Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and one brief example. Avoid hesitations and redundant phrases. Use linking words (e.g., because, however) to connect ideas.

例: I don't enjoy reading much; I prefer watching videos because they explain things faster and are more engaging. However, if I see an interesting post on Threads, I’ll read it quickly to get the main idea.

提案: Improve grammar and clarity, and avoid fillers. Give a clear topic sentence, one reason, and a specific example. Use correct article usage and name accuracy.

例: I prefer reading on a screen because it is convenient and I can access many articles and apps. For example, I often use the Threads app to read short posts throughout the day.

提案: Make sentences grammatically correct and more precise. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give a clear contrast using linking words like 'but' or 'whereas', and provide a short example of a sensitive text.

例: I don't read humorous content carefully because it's meant for quick entertainment, but I read sensitive or important material carefully. For instance, I would read a legal document or a medical article slowly to avoid misunderstandings.

提案: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, then explain your process using linking words and a concrete example. Avoid repetition and small errors (e.g., articles and tense).

例: I prefer to scan texts first to judge their relevance; if the topic interests me, I will then read it in detail. For example, I skim news headlines and only read full articles that seem important or relevant to my work.

× I do prefer watching videos rather than reading, but if I get something on like a threads then I sometimes read it.

✓ I do prefer watching videos rather than reading, but if I find something on Threads I sometimes read it.

Used 'get something on like a threads' which is ungrammatical. Replace with 'find something on Threads' and capitalize proper noun. Also remove extraneous 'like' and incorrect article 'a'. Use 'find' (present simple) to express encountering content online; this fits the general preference context.

× Uh, I do prefer read on a screen.

✓ Uh, I do prefer reading on a screen.

After 'prefer' when expressing a general preference, use the gerund (verb + -ing) when no infinitive marker 'to' is present. 'Prefer read' is incorrect; 'prefer reading' is correct.

× Uh, there's one application that's called Treads and I like it very much.

✓ Uh, there's one application that's called Threads and I like it very much.

Proper noun 'Threads' (name of an application) should be spelled correctly and treated as a name; no article change needed. Correcting spelling prevents misunderstanding.

× I read almost every post which comes on the app.

✓ I read almost every post that appears on the app.

Use 'that appears' (present simple) instead of 'which comes on' for natural collocation; 'appears' agrees with singular 'post' and is a better verb choice. 'Which' is acceptable but 'that' is more common in restrictive clauses.

× If there is something funny, I do not read it carefully, but if something is just so much sensitive and need more attention, then I read it very carefully.

✓ If there is something funny, I do not read it carefully, but if something is very sensitive and needs more attention, I read it very carefully.

Errors: 'so much sensitive' is ungrammatical—use 'very sensitive' or 'quite sensitive'; subject-verb agreement: 'something ... need' should be 'needs'. Also simplify word order by removing 'then' which is unnecessary. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× I do prefer scanning first because if the topic is relevant to me and I find it quite interesting, then I'll start reading it.

✓ I prefer scanning first because if the topic is relevant to me and I find it interesting, I'll start reading it.

Unnecessary auxiliary 'do' in affirmative statement—'I prefer' is more natural. 'Quite interesting' is okay, but 'interesting' is sufficient. Use 'I'll start' (future) to indicate the subsequent action; keep tense consistent for conditional habitual contexts.