Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer communicates a positive attitude but has grammatical errors, awkward phrasing and redundancy. Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences: give a topic sentence that directly answers the question, then one supporting detail. Use correct grammar and natural collocations (e.g., "I'm quite fond of reading" and "before going to sleep"). Avoid invented phrases like "make it a heartbeat."

例: Yes, I'm quite fond of reading. I find it a great way to expand my horizons and relax, so I usually read a few pages before going to sleep.

提案: The idea is clear (preference for paper but practical use of screens), but the answer contains many incorrect phrases and unclear clauses. State your preference in one sentence, then give a contrasting reason using linking words such as "however" or "but." Use natural expressions about eye strain and portability.

例: I prefer paper books because I like the physical feel and they are easier on my eyes. However, I often use a screen when I'm traveling because it's more convenient and I can carry many books at once.

提案: Your response tries to contrast careful reading with skimming, but the sentence is full of unintelligible words and repetition. Answer directly: name situations that require careful reading and situations when you skim, and use linking words like "when" or "but". Provide specific examples (e.g., contracts, study materials vs. social media posts) to make it concrete.

例: I need to read carefully when I'm studying or checking important documents such as contracts to avoid mistakes. But for blogs or social media I usually skim to pick up the main idea quickly.

提案: You convey the right contrast but the answer is full of wrong words and awkward structure. Start with a clear topic sentence: it depends on purpose. Then give two concise examples using linking words such as "for example" or "however." Use accurate vocabulary: "detailed reading" for fiction, "scanning" for seeking facts.

例: It depends on my purpose. For example, I read fiction in detail to enjoy the language and plot, but I scan articles quickly when I only need a specific fact.

× Yes, I'm quite fond of reading is a wonderful way to expand my horizons and unwind after a busy day.

✓ Yes, I'm quite fond of reading; it is a wonderful way to expand my horizons and unwind after a busy day.

This sentence incorrectly combines two clauses without proper conjunction or punctuation, causing a run-on. Correct by separating into two independent clauses with a semicolon or by using 'and' or a period. Ensure each clause has its own subject and verb. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I usually make it a heartbeat to read a few pages of a book before sleeping.

✓ I usually make it a habit to read a few pages of a book before sleeping.

The phrase 'make it a heartbeat' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'make it a habit.' This is a word choice error affecting sentence meaning and idiomatic usage. Replace with the correct idiom and keep verb tense consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I usually lean towards paper books because of the physical feel and they don't shrink my eyes.

✓ I usually lean towards paper books because of the physical feel, and they don't strain my eyes.

The original has incorrect vocabulary 'shrink' for 'strain' and lacks proper punctuation to join clauses. Use 'strain' for eye discomfort and add a comma before the coordinating conjunction joining two independent clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 16

× My eyes however read it on a string, a undeniable more practical when I'm on the go.

✓ However, I usually read on a screen; it is undeniably more practical when I'm on the go.

Multiple errors: 'read it on a string' should be 'read on a screen'; word order and article use are wrong ('a undeniable' should be 'undeniably' or 'an undeniably'); sentence is a run-on. Reorder and correct adverb/adjective use, and separate clauses correctly. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I read Kevin Lee once learning or checking contacts to avoid error errors errors.

✓ I read quickly when learning or checking contacts to avoid errors.

The original is nonsensical and repeats words. 'Read' in present sense of habitual action should be 'read quickly' (pronunciation same as past but context indicates present), and 'error errors errors' should be 'errors.' Use adverb 'quickly' to describe how reading is done and pluralize 'errors.' Grammar problem type ID: 5

× However, I usually just skim through Li lifestyle blocks or social media fixture to get the main idea.

✓ However, I usually just skim through lifestyle blogs or social media feeds to get the main idea.

Incorrect nouns 'Li lifestyle blocks' and 'social media fixture' seem to be wrong words. Correct common collocations: 'lifestyle blogs' and 'social media feeds.' 'Skim through' is appropriate; ensure plural forms match. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× It depends on my gold.

✓ It depends on my goal.

Word 'gold' is a typo or wrong choice; intended word is 'goal.' Correcting this changes meaning appropriately. Keep sentence structure simple and present tense. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I refer the thought reading when enjoying fiction to catch every flood point it, but if I'm looking for a specific fact, quickly scanning edge much more effective.

✓ I prefer thorough reading when enjoying fiction to catch every plot point, but if I'm looking for a specific fact, quickly scanning is much more effective.

Multiple mistakes: 'refer the thought reading' should be 'prefer thorough reading'; 'flood point' should be 'plot point'; extraneous 'it' removed; 'quickly scanning edge' incorrect—use 'quickly scanning is' and include 'much more effective.' These corrections fix word choice, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 26}]}}.} <-- INVALID JSON TRAILING ADDITION PLEASE IGNORE.FINITION.