Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và tính mạch lạc: câu trả lời hiện tại có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, lặp từ và một số phần thiếu rõ ràng. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ thể loại sách, thời gian đọc) và kết thúc gọn gàng. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi phát âm/viết như “and and”, “can have can”.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially in the evening to relax after a long day. I usually read fiction because it helps me escape daily stress, and I often spend about an hour before bed with a book.

提案: Sửa ngữ pháp, từ vựng và hoàn chỉnh ý: câu trả lời bị lỗi cấu trúc (thiếu động từ, sai từ) và chưa kết thúc ý. Nên nêu rõ quan điểm (screen/paper), đưa lý do cụ thể (portability, battery? eye strain?) và kết luận ngắn. Dùng từ chính xác như “device”, “prefer paper for focus”, tránh mơ hồ như “power stable".

例: I generally prefer reading on a screen because it’s more convenient and I can store hundreds of books on one device. However, I prefer paper books when I need to concentrate, because paper reduces eye strain and distractions.

提案: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, chính tả và tính rõ ràng: sửa các lỗi như “come”→“comes”, “reach”→“read”, hoàn thiện câu “can cause problem” và thêm ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (for example, however) để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: I read carefully when the text is important, such as legal documents, study materials or instructions, because missing small details can cause problems. However, I usually skim news and social media posts just to get the main points.

提案: Sửa ngữ pháp, thời thì và chọn từ chính xác: dùng “depends” thay vì “depend”, “short on time” thay vì “shorten times”, “detailed reading” (noun) và sửa “reach/ take books”. Thêm cấu trúc liên kết (if…then, however) và cụ thể hoá ví dụ (khi đọc email, báo cáo, tiểu thuyết).

例: It depends on the situation: when I’m short on time I prefer scanning to pick out key information quickly. However, for novels or books I want to enjoy, I prefer detailed reading so I can fully understand the content.

× I wouldn't say I am an average reader or such a good book can have can really help me switch off and and escape from daily stress.

✓ I wouldn't say I am an average reader, but a really good book can help me switch off and escape from daily stress.

The original sentence has repetition ('can have can'), extra conjunctions ('or such') and duplicated words ('and and'), causing a sentence structure error. Combine ideas with appropriate conjunctions and remove duplicates: use 'but' to contrast, keep 'can help' once, and remove the extra 'and'. Also add a comma before 'but' for clarity.

× I generally prefer reading on screen because it more convenient and power stable.

✓ I generally prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient and power-efficient.

Missing the verb 'is' causes an adjective usage problem; 'power stable' is incorrect adjective choice. Add 'is' to form 'it is more convenient' and use the adjective 'power-efficient' to describe low power usage.

× I can carry hundreds of books on one of the device which save a lot of space, but I still live a reading paper when I focus or.

✓ I can carry hundreds of books on one device, which saves a lot of space, but I still love reading on paper when I need to focus.

Errors include incorrect article 'one of the device', wrong verb form 'save' (should agree with 'which' referring to singular 'device'), wrong verb 'live' for 'love', and awkward phrasing 'reading paper' and 'focus or'. Correct by using 'one device', 'saves', 'love', 'reading on paper', and 'when I need to focus.' This addresses present participle and subject-verb agreement issues.

× I usually read carefully when it come to important document, study material or instruction, but because missing the small details can cause problem in.

✓ I usually read carefully when it comes to important documents, study materials, or instructions, because missing small details can cause problems.

Several subject-verb agreement and pluralization errors: use 'comes' to agree with 'it' in 'when it comes to', and plural nouns 'documents', 'materials', 'instructions'. Also rephrase the latter clause to 'because missing small details can cause problems' to be grammatical.

× On the other hand, when I reach news or social media, I tend to skim through.

✓ On the other hand, when I read news or browse social media, I tend to skim through.

The verb 'reach' is incorrect here. Use 'read' for news and 'browse' for social media. This fixes the verb choice and the action being described.

× It's really depend on the situation or if I shorten times I prefer scanning because it help me quickly pick out key information.

✓ It really depends on the situation, or if I have limited time I prefer scanning because it helps me quickly pick out key information.

Subject-verb agreement with 'depends' and 'helps' is required in the present simple. 'If I shorten times' is unidiomatic; replace with 'if I have limited time'. This keeps tense consistent and grammatically correct.

× But when I reach a novel or take books I prefer details reading because fully understand and enjoy the content.

✓ But when I read a novel or take a book, I prefer detailed reading because I can fully understand and enjoy the content.

Incorrect verbs 'reach' and 'take' and wrong noun/adjective forms 'details reading' and missing subject in 'fully understand'. Use 'read' and 'take a book', 'detailed reading' (adjective), and include subject 'I' with verb 'can fully understand' to form a complete, grammatical sentence.