Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (verb forms, articles), and avoid redundancy. Briefly mention types you enjoy and give one specific current example with correct title and author phrasing. Use linking words only if adding a detail.

例: I enjoy reading, especially fiction and romance. Currently I'm reading '2 States' by the Indian author Chetan Bhagat, which explores cultural differences between two families. I like it because the characters feel realistic and the plot is engaging.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, fix pronouns and articles, and give one short reason with a supporting detail. Reduce hesitations and repetition.

例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because screens make my eyes tired after a short time. For example, when I read on paper I can concentrate longer and enjoy the book without discomfort.

提案: Begin with a clear statement about situations needing careful reading, then contrast with examples of when skimming is acceptable. Use specific contexts and linking words (for example, however). Avoid vague phrases and filler words.

例: I read carefully when I study or need to understand instructions, for example when preparing for exams or following a recipe. However, I usually skim sections that are background or unimportant to save time, such as long descriptions that do not affect the plot.

提案: State your preference clearly (scanning or detailed) and give concise reasons with an example. Remove fillers and repeated words. Use linking words such as because or therefore to connect idea and make answer coherent.

例: I prefer scanning when I read for general information because it helps me find the key points quickly. For example, when I research a topic online I scan headings and first sentences to decide which articles deserve a detailed read later.

× Yes, I like a lot to read a different type of books by but my main interest is toward the fiction ones and also toward the romantic.

✓ Yes, I like to read a lot of different types of books, but my main interest is in fiction, especially romance.

The sentence misorders adverb and verb ('like a lot to read' should be 'like to read a lot') and uses incorrect adjective forms ('a different type of books' should be 'different types of books'). 'Toward' is incorrect in this context; use 'in' to express interest. Also 'romantic' used as a noun is wrong; use 'romance' as the genre. Suggestion: place adverbs close to the verb ('like to read a lot'), pluralize 'type' when followed by 'books', and use correct noun forms for genres.

× Currently I'm reading a book named as A2 Stages that is wrote by a famous Indian writer Chetan Bhagat.

✓ Currently I'm reading a book called A2 Stages that was written by the famous Indian writer Chetan Bhagat.

The passive requires the past participle 'written', not the simple past 'wrote'. Also 'named as' is unnatural; use 'called'. Use 'was written' to indicate past action. Suggestion: use past participle after 'was' in passive constructions ('was written').

× Her to read things on a physical copies because, uh, on the screen I feel hard because after reading some time my uh, I start getting irritated.

✓ I prefer to read things on physical copies because reading on a screen is difficult; after some time I start getting irritated.

'Her' is incorrect pronoun; should be 'I prefer'. 'A physical copies' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'physical copies' or 'a physical copy'. 'I feel hard' is ungrammatical; use 'is difficult'. Remove filler words and rearrange for clarity. Suggestion: start with subject 'I', match articles to noun number, and use adjectives like 'difficult' for experiences.

× So mostly I, I try to have a physical copies of reading that I.

✓ So mostly I try to have a physical copy to read.

The sentence has repeated filler 'I, I' and incorrect structure 'have a physical copies of reading that I'. Use singular 'a physical copy' or plural without 'a'. Simplify verb phrase to 'have a physical copy to read'. Suggestion: remove repetitions and use concise structure 'try to have a physical copy to read'.

× Thing that needs a practical attention.

✓ Things that need practical attention.

The sentence fragment lacks proper subject-verb agreement and is singular while generalizing. 'Thing' should be plural 'Things' and 'needs' should be 'need' to agree. Also 'a practical attention' is incorrect; use 'practical attention' without article. Suggestion: use plural when referring generally and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× So that thing we have to read properly and with the full of concentration.

✓ So those things we have to read properly and with full concentration.

'That thing' should be plural 'those things' to match previous sentence. 'With the full of concentration' is ungrammatical; use 'with full concentration' or 'with full attention'. Remove unnecessary article 'the'. Suggestion: match number and use idiomatic phrase 'full concentration'.

× Uh, but the things like, uh, uh, some, there are some examples that are not important in the book.

✓ But some examples in the book are not important.

The original is wordy and uses awkward filler phrases. Simplify by stating subject then predicate. Remove redundant pronouns and expletives. Suggestion: use concise constructions: 'But some examples in the book are not important.'

× So I think I usually like skip those ones because it's not seems important for me.

✓ So I think I usually skip those parts because they do not seem important to me.

'Like skip' is incorrect; use 'skip' or 'like to skip'. 'Those ones' is informal; use 'those parts'. 'It's not seems' mixes 'it is' with 'seem'; correct form is 'they do not seem'. Also use 'to me' for personal opinion. Suggestion: choose correct verb forms for negation ('do not seem') and use appropriate nouns.

× Recently I always like, uh, uh, skip the things that are not, uh, important.

✓ Recently I have been skipping things that are not important.

Use present perfect continuous ('have been skipping') for recent habitual actions continuing to present. 'I always like skip' is ungrammatical; either 'I always skip' or 'I like to skip'. Remove fillers. Suggestion: use 'have been' + verb-ing for ongoing recent habits or 'always skip' for general habit.

× Uh, but uh, I, I, I know like, it's not a good thing, but, uh, for some cases, I think it's important because there, there are, uh, not all the things are that are important in those, uh, taxis.

✓ But I know it's not a good habit, and in some cases I think it's important because not everything in those texts is important.

The original has many fillers and repetitions and a wrong word 'taxis' instead of 'texts'. 'Not all the things are that are important' is ungrammatical; use 'not everything ... is important'. Suggestion: remove fillers, use 'habit' for behavior, and correct 'texts' spelling; use concise clause order: reason then result.

× So that's why I try to like skip these things.

✓ So that's why I try to skip these things.

'Try to like skip' mixes 'like' with 'try to' and is informal; simply use 'try to skip'. The unnecessary 'like' should be removed. Suggestion: avoid filler 'like' in formal responses and use correct infinitive structure 'try to + verb'.