Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答えは明確で具体例もあり良いです。ただし、発言中のため息や「uh」などのフィラーを減らし、主題文をより自然で簡潔にすることで流暢さと一貫性が向上します。また、supporting detailにもう少し具体性（どのような情報が役に立ったか）を加えると説得力が増します。

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. It often gives me new insights and practical information; for example, a business book recently helped me structure my presentation more clearly, so I referred to it when writing my report.

提案: 理由は明確ですが、文法ミスと繰り返しが見られます（例："I if"、"game source"が不明瞭）。語順と表現を整え、より自然な語彙（e.g. "mobile games"）を使うと良いです。また短い接続詞で理由と例をつなげてください。

例: I prefer reading on paper because I can focus better. If I read on an e-book app, I often get distracted and open other apps, such as mobile games.

提案: 主旨は明確ですが、文中の繰り返しや語順の乱れ（"I when I prepared"）が流暢さを損なっています。過去と現在の時制を意識し、接続表現で理由と例を自然につなげましょう。具体的にどの部分を注意するか（数字・結論など）を示すと更に良いです。

例: I need to read carefully when I handle work documents or reports. For example, before meetings I always review the presentation slides and check the figures and conclusions to avoid mistakes.

提案: 回答の構造は良いですが発音ミス（"scam"→"scan"）やフィラーがあり、語彙の正確さと流暢さを改善する必要があります。さらに、状況ごとの具体例（どんな文書を速読するか、じっくり読む本の種類）を加えると説得力が増します。

例: It depends on the situation. If I'm short on time, I usually scan work documents for key points and action items. But when I have free time, I prefer to read books thoroughly, especially novels or professional texts.

× Reading gives me a new insight and useful information.

✓ Reading gives me new insights and useful information.

'Insight' in this context should be plural ('insights') because reading produces multiple pieces of understanding; use plural to match 'useful information' which is uncountable, so parallel structure is clearer.

× I if I read by ebooks app I tend to open other apps, for example game source.

✓ If I read on an e-books app, I tend to open other apps, for example games or social media.

Use 'on' with apps, add an article 'an' before 'e-books app', and 'read by' is incorrect. 'E-books' as adjective can be hyphenated. 'Game source' is unclear; 'games or social media' is a clearer example. Also remove duplicate 'I' at start.

× For example, I when I prepared the meeting, I read the presentation documents before the meeting.

✓ For example, when I prepare for a meeting, I read the presentation documents beforehand.

Maintain present/future habitual sense to match the question about when you need to read carefully. Use 'prepare for a meeting' (infinitive) rather than 'prepared the meeting', and 'beforehand' is more natural than repeating 'before the meeting'. Change tense to present simple for regular actions.

× It depends on the situation. For example, if I have no time I always scam uh, work documents or reports uh.

✓ It depends on the situation. For example, if I have no time, I always scan work documents or reports.

Correct verb is 'scan' not 'scam'. Remove filler 'uh' and add a comma after the conditional clause. 'Scan' means to read quickly, which fits the context.