Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more organized and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (avoid repetition and fillers like 'uh'/'um'). Use linking words (for example, 'for instance' or 'also') and correct grammar for tense and plurality.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. For instance, the last book I read was Baba Nanak Singhji, a religious book about Sikhism. I also like novels and autobiographies, and I have been reading since childhood.

提案: Give a clear reasoned answer using one or two specific advantages, avoid hesitations and repetitions, and finish with a short concluding clause. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' properly.

例: I prefer to read on paper because I can underline and highlight important passages with a pen, which helps me remember information. Also, paper books are easier for me to carry and read comfortably, so I usually choose them.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and follow with a clear contrast using linking words like 'however' or 'but'. Provide one concrete example of careful reading and one of casual reading.

例: You need to read carefully when studying for exams or when learning new material because accuracy matters. However, for casual reading—such as browsing social media or light articles—skimming is usually enough.

提案: Be concise and consistent: state your preference clearly, then give two specific contexts (when you use detailed reading and when you scan). Avoid contradictions and remove fillers. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'whereas'.

例: I prefer detailed reading when I need to understand complex ideas, for example, academic texts or novels. Whereas for newspapers or social media posts I usually scan to get the main points quickly.

× Like reading yes I do like reading uh, I love to read books the last book that I read is Baba Nanak Singhji it's a religious book of Sikhism.

✓ Yes, I like reading. I love to read books. The last book I read was Baba Nanak Singhji; it's a religious book about Sikhism.

Run-on sentence and incorrect tense consistency. The original combined multiple ideas without proper punctuation or sentence boundaries. Use separate sentences and the past tense 'was' for 'the last book I read' to match the past reading action. Suggestion: Break long thoughts into shorter sentences and ensure tense matches the time referred to.

× So I uh love to read another books 2 novels, autobiography, everything even I in in my childhood I used.

✓ So I love to read other books, like novels and autobiographies; I have read everything. Even in my childhood I used to read a lot.

Incorrect article/quantifier and awkward phrasing. 'Another books' is wrong; use 'other books'. 'Autobiography' should be plural when listing types. 'I used' is incomplete; the idiom is 'I used to' for past habitual actions. Suggestion: Use 'other' for plural nouns, make list items plural when general, and use 'used to' for past habits.

× Well, I prefer to read on paper because on paper, uh, we can underline it, highlight it with the help of pen and uh, it's uh, way too, way more easy for me to re to carry it because, uh, umm.

✓ Well, I prefer to read on paper because we can underline and highlight with a pen, and it's much easier for me to carry.

Article and word choice errors: 'the help of pen' should be 'with a pen'. 'Way too, way more easy' is awkward; use 'much easier'. Remove redundant words and pronoun 'it' after 'underline' and 'highlight' is unnecessary. Suggestion: Use concise phrasing, 'with a pen', and 'much easier' for comparisons.

× Well, if we are reading for cracking any exam or we are, uh, we want to gain some knowledge, then we have to read carefully.

✓ Well, if we are reading to prepare for an exam or to gain knowledge, then we have to read carefully.

Incorrect verb form 'for cracking any exam' is unnatural; use 'to prepare for an exam'. Also simplify parallel structure: 'to prepare' and 'to gain' are parallel infinitives. Suggestion: Use 'to prepare for' instead of 'for cracking', and keep parallel verb forms.

× Otherwise it's not like that, uh.

✓ Otherwise, it is not like that.

Awkward spoken filler removed; change contraction and add comma for clarity. The sentence is vague but grammatically fine after cleanup. Suggestion: Avoid filler words and use complete forms in formal speech.

× Well, uh, for example, point of view, I prefer detailed reading and if I am just reading newspaper or any social media post, then I don't do scan.

✓ For example, from my point of view, I prefer detailed reading. If I am just reading a newspaper or a social media post, then I scan instead of reading in detail.

Missing preposition 'from' and awkward phrase 'I don't do scan'. Use 'scan' as a verb and correct articles 'a newspaper' and 'a social media post'. Split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'from my point of view' and 'scan' as a verb: 'I scan'.

× Uh, still reading. I prefer at that time to scan because, uh, I don't think so we have to pay too much attention on trying to.

✓ If I'm just browsing, I prefer to scan because I don't think we need to pay too much attention.

Fragment 'still reading' is incomplete. 'I don't think so we have to' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't think we need to'. Preposition 'on trying to' is incorrect and unnecessary. Ensure concise clause structure. Suggestion: Replace fragments with full clauses, use 'need to' for necessity, and remove unnecessary 'trying to'.