Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I do) then give one or two specific reasons with brief examples. Avoid repetition and grammar errors (e.g., subject-verb agreement) and keep to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words (because, for example, also) appropriately.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading because it helps me learn new ideas and improve my language skills. For example, reading novels and articles has expanded my vocabulary and taught me different ways to express myself.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and use clear contrasting linking words (while, whereas). Reduce filler words (uh) and improve tense consistency. Provide one specific example for each format to sound natural and complete.

例: I like both, but for different situations. At home I prefer paper books because they are more comfortable to read for long periods, whereas when I travel I use my phone or tablet because it is more convenient and portable.

提案: Start with a clear statement, then use linking words (for example, whereas) to contrast situations. Avoid hesitation and simplify phrasing. Give one clear specific example of an important item to read carefully and one for casual reading.

例: I need to read carefully when the information is important, for example emails from my employer or official documents that affect my job. In contrast, I can skim comics or jokes because they are for entertainment and details are not crucial.

提案: Finish your answer fully and clearly. Use a clear topic sentence and then a contrasting supporting sentence with specific examples. Eliminate fillers and correct grammar (e.g., "go into the topic in depth"). Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

例: I use both scanning and detailed reading depending on the task. For example, I scan emails or news headlines to get the gist quickly, but I read contracts or study materials in detail to understand all the important points.

× Indefinitely. I like reading because reading play indispensable role in our life like we can enhance our knowledge with the phrases, sentences, compounds, sentences, complex sentences so we can learn lot of things. Apart from this we can learn the meaning of our life with the help of the reading. So I prefer to enjoy the.

✓ Definitely. I like reading because reading plays an indispensable role in our lives; for example, we can enhance our knowledge with phrases, simple and complex sentences, and other structures, so we can learn a lot of things. Apart from that, we can learn the meaning of life with the help of reading, so I enjoy it.

The speaker used 'Indefinitely' incorrectly; the correct word is 'Definitely' (adverb usage). Also 'play' should be 'plays' (subject-verb agreement, see suggestion below) and 'our life' should be 'our lives' (plural form for people). 'lot of things' needs an article: 'a lot of things'. 'the reading' is unnatural; 'reading' without the article fits better. Suggestions: use precise adverbs ('definitely'), ensure verbs agree with subjects, use plural nouns for groups of people, and include articles where required. Note: This suggestion addresses adjective/adverb misuse and contains corrections that overlap with subject-verb agreement and article/plural issues; follow-up entries cover those specific error types.

× I like reading because reading play indispensable role in our life like we can enhance our knowledge with the phrases, sentences, compounds, sentences, complex sentences so we can learn lot of things.

✓ I like reading because reading plays an indispensable role in our lives; for example, we can enhance our knowledge with phrases, simple and complex sentences, and other structures, so we can learn a lot of things.

The noun 'reading' is singular and requires the singular verb 'plays' rather than 'play'. Also 'our life' should be 'our lives' when referring to people collectively. 'lot of things' requires the article 'a lot'. Suggestion: identify the subject (reading) and ensure the verb form matches (plays). Use plural nouns for groups and include articles where needed.

× Apart from this we can learn the meaning of our life with the help of the reading.

✓ Apart from that, we can learn the meaning of life with the help of reading.

The phrase 'the meaning of our life' is awkward; 'the meaning of life' or 'the meaning of our lives' is more natural. 'the reading' is unnecessary; uncountable nouns like 'reading' do not need 'the' here. Suggestion: omit the definite article for abstract uncountable nouns and choose plural or general phrasing when referring to people collectively.

× we can enhance our knowledge with the phrases, sentences, compounds, sentences, complex sentences so we can learn lot of things.

✓ we can enhance our knowledge with phrases, simple and complex sentences, and compound sentences, so we can learn a lot of things.

The original repeats 'sentences' and misorders 'compound' vs 'complex'; also 'lot of things' needs 'a lot of things'. Use plural nouns consistently and correct noun forms ('compound sentences'). Suggestion: avoid repetition, list items clearly, and include articles like 'a' where needed.

× I prefer both, uh, when I was at my home, so I prefer to read by the book and when I was going out or, uh, I was at my workplace or I'm traveling from one place to another place at that time, I prefer to read by screen.

✓ I prefer both. When I am at home, I prefer to read from a book, and when I am going out, at my workplace, or traveling from one place to another, I prefer to read on a screen.

The speaker inconsistently mixes past tense ('was') with present preference 'prefer'. Use present simple to describe habitual preferences: 'I am at home' not 'I was at my home'. Prepositions: use 'read from a book' and 'read on a screen'. Also use 'a screen' or 'on my screen'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent for habits (present simple) and use correct prepositions for reading media.

× I prefer to read by the book and ... I prefer to read by screen.

✓ I prefer to read from a book ... I prefer to read on a screen.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect for describing the medium of reading. Use 'from' with 'book' and 'on' with 'screen'. Suggestion: learn common collocations: 'read from a book', 'read on a screen', 'read an article in a magazine'.

× when I was going out or, uh, I was at my workplace or I'm traveling from one place to another place at that time, I prefer to read by screen.

✓ When I go out, am at my workplace, or am traveling from one place to another, I prefer to read on a screen.

The original uses past tense 'was going out' and 'was at my workplace' while describing general habits; present simple or present continuous for habitual actions is appropriate. Also maintain parallel structure: 'when I go out, am at my workplace, or am traveling'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual preferences and keep verb forms parallel.

× Uh, according to my point of view, if you have an important message like, uh, emails from the government or emails from the workplace manager or anything else, it's important to read the message carefully.

✓ According to my point of view, if you have an important message, such as emails from the government or your workplace manager, it is important to read it carefully.

Use consistent present tense and clear pronoun reference: 'the message' is better as 'it' after 'a message'. Also 'workplace manager' is better as 'your workplace manager' or 'your manager'. Suggestion: simplify phrasing and ensure pronouns clearly refer to their antecedents.

× And when we are reading about comic, comic book or comic action or a joke, then it's, uh, I don't think so.

✓ And when we are reading comics, a comic book, or jokes, then we do not need to read carefully, I think.

'comic' as a noun is misused; plural 'comics' or 'a comic book' is correct. The phrase 'it's, uh, I don't think so' is unclear; better to say 'we do not need to read carefully'. Suggestion: use clear noun forms and avoid filler words; state the opinion directly.

× I prefer both in different situations, uh, for example when I have to read something important, then I prefer to go to the uh, go to the topic in the depth or if I found find like uh.

✓ I prefer both in different situations. For example, when I have to read something important, I prefer to study the topic in depth, but if I find something less important, I scan it.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repetitions ('go to the uh, go to the topic') and incomplete ideas ('if I found find like uh'). Fix by creating two clear sentences, using the idiom 'in depth', and completing the contrasting clause ('scan it'). Suggestion: avoid filler words, complete comparative clauses, and use standard expressions like 'in depth' and 'scan' for quick reading.