Walking— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 您需要改进发音、语法和连贯性。注意动词时态和主谓一致（例如“I walk”而不是“I work”），避免重复填充词（如“umm”、“and and”）。保持一句话作为主题句，随后用一至两句具体细节支持。可以用连接词如“because”或“so”来使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I usually go jogging three times a week because it helps me relieve stress and stay fit.

提案: 需要改进时态和名词单复数形式（过去习惯用过去时），并增加具体细节。避免语法错误如“when I was child”，应说“when I was a child”。使用连接词如“after”来衔接事件。

例: Yes, when I was a child I often went for walks after dinner with my family, and we usually strolled around the neighbourhood for about half an hour.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误和重复（“working parks”应为“walking in parks”或“parks are”），句子结构混乱。应直接给出观点并用一至两条具体理由支持，使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。注意冠词和复数形式。

例: People like walking in parks because they offer fresh air and pleasant scenery. For example, in Chongqing many parks are close to residential areas, so people can relax easily.

提案: 需改进条件句时态和用词（应使用虚拟语气或条件句过去式/将来式），并避免不明词组（“under Australia”不正确）。明确地点并说明原因，使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

例: If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would go to Australia because of its diverse landscapes and beautiful coastal trails.

提案: 需要使用正确的过去时（例如“last Sunday I went”），并避免重复词汇（“I I”、“really like like”）。提供更具体细节如地点、活动和感受，使用连接词如“and”或“so”。注意不可数名词的正确形式（“fresh air”）。

例: Last Sunday I went for a walk in the nearby mountains with my family, and we enjoyed the fresh air and beautiful views in the forest.

× Yes, I almost work every day.

✓ Yes, I almost walk every day.

原句用詞不當。題目在問“Do you walk a lot?”學生回答時應使用動詞walk（走路/散步）。原句使用work（工作）與問題不符，且語意錯誤。建議根據問題使用動詞walk或go for a walk來回答，例如："I almost walk every day." 或 "I almost go for a walk every day."

× Umm I like go out for jogging and and it may it will make me feel relaxed.

✓ Umm I like going out for jogging and it makes me feel relaxed.

動詞like後跟動名詞或不定式皆可，但口語常用動名詞going out。原句有多餘助動詞"may it will"且時態與主詞不一致，應使用單一表達現在習慣的現在時態"it makes"。建議："I like going out for a jog, and it makes me feel relaxed."

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ (No correction needed)

此為考官句，文法正確，無需更改。

× Yes, when I was child I like to go out for walk when I have finished dinner with my families.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I liked to go out for a walk after I had finished dinner with my family.

多處時態與數量錯誤：描述過去習慣應用過去式liked；"when I was child"應為"when I was a child"；"go out for walk"需加冠詞"a walk"；"when I have finished"描述過去完成應用過去完成式"had finished"；"with my families"應為單數family表示家庭成員。建議按時序使用正確過去時和冠詞。

× I think working parks it's a good idea for relax and I think parks always have a good views and and like like in Chongqing, there are a lot of parks near and.

✓ I think walking in parks is a good way to relax. I think parks always have good views. For example, in Chongqing there are a lot of parks nearby.

原句結構混亂，多處錯誤："working parks"錯用work/working，應為"walking in parks"表達在公園散步；"it's a good idea for relax"應為"a good way to relax"或"good for relaxation"；"have a good views"冠詞與單複數錯誤，應為"have good views"；結尾"near and"不完整，應改為"nearby"或"near me"。建議分成幾句表達，注意動名詞用法、可數名詞單複數與位置副詞。

× And if I have a chance to take a long walk, I think I will go to under Australia. I think it's a good place for working.

✓ If I had a chance to take a long walk, I would go to Australia. I think it's a good place for walking.

假設與語氣不一致：題為虛擬假設（與現在情況相反）應用過去式條件If I had...，主句用would；原句"go to under Australia"語序與介詞錯誤，應為"go to Australia"；"for working"應為"for walking"表示散步。建議掌握條件句第一/二類的時態搭配並使用正確介詞及動詞形式。

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ (No correction needed)

考官句，文法正確，無需修改。

× I last Sunday I go out for work and in the in the mountain nearby with my family.

✓ Last Sunday I went out for a walk in the nearby mountain with my family.

時態和詞語錯誤：描述過去經歷應使用過去式went，而非go；"for work"用詞不當，應為"for a walk"；"in the in the mountain"有重複且冠詞使用可簡化為"in the nearby mountain"或更自然的"in a nearby mountain"或"on a nearby mountain"。建議使用正確過去式，檢查多餘重複詞。

× I I like really like fresh airs in the forest.

✓ I really like the fresh air in the forest.

錯誤重複與名詞單複數錯誤："I I like really like"有重複，應刪去多餘部分；"fresh airs"不可數名詞air通常用單數，且前需冠詞"the fresh air"或無冠詞視語境。建議刪除重複，將air視為不可數名詞並使用適當冠詞。