Reading— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is natural and direct, but it is very brief and could be improved by adding a specific example or reason to support your statement. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a linking phrase if you add details.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading in my free time, especially contemporary fiction, because it helps me relax and improves my vocabulary.

提案: The response addresses the question and gives reasons, but contains several vocabulary and grammar errors and ends abruptly. Improve accuracy (e.g., 'tactile', 'letters' → 'glare' or 'blue light'), correct verb forms, and finish the final clause. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' appropriately. Limit to 3–4 clear sentences.

例: I prefer reading on paper because the tactile feel and lack of screen glare make it easier to concentrate, especially for long texts. For example, when I'm studying I take notes on paper and remember information better, whereas screens often distract me with notifications.

提案: The answer is unclear and contains multiple errors in vocabulary and sentence structure. Clarify the meaning: say what types of information require careful reading (e.g., legal documents, study material) and what can be skimmed (e.g., casual messages). Use a topic sentence, then one or two supporting reasons with linking words like 'when' and 'but'.

例: I need to read carefully when the information is important, such as medical instructions or study materials, because mistakes could have serious consequences. By contrast, I don't read carefully when it's casual, like social media posts or short texts, since they don't require deep understanding.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammar and word-choice errors ('detailed reading' instead of 'detail ready'). Expand slightly: state your preference clearly and give a brief reason or example using linking words like 'because' or 'for instance'. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer detailed reading, especially when the information is important, because it helps me fully understand and remember key points. For instance, I read academic articles closely to note important arguments and data.

× I enjoy reading in my free time.

✓ I enjoy reading in my free time.

No grammar error requiring change according to the provided list; sentence is correct. Keep as is.

× I prefer reading on paper because the tactical feel and lack of screen letter make it easier to concentrate, especially for longer texts.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because the tactile feel and the absence of screens make it easier to concentrate, especially for longer texts.

Errors: 'tactical' is the wrong adjective; the correct word is 'tactile' (relating to touch). 'lack of screen letter' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'the absence of screens' or 'no screens' to convey lack of screen distractions. 'screen letter' is not a standard phrase. Suggest replacing incorrect adjectives/phrases with correct ones and add an article 'the' to 'absence' for clarity.

× For example, when I'm studying, I find paper helps me a note and remember information better, whereas the screens can be distracting due to notification and.

✓ For example, when I'm studying, I find paper helps me take notes and remember information better, whereas screens can be distracting due to notifications and other interruptions.

Errors: 'helps me a note' is incorrect verb+object structure; after 'helps me' use base verb 'take' plus plural noun 'notes' (take notes). 'the screens' can be simply 'screens' unless referring to specific screens. 'notification and' is incomplete; it should be 'notifications and other interruptions'. Also ensure 'take notes' uses correct verb form and plural noun.

× I read carefully when the information is about the healthy award but is about the phone is no, I don't.

✓ I read carefully when the information is about health or awards, but I do not when it concerns my phone.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Problems include incorrect phrasing ('the healthy award'), mixed clauses, and incorrect negation. I interpreted intended meaning as reading carefully for topics like health or awards, but not for phone-related content. Restructure into two clear clauses joined by 'but' and use proper nouns ('health' not 'healthy') and correct negation 'I do not'.

× I prefer detail ready, especially when it's important information.

✓ I prefer detailed reading, especially when it's important information.

Errors: 'detail ready' is incorrect word order and wrong form. Use adjective 'detailed' to modify 'reading' (noun) to express preference for careful, thorough reading. Maintain noun 'reading' rather than 'ready' which is a different word.