn.

例: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient—I can carry many books on my tablet and adjust the font size. However, screens can strain my eyes after long periods, so sometimes I still choose paper books for comfort.

提案: Làm rõ và đơn giản hóa câu trả lời; sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ “summarize to get main point” -> “skim to get the main points”) và tránh kết thúc mơ hồ (“and another thing”). Nên đưa ví dụ cụ thể về loại nội dung bạn skim và loại nội dung bạn đọc kỹ, đồng thời dùng liên từ để tổ chức ý rõ ràng.

例: It depends on the situation. When I'm busy I skim short blog posts or headlines to get the main points quickly. But when I have time, I read news articles and detailed reports carefully—for example, I read investigative pieces thoroughly to understand the facts and implications.

提案: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và chọn từ chính xác (ví dụ “safe time” -> “save time”, “key ports” có vẻ sai ngữ cảnh; có thể là “key points”). Trả lời cần ngắn, rõ ràng, và nêu một ví dụ khi bạn dùng scanning và khi cần đọc kỹ. Thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer scanning because it saves time when I only need specific information like dates or names. For instance, when I look for flight times or an author's name in a long article, I scan headings and keywords rather than reading every sentence.

× Well you know I'm a big fan of reading so in my free time I usually spend to reading books and the more I do this activities the more it's like my head up and it's lighten my mood and also I often read novels.

✓ Well, you know I'm a big fan of reading, so in my free time I usually spend time reading books, and the more I do this activity the more it clears my head and lightens my mood. I also often read novels.

This sentence contains multiple present tense and related grammar issues: incorrect use of 'spend to reading' should be 'spend time reading' (verb + -ing after 'spend time'), 'this activities' is plural mismatch with 'this' (singular) and should be 'this activity' or 'these activities' (singular/plural agreement), 'it's like my head up' is ungrammatical and intended meaning is 'it clears my head' (present tense), and 'it's lighten my mood' uses incorrect verb form after 'it' and should be 'lightens my mood' for third person singular present. Suggestions: use 'spend time' + gerund, ensure noun-pronoun agreement (this/these), use correct present simple forms for habitual actions and ensure subject-verb agreement (it clears/it lightens).

× Well, reading on the screen is my cup of tea, but you know in recent year the digital devices all grow up and well, reading on screen is so convenient and make me feel like I can see the world through tinted glasses and this provide more information.

✓ Well, reading on the screen is my cup of tea, but you know in recent years digital devices have all grown, and reading on a screen is so convenient and makes me feel like I can see the world through tinted glasses, and this provides more information.

Errors: 'in recent year' should be plural 'in recent years'; 'digital devices all grow up' is incorrect tense and phrasing — use present perfect 'have grown' to indicate change over time; 'make me feel' should be 'makes me feel' to agree with singular subject 'reading on a screen'; 'this provide' should be 'this provides' for subject-verb agreement. Suggestions: use 'in recent years', use present perfect for changes over time, and ensure singular subjects take '-s' in present simple.

× When I'm busy I usually just skim online articles, especially short blog posts or summarize to get main point because I need to save them.

✓ When I'm busy I usually just skim online articles, especially short blog posts, or summarize them to get the main points because I need to save time.

Issues: 'summarize' should be followed by an object and in this parallel structure use gerund or base with object — here 'summarize them' or 'summarize to' is incorrect; 'get main point' needs plural 'main points'; 'save them' is unclear — intended 'save time'. Suggestions: keep parallel structure (skim ... or summarize them), use plural for countable nouns when appropriate, and clarify the object ('time').

× But when I have free time, I read the news in detail, including long reports and another thing.

✓ But when I have free time, I read the news in detail, including long reports and other articles.

Problems: 'and another thing' is vague and ungrammatical in this list — use 'and other articles' or specify another item; sentence structure needed a parallel noun phrase. Suggestion: replace vague phrase with a clear noun phrase that parallels 'long reports'.

× Well you know I'm a big fan of scanning because when I need to follow the specific information quickly such as dates or names because it's safe time and is help me locate key ports effectively.

✓ Well, you know I'm a big fan of scanning because when I need to find specific information quickly, such as dates or names, it saves time and helps me locate key points effectively.

Multiple errors: 'follow the specific information' is awkward — use 'find specific information'; 'because it's safe time' should be 'it saves time' (subject-verb agreement and word choice); 'is help me' is incorrect — use 'helps me' for third person singular present. Also 'key ports' is likely 'key points'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms for third person singular, choose appropriate verbs ('find' not 'follow'), and ensure words reflect intended meaning ('points' not 'ports').