Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然并直接回应考官的问题，先给出简洁的观点，然后用一到两句具体原因支持。避免语法错误和不必要的词汇。可以补充你讨厌阅读的具体原因或偶尔读书的情形。注意句子数不超过五句。

例: No, I don’t enjoy reading very much. I find it time-consuming and I can get information more quickly from videos or articles online. For example, I often watch short videos to learn about news or practical skills rather than reading long texts.

提案: 回答应先给出明确偏好（paper或screen），然后用一到两句具体理由支持，并用连接词保证连贯。注意使用正确的词汇（e.g. "on a screen"，不要用不合适的词汇如"literal literacy"），并修正语法与拼写错误。

例: I prefer reading on a screen because electronic devices like phones and tablets are more convenient. For instance, I can adjust the font size, search for unfamiliar words instantly, and carry many books in one device.

提案: 先用一句话明确回答两种情形（需要仔细阅读和不需要仔细阅读），随后用连接词给出具体例子和原因。修正语法错误（e.g. "exams"，"need to read the details"），并补充比较以增强内容完整性。

例: I need to read carefully when I’m taking exams or studying for a class because I must understand details to answer questions accurately. By contrast, I don’t read carefully when I’m browsing novels or social media posts, since I’m usually reading for enjoyment or quick information.

提案: 先明确选择（scanning或detailed reading），然后用一两句具体原因和一个短例子支持。注意用词准确（"scanning"而不是"skating"），修正语法并用连接词提高连贯性。尽量避免重复和不完整句子。

例: I prefer scanning because it helps me quickly find the main points without spending too much time. For example, when I read news articles, I scan the headlines and first paragraphs to decide whether I want to read the full story.

× Not at all, because I think reading is difficult for me to get information more conveniently.

✓ Not at all, because I think reading makes it difficult for me to get information conveniently.

问题类型：现在时态问题（Present tense issue）。原句时态与表达不一致，且结构不自然。应使用一般现在时描述一种习惯性或普遍情况，使用“makes it difficult for me to ...”更符合英语表达习惯。建议用法：用一般现在时并用“make it + adjective + for sb to do sth”结构。

× I prepare reading on the screen nowadays the usage of electronics like mobile phones can help us reading conveniently because.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen nowadays. The use of electronics like mobile phones can help us read conveniently.

问题类型：现在时态问题（Present tense issue）与动词+ing形式错误。原句中“prepare reading”用词错误，应为“prefer”；句子冗长且缺少正确句子连接，动词“help”后接动词原形或带“to”，不该用动名词“reading”。建议：用“prefer reading on a screen”表达偏好，第二句用“The use of... can help us read”或“can help us to read”。

× They can show us some literal literacy.

✓ They can show us some written content.

问题类型：动词+ -ing形式问题（Verb + -ing form）/ 形容词名词使用不当。原句“literal literacy”词不当，含义模糊且搭配错误。改为“written content”更清晰且自然。建议：注意词汇搭配，选择合适名词短语表达意思。

× When I have to read carefully, it's doing exam because exam have a necessity for me to read the detail of the articles and give the right answer.

✓ When I have to read carefully, it is for doing exams because exams require me to read the details of the articles and give the right answers.

问题类型：过去时问题（Past tense issue）与主谓一致及句子结构问题。原句用“it's doing exam”不合英语习惯，应说“it is for doing exams”或更自然的“it is when I take exams”。此外“exam have”主谓不一致，应为“exams require”；“read the detail”应为“read the details”；“give the right answer”根据复数可改为“give the right answers”。建议：注意主谓一致和名词的复数形式，使用更自然的表达如“when I take exams”或“for exams”。

× Compared to the exam. I think the daily reading like novel something like that is more.

✓ Compared to exams, I think daily reading, like novels and similar material, is easier.

问题类型：主谓一致/句子结构错误（Subject-verb agreement / Sentence structure errors）。原句断句不当并且“is more”未说明比较方向；“novel”需用复数“novels”。改为完整比较句并明确比较内容。建议：完整表达比较的对象和结果，注意名词复数和句子连贯性。

× I prefer skating because scanning can make me catch the main point of the articles or the essays compared to the scanning detail reading is cause more energy for me.

✓ I prefer scanning because scanning lets me grasp the main points of articles or essays; detailed reading uses more of my energy.

问题类型：现在时态问题（Present tense issue）与动词形式及语序错误。原句“prefer skating”应为“prefer scanning”（拼写错误导致意思错误），并且“make me catch”不如“lets me grasp”自然；“scanning detail reading is cause more energy”语序错误且动词搭配错，应改为“detailed reading uses more of my energy”。建议：注意拼写(scanning vs skating)、动词搭配（let/allow/enable + object + to-infinitive 或 let + object + bare infinitive），以及句子分号或连接词来分开对比句子。