Walking— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 在回答中要更直接、简洁地回应问题，先给出主题句（例如：Yes, I walk a lot），然后用一到两句具体且连贯的支持细节说明原因。注意语法（时态、主谓一致）和词汇选择，避免不相关信息（例如“extra ship”不清楚）。可用连接词如 because 或 so 来组织句子。

例: Yes, I walk a lot. Living in Hong Kong, taxis are expensive, so I often choose to walk to save money and get exercise.

提案: 先用明确的主题句回答（Yes/No），然后用一两句具体细节说明，例如地点、频率和与谁一起。注意时态要一致（past tense），修正语序和冠词（a/an/the），并用适当连接词如 after 或 because。避免含糊词语和拼写错误。

例: Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child. There was a park near my home, and after primary school I usually met my friends there to play and walk together.

提案: 回答应先给出概括性理由（例如: Because parks are relaxing），然后用一到两点具体支持（设施、适合家庭活动等）。注意人称和代词使用（not 'his park'），句子要简洁并使用连接词 like because, for example。避免重复和不连贯的表达。

例: People like to walk in parks because they are peaceful and have many facilities. For example, parks offer paths for exercise and playgrounds where children can play while parents relax.

提案: 回答要先明确地点或类型（e.g. a coastal path, countryside），然后简要说明原因。使用正确的虚拟语气（If I had the chance / I would like to...）并避免模糊或重复表达。提供具体细节（what you expect to see or feel）。

例: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk along a coastal path. I enjoy seeing new scenery and hearing the sea, and walking there would let me explore places I have never seen before.

提案: 使用过去时回答最近一次（e.g. I went to the beach last weekend）或说明将要做的计划时用将来时。先给直接回答，然后加一两句具体细节（who you went with, what you did）。避免混淆时态和不完整的句子。

例: Last weekend I went for a walk on the beach with a friend. We relaxed, had a drink, and enjoyed the sea breeze.

× Yes, I quite sure that in Hong Kong must work a lot because Hong Kong called the taxi or Uber is very expensive and if you work you can feel more healthy and no need to pay the extra ship.

✓ Yes, I'm quite sure that in Hong Kong people must work a lot because taxis or Ubers are very expensive, and if you work you can feel healthier and don't need to pay extra fares.

句子需要使用現在時和適當的助動詞/be動詞：原句缺少be動詞（I quite sure → I'm quite sure）；must後面不直接接描述原因的人態，應說people must work a lot。複數名詞和可數名詞需用複數（taxi or Uber → taxis or Ubers / Uber），be動詞與主語一致（is very expensive → are very expensive）。形容詞比較級應為healthier。最後一部分用詞不當（extra ship→extra fares）。建議：注意主語與be動詞搭配、名詞單複數和比較級用法。

× Yes, I often went outside to have a walk when I was child because near my home have a park and here I always meet the friend after the primary school and we will meet the time together and go there pay.

✓ Yes, I often went outside for a walk when I was a child because there was a park near my home. I always met my friends after primary school and we would spend time together and go there to play.

敘述過去習慣要用過去時：was child→was a child; 原句缺少there be結構（near my home have a park→there was a park near my home）。動詞時態和主謂一致也需修正（meet→met；the friend→my friends；will meet the time together→would spend time together；pay→play）。建議：說過去的事情時統一使用過去時，注意常用短語（for a walk；spend time；play）。

× I think his park has many facilities for some people to do exercise and or is the child need to pay with their friends and their parents don't have anything to do so they just walk around and do some exercise to wait for their children.

✓ I think the park has many facilities for people to exercise. Also, children can play there with their friends, and if their parents have nothing to do, they just walk around and exercise while waiting for their children.

代詞使用混亂（his park→the park；is the child→children；their parents…their children 需一致）。句子結構冗長且連詞使用不當（and or）。建議：使用正確的代詞（the park、children、their），把句子分成兩句或使用清晰的連接詞，以保持語義清楚。

× If I have a chance I would like to go travel because travel must work a long day and travel can seem many difference pace and something never see that before. I like to work there is because we don't know.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to travel because travel often involves long days, and you can see many different places and things you have never seen before. I like traveling because of the unknown experiences.

第一句是與現在事實相反的假設，應用過去式條件（If I had the chance）搭配would。動詞搭配及詞彙需修正（go travel→travel；must work a long day→often involves long days；seem many difference pace→see many different places；something never see that before→things you have never seen before）。第二句結構不通（I like to work there is because we don't know）需改為I like traveling because of the unknown experiences。建議：注意條件句時態（If + past, would + base），修正動詞搭配與詞彙，並使句子語義連貫。

× Maybe we finish this exam I will go to beach to have a walk because I already meet my friend and she waiting for me which is good beach to relax and chill and drink something there.

✓ Maybe after we finish this exam I will go to the beach for a walk because I already met my friend and she is waiting for me. It is a good beach to relax, chill, and have a drink there.

時間狀語從句需用完成時或正確連接（Maybe after we finish this exam → Maybe after we finish this exam / 或 Maybe when we finish this exam；已發生的動作用過去式（I already meet→I already met）；等待用現在進行式表示安排（she waiting→she is waiting）。名詞需加冠詞（go to beach→go to the beach）。最後列舉動作時要用並列動詞（relax, chill, and have a drink）。建議：注意時間連接詞和時態一致性（完成/進行/過去），使用適當冠詞和並列結構。