Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce fillers (umm, uh), correct grammar (e.g. 'a reading person' -> 'a keen reader'), and add one or two specific examples. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

例: I’m not a keen reader, but I do read when I have free time. For example, I enjoy contemporary novels and popular science articles because they help me understand current events and new ideas.

提案: Start with a direct answer, correct grammar (e.g. 'on paper', 'it helps me remember for longer'), and give a specific reason with a brief example. Use one linking word to connect ideas.

例: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me remember information for longer. For instance, when I study from a textbook, I can flip through pages and highlight key points more easily.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and separate contrasting situations with a linking word (e.g. 'but' or 'however'). Fix grammar (e.g. 'for exams or interviews' and 'I don't need to remember details'). Provide one concrete example of careful reading techniques.

例: I need to read carefully for exams or job interviews because I must remember facts and details. However, when I read novels or comics I read for enjoyment and don’t try to memorise anything; for exams I usually make summary notes and highlight key facts.

提案: Answer directly, correct word choice (use 'scan' or 'skimming' vs 'detailed reading'), and explain when you use each method with a clear linking phrase. Keep it to 2–3 sentences with a specific example.

例: It depends: I usually scan or skim when I’m preparing for an exam to review many topics quickly. In contrast, I use detailed reading for difficult chapters or technical material when I need to fully understand concepts.

× Umm actually I'm not a reading guy but sometimes whenever I get a free time I usually read the novels and book and make me more known about the different types of topic.

✓ Umm actually I'm not a reading person but sometimes when I get free time I usually read novels and books to learn more about different topics.

Article errors: 'a reading guy' is informal and 'a' incorrect with uncountable/abstract; use 'a reading person' or 'a reader'. 'a free time' should be 'free time' (no article). 'the novels and book' should be plural without 'the' and consistent: 'novels and books'. 'make me more known about' is ungrammatical; use 'to learn more about'. Also simplify 'whenever' to 'when' for naturalness. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, match countability, and use infinitive 'to learn'.

× Like uh, what is going on to the world?

✓ Like uh, what's going on in the world?

Preposition error: use 'in the world' to ask about global events. 'to the world' is incorrect here. Also contract 'what is' to 'what's' for spoken style. Suggestion: use 'in' for locations/situations happening within the world.

× I love to read on the paper because it's helps me to remind for a longer period and like whenever I focus something I can usually look at the book or the copy.

✓ I love to read on paper because it helps me remember for a longer period, and when I concentrate I can usually look at the book or my notes.

Article errors and pronoun/verb form: 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' (no article). 'it's helps' is incorrect: 'it helps'. 'to remind' should be 'remember'. 'whenever I focus something' is incorrect preposition and structure; use 'when I concentrate' or 'when I focus on something'. 'the copy' is unclear; 'my notes' is more natural. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, correct verb forms, and use appropriate phrases for 'concentrate' and 'notes'.

× When I have to go for exam or interview or any kind of things which is necessary for the starting at that time I need to read carefully and remember for the certain period of time and if I love to read the novels or comics then I don't have to remember it.

✓ When I have to take an exam or go to an interview, or for any important situation, I need to read carefully and memorize for a certain period of time; but if I read novels or comics, I don't have to memorize them.

Multiple issues: verb forms and sentence structure. 'go for exam' should be 'take an exam' or 'go to an exam'; 'which is necessary for the starting' is incorrect structure, replaced with 'for any important situation'. 'remember for the certain period' is awkward—use 'memorize for a certain period of time'. 'if I love to read the novels or comics' should be 'if I read novels or comics' and 'I don't have to remember it' should be 'I don't have to memorize them' (plural). Suggestion: use correct verbs 'take', 'go to', 'memorize', ensure subject-verb agreement and plural consistency.

× It depends on the situations when I have to do or give certain exam or for the interview I do a scanning and because it helps me to remember all lots of things in a short period of time.

✓ It depends on the situation: when I have to take an exam or attend an interview, I do scanning because it helps me remember many things in a short period of time.

Sentence structure and word choice errors: 'depends on the situations' should be 'depends on the situation' or 'depends on the circumstances'. 'do or give certain exam' is incorrect; use 'take an exam' or 'attend an interview'. 'I do a scanning' is unnatural; 'I scan' or 'I skim/scan the material'. 'all lots of things' is redundant; use 'many things'. Remove 'because' repetition and streamline sentence. Suggestion: simplify structure, use correct collocations 'take an exam', 'attend an interview', and use 'scan' or 'skim'.