Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Reduce filler words and make sentences more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add one or two specific supporting details (what you read, how it relaxes you). Use linking words like “also” or “for example” appropriately.

例: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me relax after a busy day, and I also learn new things — for example, I often read short non-fiction articles about technology to keep up with new developments.

提案: Avoid hesitations and repeat words. Give a clear reason and one brief example to support your preference. Use linking words like “because” and “for example.”

例: I prefer reading on paper because it’s gentler on my eyes and helps me focus. For example, when I study, I annotate printed pages which makes it easier to remember key points.

提案: Correct small grammar slips and be more specific about types of texts. Use a contrast linking phrase such as “whereas” or “but” to make the difference clear. Give one focused example for each case.

例: I read carefully when the text is important, such as instruction manuals or legal documents, because mistakes can be costly. By contrast, I only skim casual posts on social media or short news headlines when I just want the main idea.

提案: Fix the word choice error (“eat” → “read”) and reduce fillers. Provide a short reason for each habit and use linking words like “however” or “when.”

例: Most of the time I scan texts to find key information quickly, because I often need facts fast. However, I read in detail when I’m learning a new topic, such as studying for an exam, so I can understand concepts fully.

× Definitely, I like reading UH because it helps me to stay relaxed and calm.

✓ Definitely, I like reading because it helps me to stay relaxed and calm.

The original sentence includes a filler 'UH' which is not a grammar error but should be removed for clarity. No pronoun error; keep pronouns consistent. Suggest removing fillers in speaking to make the sentence grammatically correct and fluent.

× Well, I prefer reading on paper because it feels, uh, easier on my mind and I clearly, uh, get all points.

✓ Well, I prefer reading on paper because it feels easier on my mind and I clearly get all the points.

Remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'points' because 'points' refers to specific ideas in the text; this fixes article usage as well. Suggest speaking without fillers and include 'the' when referring to identifiable items.

× I read carefully when it is something important like instructions, but I skim when it is just use or social media.

✓ I read carefully when it is something important like instructions, but I skim when it is just news or social media.

The word 'use' is incorrect in context; likely intended 'news'. This is a word choice/structure error. Replacing with 'news' makes the contrast clear. Also keep parallel structure: 'I read carefully... but I skim...'. Suggest choosing correct content words to match meaning.

× Well, most of the time I scan for key information, but I eat in detail when I am learning something new.

✓ Well, most of the time I scan for key information, but I read in detail when I am learning something new.

The verb 'eat' is incorrect and appears to be a slip; 'read' is the correct verb here. This is a lexical/pronoun-choice type error affecting sentence meaning. Suggest proofreading spoken responses or rehearsing to avoid slips; use 'read in detail' to contrast with 'scan'.