Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Speak more fluently and reduce fillers (uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then support with two concise reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I am a medical student, so studying medical subjects often requires a lot of reading'). Keep answers within 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I love reading. It helps me relax, and as a medical student I often need to read textbooks and articles, so reading is both useful and enjoyable for me.

提案: Be concise and correct vocabulary (avoid repetition like 'of the book' and incorrect words like 'smile'). Use a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons connected with linking words. Correct small grammar issues.

例: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy flipping the pages and feeling their texture. Also, printed books have a pleasant smell and make reading feel more immersive than screens.

提案: Organize your answer with a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., 'when'/'whereas'). Fix pronunciation/word choice errors ('recapfully' → 'read carefully', 'screen' → 'skim') and be specific about what you do when reading carefully (e.g., underline key points, take notes). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: I need to read carefully during exams or when studying long case scenarios because I must extract key facts and sometimes take notes. In contrast, when I read a casual storybook I usually skim to get the general idea without focusing on every detail.

提案: Use correct terms ('detailed reading' not 'detail rating') and a clear topic sentence. Explain reasons with linking words and give a concise example. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences; aim for grammatical clarity (e.g., 'the writer is trying to convey').

例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the ideas the writer wants to convey. For example, if a novel has a complex scene, I often re-read the passage and take notes to grasp its meaning.

× Yes, I love reading because UH reading helped me to calm my mind down and beside that I'm a medical student which studying the medical UH item often require a lot of reading and I also love uh reading books.

✓ Yes, I love reading because reading helps me to calm my mind down and besides that I'm a medical student, which means studying medical subjects often requires a lot of reading, and I also love reading books.

Multiple errors: 'helped' is past tense but the context is general, so present simple 'helps' is correct (Present tense issue, ID 6). 'Beside that' should be 'besides that' (Incorrect use of prepositions/words, ID 11). The relative clause 'which studying the medical item' is ungrammatical; it should be rephrased to 'which means studying medical subjects' (Sentence structure/relative clause error, ID 26). 'item' is incorrect word choice -> 'subjects'. 'require' must agree with singular noun phrase 'studying medical subjects' as a singular activity, so 'requires' (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Suggestions: use present simple for habitual facts, replace 'beside' with 'besides', rephrase the relative clause to use 'means' or 'which requires', and ensure subject-verb agreement with 'requires'.

× Personally, I prefer to read on paper because I like to flip the book and I like to feel the texture of the book, of the pages of the book. And also I have I really love to the smile of the book where it smells really good.

✓ Personally, I prefer to read on paper because I like to flip the book and feel the texture of the pages. I also really love the smell of books when they smell good.

Problems: wordy repetition 'texture of the book, of the pages of the book' should be simplified to 'texture of the pages' (Sentence structure, ID 26). 'I have I really love to the smile of the book' contains several errors: 'smile' is wrong word; correct is 'smell' (Incorrect use of adjectives or words, ID 13). 'to the smell' is incorrect preposition and infinitive use; correct is 'I really love the smell of books' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Suggestions: remove redundancy, choose correct noun 'smell', and use natural prepositions 'the smell of'.

× I need to recapfully, especially during the exam where the scenario given is really long, that I need to read carefully and extract the important point.

✓ I need to read carefully, especially during exams when the scenarios given are really long, because I need to extract the important points.

Errors: 'recapfully' is not a word; intended meaning is 'read carefully' (Incorrect use of words/adverbs, ID 13). Adverb placement and sentence structure are awkward; move 'read carefully' into correct position (Incorrect adverb placement, ID 20). 'the exam' should be plural or general 'exams' and 'scenario given' should be 'scenarios given' for agreement (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). 'important point' should be plural 'important points' to match context (Incorrect use of quantifiers/number, ID 14). Suggestions: use the correct adverbial phrase 'read carefully', adjust noun number to plural where general, and clarify the causal link 'because I need to extract...'.

× And when I don't, the time that I don't need to read carefully is maybe when I just read a like a random storybook, I would just briefly screen to and understand the rough idea.

✓ And when I don't, the times I don't need to read carefully are when I read a random storybook; I just briefly skim through it to understand the rough idea.

Problems: 'the time that I don't need' is awkward; use 'the times I don't need' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). 'read a like a random storybook' contains filler 'a like a' and should be 'read a random storybook' (Sentence structure, ID 26). 'I would just briefly screen to' uses wrong verb 'screen' and wrong modal 'would'—use present simple 'I just briefly skim through it' for habitual/general statement (Present tense issue, ID 6 and Modal verb usage, ID 4). Suggestions: remove filler, use correct verb 'skim through', and use present simple for habitual actions.

× I personally I prefer detail rating because through detail reading I can really understand what the meaning that the reader trying to the the writer trying to convey. For example, even though a raving to the novel, I will read to again and again if I don't understand the the part that.

✓ I personally prefer detailed reading because through detailed reading I can really understand the meaning that the writer is trying to convey. For example, even though I am reading a novel, I will read parts again and again if I don't understand them.

Errors: 'detail rating' should be 'detailed reading'—use adjective + noun or noun phrase with -ing (Verb + -ing form / adjective use, ID 8 and 13). 'what the meaning that the reader trying to the the writer trying to convey' is garbled: correct is 'the meaning that the writer is trying to convey' (Incorrect pronoun/word use and verb form, IDs 12 and 9). 'a raving to the novel' likely intended 'reading a novel'—use present participle or present continuous 'I am reading a novel' (Verb in the present participle form, ID 10). 'read to again and again' should be 'read parts again and again' and 'the the part that' corrected to 'them' (Pronoun agreement and sentence structure, IDs 12 and 26). Suggestions: use 'detailed reading', use 'is trying to convey', choose correct verbs 'reading' and 'read again', and ensure pronoun agreement for 'parts/them'.