Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more natural and concise by starting with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct small grammar mistakes (prepositions, word order) and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read nonfiction books, often in the early morning and again after dinner when I relax. For example, recently I finished a short biography that gave me practical study tips.

提案: Provide a full, grammatically correct topic sentence and one clear reason with a brief example. Fix verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., 'prefer to read', 'uncomfortable').

例: I prefer to read on paper because it's easier on my eyes. For example, when I read on a screen for a long time my eyes become dry and uncomfortable, so paper feels more comfortable for extended reading.

提案: Give a clear, concise topic sentence and use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'official letters or business emails'). Use linking words to contrast the two situations and avoid unfinished phrases.

例: I need to read carefully when the information is important, such as official letters from my school or business emails. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I get junk mail or casual social media posts, because they are not important.

提案: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a brief reason and a contrasting example using linking words. Use natural phrases (e.g., 'scan quickly' rather than 'bullets on content').

例: I prefer detailed reading because I don't want to miss important information. However, scanning can be useful when I need to find a specific fact quickly, for example when looking through an article to find a date or name.

× For example I usually read a book on in early morning and also I read a book after dinner when I have a rest time.

✓ For example, I usually read a book in the early morning and I also read after dinner when I have some rest time.

Incorrect preposition and word order: 'on in early morning' is wrong; use 'in the early morning'. Also combine clauses and add 'some' before 'rest time' for natural phrasing. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× I usually read nonfiction.

✓ I usually read nonfiction.

No grammatical error: 'I usually read' correctly uses the base verb for first person. This sentence is correct and unchanged.

× I prefer read on paper because it's more convenient and.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because it's more convenient.

After 'prefer' the gerund form (verb + -ing) is required when no second verb 'to' is used. Remove the trailing 'and' and finish the sentence with the correct gerund construction.

× It feels discomfortable.

✓ It feels uncomfortable.

'Discomfortable' is not a correct English adjective; the correct adjective is 'uncomfortable'. Use the correct adjective to describe the sensation.

× I need to read carefully when I read very important information, such as official letters from my school or business meals, and I don't need to read carefully when I read a junk mail or.

✓ I need to read carefully when I read very important information, such as official letters from my school or business emails, and I don't need to read carefully when I read junk mail.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'business meals' is incorrect; intended phrase is 'business emails'. 'A junk mail' is uncountable in this context—use 'junk mail' without an article. Remove trailing 'or'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× Scanning can be useful for sometimes, but I don't want to miss any bullets on content.

✓ Scanning can be useful sometimes, but I don't want to miss any bullet points in the content.

Adverb placement: 'for sometimes' is incorrect; use 'sometimes' alone. Also use 'bullet points' for list items and 'in the content' rather than 'on content' for correct preposition.