Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ปรับไวยากรณ์ คำศัพท์ และการออกเสียงคำที่เขียนผิด รวมทั้งจัดประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น: กล่าวตอบตรงคำถามด้วยประโยคหัวเรื่อง แล้วเสริมเหตุผลสั้น ๆ (ไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค) ใช้คำว่า "reading" ไม่ใช่ "leading" และใช้พหูพจน์/เอกพจน์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น "comics have pictures" หรือ "comic books are colorful"

例: I don't enjoy reading textbooks because I find them boring. However, I like reading comic books because they are fun and have colorful pictures.

提案: แก้คำศัพท์ที่ผิด (leading -> reading, skin -> screen) และปรับโครงสร้างประโยคให้กระชับ ใช้ linking word อย่างเหมาะสม เช่น "because" เดียวพอ และระบุเหตุผลที่ชัดเจนเป็นข้อ ๆ ใช้ไวยากรณ์รูป gerund/infinitive ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น "keep everything on my phone"

例: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient. I can keep all my books on my phone and quickly search for interesting titles online.

提案: ปรับคำศัพท์และความชัดเจน: ใช้คำว่า "read" แทน "lead" และอธิบายให้ชัดเจนว่าทำไมหัวข้อบางอย่างต้องอ่านอย่างละเอียด ให้ตัวอย่างและเชื่อมคำด้วย linking words เช่น "because" หรือ "while" เพื่อเปรียบเทียบสองสถานการณ์

例: I need to read carefully when the topic is news, politics, or the environment because those subjects can be sensitive and require accurate information. In contrast, I don't read entertainment news as carefully because it's usually less serious.

提案: ปรับโครงสร้างประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติและชัดเจน หลีกเลี่ยงการซ้ำซ้อน ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่ออธิบายผลลัพธ์ เช่น "so" หรือ "therefore" และแก้กลุ่มคำที่ผิด เช่น "quickly I get idea" -> "I can quickly get the main idea"

例: I prefer scanning because it's easier and I can quickly get the main idea. Therefore, I can make a list of topics to read in more detail later.

× I don't like reading textbooks because I think they are boring, but I like leading comics because they are fun and have picture.

✓ I don't like reading textbooks because I think they are boring, but I like reading comics because they are fun and have pictures.

The verb 'leading' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'reading'. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'comics' (plural) and general meaning. Suggestion: replace 'leading' with 'reading' and use plural 'pictures' when referring to multiple images.

× I prefer to lead on a skin because it's easy and convenient, because I can letting everything on my phone and I can search interesting book on Internet and by leading.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because it's easy and convenient, because I can keep everything on my phone and I can search for interesting books on the Internet and by reading.

Multiple preposition and word choice errors: 'on a skin' should be 'on a screen'. 'Letting everything on my phone' is incorrect; use 'keep everything on my phone'. 'Search interesting book on Internet' needs 'search for interesting books on the Internet'. Also 'leading' should be 'reading'. Suggestion: use correct nouns and prepositions: 'on a screen', 'keep ... on my phone', 'search for ... on the Internet', and match plural 'books'.

× I prefer to lead on a skin because it's easy and convenient, because I can letting everything on my phone and I can search interesting book on Internet and by leading.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because it's easy and convenient, because I can keep everything on my phone and I can search for interesting books on the Internet and by reading.

The form 'can letting' is incorrect; after modal or auxiliary verbs we use the base form: 'can keep' not 'can keeping/letting'. Also 'by leading' should be 'by reading' (gerund used after 'by'). Suggestion: use base verbs after 'can' and gerund after 'by'.

× When I need to lead carefully about news, politics and environment because there are sensitive titles and when not carefully is news entertainment.

✓ When I need to read carefully about news, politics and the environment because there are sensitive topics, and when not careful it is entertainment news.

Use 'read' not 'lead'. 'About news, politics and environment' needs article 'the' before 'environment' and 'topics' rather than 'titles'. 'When not carefully' is incorrect adverb/adjective order; use 'when not careful' and rephrase to 'it is entertainment news'. Suggestion: use 'read', add 'the environment', replace 'titles' with 'topics', and use adjective 'careful' after 'when'.

× When I need to lead carefully about news, politics and environment because there are sensitive titles and when not carefully is news entertainment.

✓ When I need to read carefully about news, politics and the environment because there are sensitive topics, and when not careful it is entertainment news.

Use of 'need to lead' shows wrong verb; context requires present tense 'read'. Ensure verbs agree with habitual/factual present: 'need to read' and 'it is'. Suggestion: use simple present tense for general statements.

× I prefer scanning because it's easy and quickly I get idea for details and I can list next to topic.

✓ I prefer scanning because it's easy and I quickly get an idea of the details and I can list the next topics.

Word order and adjective/adverb use: 'quickly I get idea' should be 'I quickly get an idea'. Need article 'an' before 'idea'. 'Get idea for details' should be 'an idea of the details'. 'List next to topic' is unclear; likely 'list the next topics' or 'list topics next'. Suggestion: place adverbs correctly (usually before main verb), include articles, and use plural 'topics' if listing multiple items.