Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Mejora la naturalidad y corrige errores menores. Evita repeticiones (“to to”, “a lot”) y reduce la respuesta a 3–4 oraciones claras. Añade un enlace lógico entre hábitos y géneros. Por ejemplo, menciona cuándo y por qué lees esos géneros con un detalle específico (autor o título) para mostrar vocabulario relevante.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read for 20–30 minutes before bed and try to finish 5–10 pages each night. I prefer science fiction and historical nonfiction, especially books by Isaac Asimov and biographies about World War II.

提案: Corrige la fluidez y la pronunciación, evita muletillas (“uh”) y errores léxicos (“dining paper”). Usa una oración tema seguida de una razón clara con un contraste usando linking words (e.g., however, now).

例: I used to prefer paper books; however, since I bought a Kindle I mostly read on a screen because it’s lighter and I can adjust the font size.

提案: Mejora la corrección gramatical y la precisión léxica. Elimina duplicaciones (“there is there are”), usa formas verbales correctas (“when I read”) y ofrece ejemplos específicos de documentos de trabajo que requieren atención para demostrar contenido concreto.

例: I need to read very carefully at work, especially when I review contracts or compliance regulations, because small errors can have serious consequences. By contrast, when I read science fiction for leisure I can skim and relax without focusing on every detail.

提案: Elimina muletillas y mejora la estructura: empieza con la respuesta directa y sigue con razones específicas y concisas usando linking words (e.g., because, since, therefore). Añade ejemplos concretos de lo que pierdes al escanear para mostrar precisión.

例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me notice important details like dates and names. For example, when I study historical texts I read carefully to understand timelines and factual information.

× I usually read when I go to to the bed and I always try to read at least 5 to 10 pages.

✓ I usually read when I go to bed and I always try to read at least 5 to 10 pages.

The phrase 'to to the bed' contains a duplicated infinitive marker 'to' and an unnecessary article 'the' before 'bed'. In English we say 'go to bed' (no article) when referring to the action of going to sleep. Remove the extra 'to' and 'the' to make the phrase natural and grammatically correct.

× I always try to read at least 5 to 10 pages.

✓ I always try to read at least 5 pages or up to 10 pages.

The expression 'at least 5 to 10 pages' mixes 'at least' with a range, which is confusing. Use 'at least 5 pages' to indicate a minimum, or '5 to 10 pages' to indicate a range. Here 'at least 5 pages or up to 10 pages' clarifies the intended meaning.

× I like reading science fiction books and historical papers.

✓ I like reading science fiction books and history books.

'Historical papers' usually refers to academic articles about history, which may not match the intended meaning. If the student means books about history, 'history books' is clearer and more natural. This corrects the noun choice to match common collocations.

× I used to like reading on paper, but, uh, after I bought a Kindle, I like reading on screen most, uh, dining paper.

✓ I used to like reading on paper, but after I bought a Kindle, I prefer reading on a screen to reading on paper.

The original contains 'most, uh, dining paper' which appears to be a mispronunciation or typo. Also, 'I used to like' (past habit) contrasted with a present preference should use 'prefer' or 'like ... more'. The correction uses 'prefer ... to ...' which is the correct comparative structure and replaces the garbled phrase with 'reading on a screen to reading on paper'.

× Well, when I am working, I need to read carefully because there is there are a lot of important things and mandatory regulation that I need to take care of.

✓ Well, when I am working, I need to read carefully because there are a lot of important things and mandatory regulations that I need to take care of.

The original has duplicated 'there is there are' and a singular 'regulation' that should be plural to match 'a lot of'. Use 'there are' for plural items and 'regulations' as the plural noun. Also 'a lot of' requires a plural noun here.

× But when I reading my science fiction books, I don't need to pay a lot of attention.

✓ But when I read my science fiction books, I don't need to pay a lot of attention.

After 'when I' the base form of the verb 'read' is required in present simple: 'when I read'. 'When I reading' incorrectly uses the -ing form. Use 'read' to form the correct clause.

× I prefer detailed reading over scanning because I think you are, uh, when you are reading, you pay more attention and you, uh, don't lose any important, uh, detail and dates and names and so on.

✓ I prefer detailed reading over scanning because when you read, you pay more attention and you don't miss any important details, dates, or names.

The original sentence is disfluent and contains unnecessary filler and a second-person shift 'you are, uh'. For clarity and grammatical correctness, remove fillers and use consistent subject and verb forms: 'when you read' and 'you don't miss any important details'. Also use the plural 'details' to match 'any important' and separate items with commas.